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| Just a couple of poems.; poems from: red137 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 24 2007, 06:57 PM (101 Views) | |
| Post #1 Oct 24 2007, 06:57 PM | red137 |
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I really hope is alright to post these here, if it's not alright to post these here, please contact be before you delete them. HERE ARE SOME POEMS Poem below As darkness falls, The red moon calls to thee. The shadows once hidden, Now reawaken,from deepest sleep. Like wildfire chaos speeds. As dark wings consume, Rage of mankind. Dreams once visions, now come true. Deepest shadows,rewaken,old lives. The seed as been planted. Doom is here unforsaken, thou yet to awaken. Look in to eyes,of those yet to awaken. What you'll see no one knows, but one thing for sure, that which they hold is most dear. But when looking into the eyes of ones self you will see it's destiny..... Poem below Two hearts, -destroy- Yet one mind. -redeem- Two desires, -lust- Yet one need. -love- Two sides, -hell- Yet one home. -heaven- Poem Below bonded, my heart l How far have i fallen divided, my mind l from days long past united, my soul l shatter my core for all of time l its a heart of glass |
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| i am the wanderer of the chaotic magics of my past life hopeing to be freed once again from the chains of the internal plains of exsistance in the depths of hell! | |
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| Post #2 Oct 24 2007, 07:54 PM | Flak |
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It is Dark. Symbolism seems to be a little absent, but that is forgiven. Also, a bit of tedium, but -again- it was only minor. You may also consider breaking the verses into smaller, friendlier sections. But, otherwise, I sapped some entertainment from them. Well done. -Flak |
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| Post #3 Oct 24 2007, 08:25 PM | red137 |
| Well you do know how my grammar isn't that good right?, also I didn't have to time to re-edit them because i'm too busy with other problems. |
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| i am the wanderer of the chaotic magics of my past life hopeing to be freed once again from the chains of the internal plains of exsistance in the depths of hell! | |
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