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| Maevainwen Adaniel | Aug 10 2011, 01:25 AM Post #1 |
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Master of the Rings
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If I promise not to kill you can I have a hug? My favorite thing about eating gummy bears is that they don't fight back when bite their heads off Teddies don't hug back, but sometimes they're all you have... Joker: You know, there are three kinds of people in this world. The optomistic that find the glass half full, and the pessimistic that see it as half empty. Then there's the paranoid, and they just think someone's drinking out of their glass. Corrigan: Huh, then which one are you? Joker: I'm the one who knocks the glass over. ~ The Joker Blogs. | |
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| Amarth | Aug 10 2011, 08:40 AM Post #2 |
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Rising Again
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Hi Mae! Long time no see!
The title and author's name already sound..."promising". Author's implicated age: early teens. Wannabe goth or Hellboy fan? Or trouble-maker and proud of it?
Like...movie and teenage hormones?
Oh dear. This screams "past incarnation" plot device.
I think it's author swooning over "Ai! Ai! A Balrog has come!" scene. Though why Legolas fangirls swoon over their lust object squealing like a little girl is beyond me. Guess they are that desperate for his lines.INF would like to add that in the First Age, Elves didn't cry about Balrogs, they charged them.
Well, she does. Obsessing about his hair and every single line, regardless of context...a sign of a true fangirl. At least it was short. *Hands over slivovitz*. Hope you manage to steal the bagpipes from Uruk-Hai. |
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| Maevainwen Adaniel | Aug 10 2011, 09:29 AM Post #3 |
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Master of the Rings
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Heyyy Amarth!! I know, it's been ages hasn't it! I've been so busy but I was inspired to spork that randomly and decided it was an excuse to post a few times ![]()
Urgh, I know. haha, I thought the same! I hate wannabe goths...they're a discrace to all true goths <_< And not all goths write crappy poetry, I'm a goth and I don't.
I never got that either. Besides, movie Legolas is a bit of a wimp, ain't he.
Oh aye, thank the Vala for small mercies. Ooh, thankee! *hugs the slivovitz* I'm trying...he's rather attached to them though *scowls* Thanks for the review
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If I promise not to kill you can I have a hug? My favorite thing about eating gummy bears is that they don't fight back when bite their heads off Teddies don't hug back, but sometimes they're all you have... Joker: You know, there are three kinds of people in this world. The optomistic that find the glass half full, and the pessimistic that see it as half empty. Then there's the paranoid, and they just think someone's drinking out of their glass. Corrigan: Huh, then which one are you? Joker: I'm the one who knocks the glass over. ~ The Joker Blogs. | |
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| MackenzieW | Aug 11 2011, 10:34 PM Post #4 |
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I think your riffs were longer than the actual poem. Of course they were more entertaining... Just one thing:
It's hard to correct punctuation in a poem. Those rules get thrown out the window when it comes to poetry. Probably why I hate writing it. Good to see you back! |
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| Refia | Aug 12 2011, 11:12 AM Post #5 |
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Paying Tribute to the Past
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MAE! ![]()
Erestor, you're a big old softie. ![]()
Good point. ![]()
For our sakes, I hope it's the PPC. Nice and short, Mae. I liked it. It's good to hear of you again!
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[align=center]Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God? [/align] | |
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| Maevainwen Adaniel | Aug 15 2011, 07:05 AM Post #6 |
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Master of the Rings
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Mac:
I know they were, but the poem was just crying out to be sporked
Aye, but this wasn't even written like a poem, it was written like prose ![]()
Good to be back Refie: REFIE!! *tackleglomps*
Mae: Isn't he? Erestor: *grumbles*
Oh, I'm longing for it to be the PPC Why thankee! It's good to post again, I've missed you all so much
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If I promise not to kill you can I have a hug? My favorite thing about eating gummy bears is that they don't fight back when bite their heads off Teddies don't hug back, but sometimes they're all you have... Joker: You know, there are three kinds of people in this world. The optomistic that find the glass half full, and the pessimistic that see it as half empty. Then there's the paranoid, and they just think someone's drinking out of their glass. Corrigan: Huh, then which one are you? Joker: I'm the one who knocks the glass over. ~ The Joker Blogs. | |
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| Refia | Aug 15 2011, 02:00 PM Post #7 |
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Paying Tribute to the Past
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Does this mean you'll be online more? *hopeful*
Hi Mae, always nice to see you! ![]()
Don't be grumpy, Erestor, you know it's true. ![]()
We missed you too, Mae! How do you like our new forumlook? |
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[align=center]Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God? [/align] | |
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| Maevainwen Adaniel | Aug 15 2011, 11:25 PM Post #8 |
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Master of the Rings
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Well, seeing as the Parentals are going to Hawaii in a fortnight...
Awww, I feel loved ![]()
Erestor: Isn't an Elf Lord allowed some dignity around here? :rolleyes: Mae: Nope
The forum looks AWESOME!! I literally squeed when I noticed it :lol: |
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If I promise not to kill you can I have a hug? My favorite thing about eating gummy bears is that they don't fight back when bite their heads off Teddies don't hug back, but sometimes they're all you have... Joker: You know, there are three kinds of people in this world. The optomistic that find the glass half full, and the pessimistic that see it as half empty. Then there's the paranoid, and they just think someone's drinking out of their glass. Corrigan: Huh, then which one are you? Joker: I'm the one who knocks the glass over. ~ The Joker Blogs. | |
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| Refia | Aug 15 2011, 11:34 PM Post #9 |
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Paying Tribute to the Past
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Fantastic! ![]()
You should, because you are. ![]()
Glad you like it! As you may notice, it's still bound to some minor changes. No change is perfect right away. |
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Guess they are that desperate for his lines.









*normal voice* Do I have to?
*bottom lip trembles*
*hugs Erestor and sits back down* 
3:13 PM Jul 11