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| Smallville Virtual Season Episode 12: Darkness; Let the slaying commence... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Tue Aug 2, 2005 12:21 pm (1,452 Views) | |
| kittsbud | Tue Aug 2, 2005 12:21 pm Post #1 |
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Okay, guys. I know it's been awhile, and I really shouldn't be posting this yet, but it's unfair to make you wait any longer. I'll try and update once a week as per norm, but that may interfere with me posting 'Epitaph.'
;) I hope you enjoy.... Episode 12: Darkness Part 1 |
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| Whiteflag | Tue Aug 2, 2005 3:33 pm Post #2 |
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Awww, what a wonderful surprise!
:D I can't read it now, my house is being painted and everything is a mess! :( I can't wait!!! (And I'd love to have both, Darkness and Epitaph, please!!!) |
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| kittsbud | Tue Aug 2, 2005 3:38 pm Post #3 |
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Well, you will get Epitaph, I just have to be careful how much and when
;) Also, I am having the same problem as you!!! My parents are totally redoing the house and have had a guy in fitting all wood flooring the past two days. The place is a mess while he's working, and its hard to get around let alone get to my pc :LOL: Hopefully, when you get to read it will be a nice teaser ;) |
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| Whiteflag | Wed Aug 3, 2005 5:16 pm Post #4 |
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I've been fighting every odd, determined to get online to read, but it has proved a feat of immensurable proportions! (I see that you can relate, Dawn) :LOL: I loved this first "Darkness" chapter (or teaser ;) ). I'm really excited at the new mystery unfolding here. You have me on the edge of my seat already, eager to know whom that dark master maybe and how dangerous Clark's involvement is going to be. (Please, make it VERY dangerous! :LOL: ) I love to have Clark investigating with his two "sidekicks" Chloe and Pete. It's so refreshing to see them working together as they used to! (Bless fanfics!) And I appreciate your continuity details. That's something we miss on the show too often, but here Clark's ordeal has not been forgotten and Lana is still feeling a little guilty for how she treated Clark. (Good!) On the other hand, Chloe is supportive and caring with Clark, and there's love and friendship in their relationship. So sweet! And I'm glad their search for their respective mothers have not been forgotten either. Great start! The pics were very good too. Now we need the at- least-once-a-week updates and, of course, the new parts for Epitaph. Two fics running at the same time again... Life, even with repairs at home, is good! :D Waiting for more here! :D |
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| iluvwriting | Sun Aug 7, 2005 7:51 pm Post #5 |
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I got a preview! I got a preview! *dances around in the twirly computer chair* but this part was great! now get cracking on the second part! :whip: |
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| smallvillegirl1 | Sun Aug 7, 2005 8:12 pm Post #6 |
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This was great!!! Please continue soon!!! ;) |
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| kittsbud | Tue Aug 9, 2005 2:12 pm Post #7 |
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Okay, here's part 2
:) Darkness Part 2 Have fun ;) |
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| Whiteflag | Tue Aug 9, 2005 5:04 pm Post #8 |
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Wonderful update! Thanks for the GREAT TC and the promise of even more to come!
:D You know you make me VERY happy with it! I love the virtual season, with these thrilling mysteries and Clark, Chloe and Pete having fun and facing danger together. This is Smallville at its best! :D The story is really interesting, even scary! I love Clark using his powers with the encouragement of Chloe. Their little, playful moment before tragedy struck was very sweet and then, in a dramatic turn of events, the scene with Clark and Martha was terrifying. I really felt for Martha, having to leave Clark in such a horrible situation. I can understand her desperation at not knowing if she made the right choice. Great chapter, it had everything that makes the VS so attractive, including the perfect pics. I'm looking forward to the next part. A week away! :( Can't wait for Tuesday to come! :hyper: |
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| kittsbud | Tue Aug 16, 2005 12:02 pm Post #9 |
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Here's part 3... Darkness Part 3 |
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| Whiteflag | Tue Aug 16, 2005 2:52 pm Post #10 |
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I LOVE this story!!!
:D A little TC, a good mystery, Clark and Chloe investigating in, Lex fighting his eternal inner struggle, the great Kent family scenes... Mix those ingredientes and throw in a big chunk of very good writing and we get this fully enjoyable story! This keeps getting better and better! And I loved the references to characters and events from past episodes. I really hope Kane appears again. He's a good character and always provides some nice TC. :D Great chapter. I really needed a fix of very good reading today; I'm lucky it was Tuesday! More, please! :hyper: |
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| kittsbud | Tue Aug 16, 2005 3:02 pm Post #11 |
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:LOL: I'm doing my best. ;) Thanks for reading as always. I know I'm behind on my writing and I am doing Epitaph, I promise. I'll try and get the scene I'm working on done and it posted tomorrow. It's just that my dad works in the Middle East and he's kinda gone AWOL...my mom and I are pretty worried because we can't contact him. It's praying on my mind and I can't seem to focus on writing and site work... |
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| Whiteflag | Tue Aug 16, 2005 4:01 pm Post #12 |
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Oh, so sorry to learn that! I'm sure your dad is okay but I'm understand how you are feeling right now. Please, don't worry about anything. I just hope you'll let us know that you've talked to you dad. When everything is back to normal, then I'll be bugging you for updates! :) |
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| kittsbud | Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:34 am Post #13 |
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Next... Darkness Part 4 |
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| Whiteflag | Tue Aug 23, 2005 4:49 pm Post #14 |
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I have to read it, I have to read it... But it will have to be tomorrow. *(Cries)* |
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| Whiteflag | Fri Aug 26, 2005 3:43 am Post #15 |
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I've red it, at last! (This has been a tough week) Intriguing, thrilling, entertaining, fully enjoyable story! Great mystery, great writing, perfect interaction between Clark, Chloe and Pete, dubious Lex... I have to say again that this story has every element that made me love Smallville from the very beginning. You have captured the best essence of the show and added so much talent and imagination, that this virtual season gives out much more than many of the actual SV episodes ever did. This particular chapter fully embodied the best features of the VS. I commend you on a wonderful job. This is a weekly gift that fulfils many of my reading needs and that I always anticipate with pleasure. Thank you for writing this splendid story! :D |
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| kittsbud | Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:40 am Post #16 |
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Et Voila... Darkness Part 5 |
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| Whiteflag | Thu Sep 1, 2005 3:34 pm Post #17 |
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Awesome update!
:D What a dreadful experience for Clark, to see what the killer does to that girl and not to be able to stop him! That scene made me shudder and Clark's fight with the hooded murderer kept me on the edge of my seat. As much as I love TC, I didn't want Clark to come too near the green rocks (for once!), so I loved how he managed to get rid of them. I wish I could see something like that on the show! That scene was certainly powerful and then, in a nice change of tempo, you give us the very good scene at the hospital, with the three friends exchanging revealing information and Clark and Helen eyeing each other suspiciously. I really enjoyed that! Helen is so much more interesting on your fics! Oh, and I loved the Jedi reference in the fight scene. I always enjoy those little touches of Clark's sense of humor. (And I like to think that he, my beautiful alien, watches SW too). GREAT chapter! Perfect writing, great choice of pics, amazing job! This "Darkness" is full of very bright moments. :D |
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| kittsbud | Thu Sep 1, 2005 4:29 pm Post #18 |
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There will probably be a delay this week on the new part. I'm so sorry, but I won't be here this weekend to search out all the pics. Where I'm going, my laptop cannot follow... |
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| Whiteflag | Sat Sep 3, 2005 7:51 am Post #19 |
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I'll be waiting here. :) |
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| kittsbud | Tue Sep 13, 2005 12:28 pm Post #20 |
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Hi guys, here's a tad more... Darkness part 6 |
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