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| SVSyko | Thu Feb 9, 2006 11:40 pm Post #1 |
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Clark, Chloe and Pete were all having a great day. The three had gathered at the Kent Farm, the only place where Clark could use his powers without consequences or the deadly sickness that came with the meteor rocks. Clark was having fun because it was the first time he and his two best friends had gotten together since he had told Chloe his secret. Pete and Chloe were egging him on to see how many times he could bench-press the tractor at super-speed, and although he was going too fast for them to count, they knew he had to have done quite a lot as he had been going at it solidly for 10 minutes. When they got bored of that, they went swimming in the lake. Clark had only just mastered the art of flight, so it was hilarious for Pete and Chloe to see him leap off the tire swing and get ‘stuck’ mid-air. The whole day was just about fun and laughter for them and Clark was having the most fun he had had in years. It just felt so great for him to be able to laugh along-side his friends for once, knowing that there was no longer any secrets between the three of them. Chloe had long since given up any romantic feelings for Clark, knowing that they were much better as friends and as Clark had Lois now… well Chloe couldn’t help thinking about how lucky her cousin was. Pete was just glad that he could be in Smallville and not worry about covering for his best friend or about his safety. He could finally forget about dangers and concentrate on girls, fun and his friends. “Hey Pete, I was just thinking that I could take you and Chloe for a fly. D’ you want to?” Clark asked. “Sure,” Chloe said with a drawl “Don’t bother to ask me about it,” she added sarcastically. “Now, I figure that I can put you in the hammock and carry that around. As long as Chloe’s weight doesn’t put to much strain on it.” Clark barged on with a sideways glance. “Who are you calling heavy?! You’re the alien with the ‘dense molecular structure.’ What an excuse!” Clark feigned a hurt expression at Chloe calling him an alien, and she fell for it easily. All those years of keeping secrets from her paid off- his excuses may have sucked, but his acting skills had improved dramatically over the years. When he laughed in her face the hand she had been reaching out to him drew back suddenly and her expression of sorrow quickly darkened into fury, not at Clark, but at herself for being taken in. Pete, who had been listening with interest decided to step in because, invincible or not, Chloe probably could’ve killed Clark. “Anyway, what were you saying about a fly?” Chloe forgot all homicidal thoughts at that question and eagerly anticipated Clark’s answer. She really wanted to try flying with out a plane, to be able to actually feel the wind in her face as she looked down on everyone unfortunate enough to not have a friend who could take them flying. “Clark did you actually mean what you said?” Chloe asked hopefully. “I’ll go get the hammock.” ~*~ Chloe decided then and there that flying without great big metal machines was the best feeling in the world. To be able to enjoy the view and the breeze at the same time was amazing and exhilarating and Chloe wondered how she was ever going to repay Clark for this amazing freedom. While she was thinking about this she hadn’t really been paying attention to anything around her. When Pete started pointing out local landmarks, she felt the thrill all over again and started wishing that this would never end. “We better land. We’re lucky we haven’t been spotted yet, and since we don’t know how long that’s going to last…” Clark trailed off. “Stop pouting Chloe, we can land, get cleaned up and I’ll take you to metropolis- without the 3-hour drive.” “What are you waiting for?! We don’t all have superspeed y’ know!” so how is it? feedbck plz |
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| SVSyko | Fri Feb 10, 2006 3:30 am Post #2 |
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plz reply- i really need ur opinions ive got another couple of fics and i want to do more on this 1 but if u don't like it... |
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| Melissa | Fri Feb 10, 2006 10:16 am Post #3 |
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It's good! Please continue! :D |
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| SVSyko | Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:16 am Post #4 |
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They had finally made it to Metropolis after much deliberation of how Clark was going to carry them both comfortably. In the end, though, Clark just picked them up in his arms and they were in a dank and smelly alley in the backstreets of Metropolis before Pete and Chloe even knew they had been picked up. Clark let go of them, and as they were unprepared, they fell over unceremoniously on the ground. “Couldn’t you have given us some warning?” Chloe complained after she and Pete had picked themselves up and dusted all the grime off. “Well it got us here didn’t it?” Clark retaliated. Then, suddenly silent, he shushed Chloe before she could do or say anything and frowned, concentrating intently. He wasn’t really surprised when a tall guy in a ski mask came running into the alley, and when he pulled out a gun he wasn’t really worried. Besides, he hadn’t noticed that he wasn’t the only one in the alley- yet. He turned around, and he caught sight of the three teens standing calmly in the shadows. He was a bit disoriented when he saw the way that they were staring at him. He was taking any chances, though, and ordered them to lie down on the grimy ground when, before he could blink, Clark was towering over him threateningly. The gun was suddenly in the tall teenager’s hand and Clark tapped the criminal on his head, knocking him out instantly, and he fell to the ground. Clark started searching the man for any ID he could find when he came across a red ring. He was too close to the effects of the Kryptonite to be able to escape it, and with a menacing smile, Kal was back. i know it sucks, but i'd at least like to know why it sucks! its my first fic, so i'll take any criticism. |
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| Melissa | Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:07 am Post #5 |
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It doesn't suck! It's good! Now if you could make the reply longer... :D I want to know what Clark's going to do as Kal. |
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| smallville_4eva93 | Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:32 pm Post #6 |
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:D I agree!! please update soon!!!! :D |
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| clarkfan | Wed Feb 22, 2006 9:20 am Post #7 |
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Very good story so far....please continue |
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| SVSyko | Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:02 pm Post #8 |
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i'm not really sure where to go with this fic- any ideas? |
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