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Epoch Tales Query Attempt
Topic Started: Sep 3 2013, 03:20 PM (102 Views)
Jessi
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This is a first attempt at writing a query letter for my story, Epoch Tales. Any thoughts?

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When a mysterious man named William enters Gretchen McEntire’s normal, cozy life, she uncovers her extraordinary ability to travel through time and her destiny to save a man who is nicknamed through time as The Peacemaker. Gretchen is forced to make a choice between the comfort of everything she knows and the power that is gifted to her through a timeless organization known as The Archive. One false step, however, and Gretchen could face the only consequence that her people know: death.

The Peacemaker was supposed to be a compassionate man who united the world at a time of war, but when Gretchen meets him at seventeen years old, he’s an angry boy seeking the destruction of his world. When William goes missing and Gretchen is left to her own devices to change The Peacemaker’s outlook on life, she breaks a cardinal rule of The Archive and finds her life in danger throughout time.

Worse than outrunning The Archive is the knowledge that Gretchen has destroyed the world’s hope for peace when she finds herself falling in love with The Peacemaker. She breaks rule number two, and travels backward in time to settle the score of her heart and set the world back on its path to peace. Gretchen is forced to make choices that will change the future and in her plight to save the world, she crosses the dangerous, merciless Archive. Her future and her past will never be the same.

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