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From Met U. with Love; A multi-chapter fic
Topic Started: Mon Aug 1, 2005 8:02 pm (3,299 Views)
iluvwriting
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I'm going to my aunts house later today, but I'll write more tomorrow, depending on how hyper my cousin is (I have to baby sit him for the rest of the week) but if all goes well, you'll proably have another update by sunday at the latest.
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Have a great time at your aunts! Don't forget what you have to do when (and if) you have any spare time ... :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :typing: :woohoo: :thud:
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Ok guys, I'm sorry I haven't been on, but I thought my Aunt had the internet, but she doesn't so I wasn't able to go on line for the past four days, I'll be writing as madly as I can so you guys can have then next chapter by (maybe) Monday afternoon or Tuesday morning. sorry for the delay!
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OK, you are off the hook this time. Although I have been pining away waiting for the next installment. I will just have to be patient a little longer. :)
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Thank you for being patient Carrie (and the rest of you guys too!) Hopefully the next installment will be worth the wait!
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Hey, awesome story! I'll be waiting for more!
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OH MY GOSH! I just realized that I didn't add on the next installment! I just sent it off to get edited so you guys should have it soon! I'm sooo sorry I didn't add on yesterday!
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I feel so guilty! I'm sooo sorry! :cry: :tissue:
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Carrie01
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I think you just like teasing us and keeping us begging for more! That is just cruel. You should be ashamed of yourself leading us on and then forgetting to post the next installment. I have been patiently waiting and waiting and waiting and ... nothing ... just an empy space where the next chapter should be.

Only posting the next chapter will restore my faith in you!

:please: :please: :please:
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No Carrie, honestly, I didn't finish it and I sent it to my editor this morning and Snarky hasn't sent it back yet, I'm really sorry. I was actually crying this morning because I felt so guilty (if you don't trust me, ask my bird I sobbed the whole story out to her).
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Oh, Jessie ... now I feel terrible. Please don't cry! I can wait - honestly I can. I am so sorry I was so mean to you in my last post. Please forgive me ... I promise to be more patient in future. :unsure:

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That's ok Carrie I wasn't crying because of you, I felt (feel) so giulty that you guys have to wait for so long just to have another waiting period I'm soo sorry, as soo as Snarky sends the rest of Chapter 4 back to me I'll post it, I promise.
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:bounce: :clap: :bounce: :clap: :bounce: :clap: :bounce:

:D Thank you! :D
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Sorry, email was down for awhile. :wall: I'm reading it now and I'll send it back to you soon!!!
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thank you Snarky! I appriciate that your working on it right now!
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After no further ado here is the rest of Chapter 4:

Martha!” Jake said hugging her then he noticed Jonathan who was looking a bit perturbed at being ignored.

“Who’s this?” Jake asked releasing Martha.

“Jake, this is Jonathan, this is our first date.” Martha said “Jonathan, this is Jake; we used to be on Mock Trial together he was a senior when I was a junior.”

“Oh.” Jonathan said, his hand out “It’s nice to meet you,” he said.

“It’s nice to meet you too,” Jake said shaking Jonathan’s hand. “Now, I have to get back to work, what do you want?”

“I’ll have the usual, do you remember what I used to get after Trials?” Martha asked.

“BLT, light on the tomatoes, heavy on the bacon and lettuce; medium water, no lemon” Jake tossed it out like it was yesterday’s trash.

“Yup,” Martha said.

Jake turned to Jonathan, “What do you want?” he asked

“Umm, actually I’d like the same as Martha only I’d like to have a large water instead of a medium.” Jonathan said as he closed his menu and handed it to Jake.

Jake took it and went to the kitchen to get their food.

“Did you enjoy Trials?” Jonathan asked.

“Yeah, most of my friends were in Mock Trial with me so I got to spend time with them and still get to do something I enjoyed.”

Jonathan was confused “I thought you didn’t want to become a lawyer.” he said.

“I don’t, but I liked the trials, I liked being able to help someone even if it was only Mock Trial, it felt like I was helping people.” Martha clarified.

“Oh” Jonathan said understanding now “Did you enjoy debate? You said you were involved in it.”

“I didn’t enjoy it as much as I did Mock Trial, but I liked it.” Martha said carefully “Did you enjoy football?”

“I enjoyed the game, but not the fame.” Jonathan said “I didn’t like being the center of attention all the time after a game.”

“Understandable.” Martha said as Jake walked back with their dinners.

“Thank you” Martha said as Jake handed her the BLT.

Once Jake had left Martha asked “Jonathan, tell me, were you involved in anything else in high school except for football?”

“I had to do many chores at home in fact I barely had enough time for football.” Jonathan said taking a bite of his BLT “Hmm this is good, I can see why it’s your usual.” He said after swallowing his mouthful of sandwich.

Martha nodded as she bit into it also “I usually don’t like BLT’s” she admitted, “but one night after Trials Jake and my best girlfriend Brittany both teased me into eating one and I’ve loved it ever since.” She confided.

“I usually don’t like BLT’s either, but I wanted to see if the BLT’s here tasted like my mom’s” Jonathan said, hoping he wouldn’t sound like a mamma’s boy.

“Okay, we’ve got to find something we don’t have in common, first we are both getting a general degree, now we both have just tried the BLT’s here and both loved it, what about the number of children in your family?”

“One” Jonathan pointed to himself “Me”

“Uggh!” Martha groaned “I’m an only child too! wait a minute we talked about that, How about favorite subject in school”

“Math” Jonathan said

Martha rolled her eyes and thought for a moment “What kind of chores did you do?” Martha asked a gleeful smile on her face.

“I had to milk the cows and feed the horses and feed the chickens and a whole plethora of boring chores that would put you to sleep.”

“I didn't have any chores.” Martha’s triumphant smile changed into a grimace. “My parents hired a maid to keep my room clean.” Martha made a face, “How am I supposed to become a good wife and mother if I don’t even know how to clean a room properly?”

“Tell you what” Jonathan said taking a sip from his water, “I’ll let you come over and help me clean my barn.” Then he grinned at her to show he was only joking “Just kidding” he started laughing as Martha’s slightly shocked expression turned to a smile and she laughed right along with him.

They both laughed as one thought crossed Martha’s mind for what seemed like the millionth time since she had first seen Jonathan God, I hope he marries me.
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Oh, good update, and it ends with an excellent line! :)
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Good update…so they are more similar in likes than opposite…keep it going I want to read more about there conversation and what it will lead to next.
:bidea: Are they gonna kiss and if they do who makes the first move…

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Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!!
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