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From Met U. with Love; A multi-chapter fic
Topic Started: Mon Aug 1, 2005 8:02 pm (3,300 Views)
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I'm sorry Carrie, I didn't mean to make you cry :grouphug: If only I had a pic of John to give you, I know you'd perk right up! *goes off to google John*
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What can I say ... I am easy to cheer up!
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found one! hope this works, this is my first time posting a photo that I'm not quoteing from another person, hope this works (wait, didn't I already put that, I'll just put the pic on here and hope it works.)


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IT WORKED! :bugeyes: pretty yummy huh?
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It worked!! :thud:
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Mutts are dogs that aren't any peticular kind right (like they aren't collie, or St. Bernard. or anything like that, they have so many kinds of dogs in them that it's impossible to tell what kind of dog they have in then right?

well if that's true, is it possible for horses to be like that (have so many types of horses in them that you can't tell what they are)

and it does have to do with the story!
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Are we down on the farm? :D

I always thought a dog of mixed breeding was called a mongrel. I think that mut is just a generally derogatory name for a dog.

Regarding horses I just thought that they were called cross breeds, but then there might be another term.

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I know nothing about horses which is why I asked you guys (or girls) I'l use the infor you gave me Carrie! thanks!
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You're welcome - I'm always happy to help.

However, it would probably be worthwhile to double check. I am fairly sure about the dogs, but (like I said) horses could have a more generic term for crossbreeds.

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I've always heard "mutt" used to mean mixed-breed, same as "mongrel." I have no idea about the horses, though! :D
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ok, update, I may be able to post the next chapter before I go to camp (no I'm not trying to make you insane with joy Carrie) but it depends on how soon I get it back from being edited.
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No pressure!

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I have a nice little cliffhanger to leave you at too! :evil2: :evil3:
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Ok here's the first part of Chapter four! hope you enjoy it! and a big thank you to Snarky for editing all the chapters so far!

Chapter four: Jon and Teri talk
After nearly a week of wondering what to say during dinner Jonathan finally arrived at Martha’s dorm “Does a Martha Clark live here?” he asked the blond who opened the door.

“Yes, you must be Jonathan, I’m Teri, Martha’s room-mate” the blond stepped out of the way to let Jonathan in the dorm “Martha’s nearly done, she’ll be just a few more minutes.”

“Well, the dorm mother said I could only be up here for a minute, so I better wait outside Jonathan started to leave.

"I’ll come too” Teri said, grabbed her coat off the back of a kitchen chair and yelled “Martha! Blondie’s here! I’m going to wait outside with him!”

Martha gasped, her face in the mirror registering shock and embarrassment at the same time. I am going to kill Teri was the only thought running through her mind.

Jonathan chuckled as he exited the dorm “Blondie?” he questioned Teri once outside “Did Martha give me that nickname?”

“I did.” Teri admitted “Martha told me you had blond hair, so I started referring to you as Blondie.”

“I like it.” Jonathan laughed.

Teri turned to face Jonathan, “Do you love Martha?” she suddenly asked

Jonathan was taken back a bit by her forwardness but managed to stammer an answer, “I car about her a great deal, she’s a very nice woman who I’d like to get to know better.”

Teri nodded surprised by his answer, “So you have no intention of breaking Martha’s heart?” She asked

Jonathan looked surprised. “No, I don’t” he said

“Good, because if you do hurt her, I’ll get my revenge.” Teri said “Martha and I are practically sisters, if something hurts her, it hurts me got it?” she asked

“Yeah” Jonathan nodded.

"There you two are!” Martha said from behind Jonathan.

Jonathan turned around and had to re-position his feet to keep from staggering, she looked beautiful; it wasn’t because she was wearing anything expensive, far from it, she was wearing a new pair of jeans and a nice T-shirt, but it looked great on her.

“You look really nice” the words came spilling out before he could stop them.

Martha blushed “Thank you Jonathan” she said.

“Your welcome,” he said, “Are you ready?”

Martha nodded. “Yup,” she said, then she turned to Teri. “Teri, when I get back we are going to have a little talk, don’t go anywhere.”

“Good, me too.” he said then he turned beet red when he realized what he’d said, “Uhhh, I mean we should get going” he started walking to the truck “My truck is this way.” he said leading the way.

Martha followed him to a red truck. “Ooooo, like the color.” She teased.

“I had it painted red, especially for you” he teased right back as he opened to passenger door.

“Thank you.” she smiled as she got in and then he gently closed the door.

“I can tell you take good care of your truck” Martha said, trying to make conversation as the drove along.

"Uhhh yeah, just washed it yesterday” Jonathan said, keeping his eyes on the road.

Martha made small talk until they got to the restaurant.

“Wait.” Jonathan said as Martha started to get out. He got out and went around to her side and opened her door.

Martha blushed as she got out, “Thank you Jonathan,” she said.

“Your welcome, hope you don’t mind the restaurant.” Jonathan pointed to the restaurant Olive Garden.

“No, I love this restaurant.” Martha said.

“I hoped you’d like it” Jonathan said as he opened the door to the restaurant.

“Once they were seated Jonathan asked, “You said last week that you were a teacher’s aide in high school, what else did you do?”

“Oh, I was on Mock trial and debate, everything a good lawyer would take.” Martha’s curled lip showed her disgust at the prospective career.

“I was in football.” Jonathan said.

“I can tell.” Martha said, then she realized what she’d said and her eyes grew as big as dinner plates did I just say that? Her mind screamed at her.

“Thanks.” Jonathan smiled she’s probably just nervous, that or she really finds me cute YES! Then he changed the subject, “do you have any brothers or sisters?”

“No.” Martha said, glad about the subject change. “I’m an only child.”

“Me to.” Jonathan said.

“What kind of horses are Joker and Harrison?” Martha asked after a short silence.

“If they were dogs they’d be the equivalent of mongrels or mutts or what ever type of dogs have a bunch of breeds in them, they have so many types of horse in them that we can’t tell what they are.” Jonathan laughed

Martha laughed with him “Have they been cross-bred too much?” she asked as she took a sip of water.

Jonathan nodded. “Yeah” he said.

Just then the waiter came up “May I take your orders?” he asked Jonathan, then he noticed Martha “Ms. Clark?” he asked, not sure it was her.

“Jake?” Martha was surprised to see an old friend.

“Martha!” Jake said hugging her….

To Be Continued
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:scratchhead: I have never heard of a dorm mother…what is that???

I got a little confused here:
“Martha blushed “Thank you Jonathan” she said then she turned to Teri “Teri, when I get back we are going to have a little talk, don’t go anywhere”

“Your welcome,” he said, “Are you ready?”

Martha nodded. “Yup,” she said, then she turned to Teri. “Teri, when I get back we are going to have a little talk, don’t go anywhere


Was Martha reiterating her statement in a different tone of voice?

So is Jake the old boyfriend…is there gonna be a little competition going on there???
good update... :hi5:

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Ooooh, Jess ... you stopped just when it was getting interesting!! How could you! More, I want more!! :please:
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Good update. I want to know who Jake is, too!
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sorry about the confusuion, I'll fix it, I meant for it to say;

Martha blushed “Thank you Jonathan” she said.

“Your welcome,” he said, “Are you ready?”

Martha nodded. “Yup,” she said, then she turned to Teri. “Teri, when I get back we are going to have a little talk, don’t go anywhere."

I didn't mean for it to repeat! sorry about that!
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oh and a dorm mother (That's what they are called at my brother's college anyway) are girls who look after like one floor of a dorm, they have like a master key in case any one gets locked out of their rooms and they have (or at least I think they do) a first aid kit in case anyone needs it or something.

and I'll add on as soon as I can, but I'm going to my aunts on Tuesday and while she has a comp, I'm not sure how much time I'll be allowed to spend on it, I'll be taking the disk (the new one! lol) with me and if I get the chance I'll write more)

oh, by the way, You'll have to wait to see who Jake is! :evil3: I'm using cruel and unusual punishment on you guys aren't I? :heehee:
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Aug 14 2005, 12:13 AM
:evil3: I'm using cruel and unusual punishment on you guys aren't I? :heehee:

Yes!! :tissue:
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