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| icefire_lioness | Sep 3 2008, 02:34 PM Post #1 |
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Ok, so I'm stuck in the middle of a story (it's the ninth chapter) and I just don't know where to go. I've kind of backed myself into a corner, because I need this story to develop a bit more, but I've already got them at a sort of 'pivotal point' (as much as this story can HAVE a pivotal point. Gr.) The thing is, I'm really sick of this story - I'm not proud of it until it gets to much later chapters, but it's my biggest reviewage bringer inner, and I don't want to disappoint readers by disappearing off the face of the earth AGAIN (it took me nearly four months to update my last chapter, which just made me feel even worse about it). Anyway, enough moaning. So the story is a bit of a cliche (another reason I don't love it so much) - it's a Dramione (quel suprise!) and the basic storyline so far goes thus: In the prequel (a one shot, called 'The Photo'), Draco...well, it doesn't really matter what Draco does here. Suffice it to say, Hermione wants revenge. Which is where the sequel comes in. (Sweet Revenge (M), and gosh, yes I know. What a horrid, horrid title. *squick*) Revengey stuff for the first few chapters - basically just going back and forth as Hermione gets back at Draco, who gets back at her, who gets back at...you get the picture. In the second last chapter, Hermione steals Draco's diary and reads it. Thing is, I wanted that to be quite a big part of the story, but he took it back without my permission AND kissed Hermione WAY before he was meant to! The horror! That silly boy just won't do what he's told. Hermione doesn't really, either. Anway, so if you could maybe think of some way to include the diary again? Here's why it has to be important, ok? Just after Hermione kisses him ('diversionary tactics' :P)
THEN, in the next chapter they get caught out by McGonagall, whereupon Draco spills a little secret, which Hermione finds utterly hilarious. She tells him that they are to have 'a chat' about it. WHICH MEANS I HAVE TO WRITE 'THE CHAT'. And I have no idea what to do. Anway, so hopefully that was what I was meant to do, and I'm not just blathering on for nothing. Please halp me, oh marvellous ones! :P |
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