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Ultimate Summary Challange; heeelpp!
Topic Started: Sep 6 2008, 08:16 PM (300 Views)
Enyu
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Hey all! Here again :P

Okay, I resently signed up for Jessi`s Ultimate Summary Challange. I love what she has given me, but I am having a bit of a hard time getting started.

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Genre of Story Romance
Mood of prompt Romantic :P
General or Specific Prompt? What ever you can think of
If General - Give a briefing of the characters (male/female? old/young?) Teddy/Victoire -- young
If Specific - give the names of the characters and the situation they are going through: Teddy and Victoire meet after having broken up a few months ago. Here is the summary, in 2nd person from Teddy`s POV.
You had no intention to run into her; especially not after your excruciating break up last autumn. But, there she was, with her stupid, golden blond hair and that ridiculous look of contempt on her face. You wanted to give her a good scold for the hell she put you through, but that didn't stop you from reaching your hand to her and moving a sliver of hair from her face.
Anything else that might be helpful? Nothing much. I just want a prompt or two for this. Also, opinions on whether it should be a one-shot or a short story would be appreciated.


Thanks!

Cheers,
Drew
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Squee, Teddoire! :jessi: I can't write it anymore (after spending six months obsessed with it :D) but I hope I can help ^_^

Well... the first question is why did they break up in the first place? The summary suggests that it was Victoire's fault, so what was it? She's Fleur's daughter, so maybe it was just that she was too high maintenance for Teddy to handle? Victoire could be characterized to be a spoiled brat, and Teddy feels like he shouldn't have gotten involved with her, and only had done so because everyone expected him to. So Teddy dumped her for being too much - one of those clingy, demanding girlfriends? - which admittedly seems kind of shallow but... :alli:

As for why they come back together... well, I love making one of them leave for career reasons. Maybe Victoire got a job in France, or Teddy was off at Auror training or something (lol, that's what happened in my Teddoire novella :P), and they finally come back... how about during the holidays? And something happens (no idea what)... and then... hmm. You can take it from there, but the question is, do you want them to get back together?

That's about as much as I can think of. Hope it helps :huggle:
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