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Off-topic thread!; Just post whatever
Topic Started: Jun 10 2011, 10:59 PM (107,682 Views)
Brayzure
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The Analytic Commander

No other comments on my first chapter? bah humbug.
 
darty
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Insane ShellCore
I haven't read it yet.
Edited by darty, Jun 4 2012, 02:46 PM.
 
darty
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Insane ShellCore
I finished reading, and I really like it, its clear and easy to understand, and feels realistic and possible, and I also like the way it's formatted and presented, but I can't say that the Kiljarum don't remind me of the aliens in SF:DG.
Edited by darty, Jun 4 2012, 03:07 PM.
 
Brayzure
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The Analytic Commander

SF: DG?

EDIT: I'm thinking of changing Kiljarum to Endari or something similar.
Edited by Brayzure, Jun 4 2012, 06:37 PM.
 
darty
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Insane ShellCore
Starfighter Disputed galaxy.
 
nedben
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Eternal Commander
What's the basic plot outline for chapter 2?
 
Yamamoto
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Semi-Core
Hey infect and rocky. If you have backup accounts take this!

And this! :D :D :D
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Edited by Yamamoto, Jun 4 2012, 08:34 PM.
 
Ion496
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No, Yama. No.
 
darty
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Insane ShellCore
rockboy is gone.
 
Deceleration
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Coreling Conquerer

That was utterly random and uncalled for. I mean, we can insult rockboy since he got himself permabanned, but Infect amuses us enough to keep him around some of the time so we don't want to scare him off.

As for Synergy's story, I thought it was pretty good. I am hardly qualified to analyze the theme, mood, tone, and literary allusions of the work since I'm not an English teacher. But I can appreciate a good story when I read one.
 
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