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| DennisQuaid's#1Girl | Fri Sep 1, 2006 9:49 am Post #1 |
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LetThemEatCaserole! AsIAwokeFromAStrangeDream...
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Since there are so many talented writers and artists on this BB, I thought it natural that there might be some poets among us as well. I thought it would be fun to have a place to be able to combine the fun of writing poetry with the fun of enjoying Smallville. So give it a try and post a poem about Smallville! :well: I'll go first . . . "Lex's World" By DennisQuaid's#1Girl Eyes of cobalt reign supreme in a giant tower of glass, where he alone rules devine and others bow at his behest. Locks long torn by unseen events, a father too weak to act, all have changed his life in ways, his only true friend, Clark Kent. The voice of a tired angel his brow weary, his mind set, Lex sets off unto the bow of a rapidly sinking ship. "I'll right the wrongs, undo the deeds, I'll even take back the blame, just grant me enough, the decency, to not judge me by my name." He's sincere, no doubt, his heart is pure, but have his thoughts gone astray? For naught but the pride of a poor farmer could keep, the Luthor millions at bay. And after so long the door will close, and he will turn away, "Am I really just like my father, or can I make my own way?" A love so bright he wants to share, but only the cold unfurls, a reason to be, to live his life, That's Lex's world. Posted Image ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Comments, questions? :well: I'd love to hear other poems!!! :hyper: :grouphug: |
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| Carrie01 | Fri Sep 1, 2006 12:59 pm Post #2 |
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl, there is already a poety thread in the Wall of Weird. Here is the link to it ... http://z4.invisionfree.com/Smallvillevirtu...last_post&st=30 I'll ask one of the Group Admin to move this post to that thread. :) |
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| DennisQuaid's#1Girl | Fri Sep 1, 2006 4:35 pm Post #3 |
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Actually, the thread that I started was specifically for Smallville-related poetry, that's why I didn't put it in the "Wall of Weird" since the idea for that thread would not have been off-topic, and it really belonged where I put it in the first place, not where it got moved to . . . mods, don't be so over zealous. :P: |
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| DennisQuaid's#1Girl | Fri Sep 1, 2006 4:38 pm Post #4 |
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BTW, I'm just joking, don't ban me. :D |
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| Carrie01 | Fri Sep 1, 2006 4:44 pm Post #5 |
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl, we did discuss whether to leave your new thread or to combine it with the existing thread before deciding to move your post. The decision was taken because we felt that to have two poetry threads running at the same time could lead to needless confusion. We decided that if we kept all the poetry in one location then it would be simpler for everyone. Mods don't move posts and threads around the board for fun. We move them so that similar topics remain together or to avoid duplication of posts/topics or because we feel that certain items are better sited in a different forum or thread. |
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| DennisQuaid's#1Girl | Fri Sep 1, 2006 4:50 pm Post #6 |
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LetThemEatCaserole! AsIAwokeFromAStrangeDream...
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That's fine, thanks for clarifying, although we must "agree to disagree", I can still undersand your reasons for moving the post. Thanks. |
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| Carrie01 | Fri Sep 1, 2006 4:56 pm Post #7 |
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You're welcome.
:D By the way, I forgot to mention that I really like your poem! :clap: :clap: |
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| DennisQuaid's#1Girl | Fri Sep 1, 2006 7:43 pm Post #8 |
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LetThemEatCaserole! AsIAwokeFromAStrangeDream...
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Thanks very much! :grouphug: I hope to read some more of your work in the future as well! (Those screen caps were histerical!) :D |
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| Knight/m | Tue Sep 5, 2006 12:56 pm Post #9 |
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl... that is a way cool poem…it was eloquent and it flowed so easily as I was reading it…Kudos
:clap: :hi5: nicely done :pfft: |
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| ~Soy amor~ | Sun Sep 10, 2006 1:42 pm Post #10 |
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THE REAL SUPERMAN!!
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"Days Gone Bye" Dreams soaring, Red capes flying, Krypton green ablaze, In the night. Heroes coming, Faster than lightning, Foiling villains Causing fright. George to Chris, Dean to Tom, Passing the torch, In the marathon. Always there waiting, Anticipating, Our Man of Steel Infinitely lives on. . . Posted Image Posted Image [Posted ImagePosted ImagePosted Image |
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| Knight/m | Wed Sep 13, 2006 1:19 pm Post #11 |
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:clap: Nicely done Soy Amor :pfft: and the pics are cool also :coolyo: …I love poetry cuz usually they are very theatrical & visual in substance…you did yours justice :hi5: . |
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| roman1967 | Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:04 pm Post #12 |
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Excellent poem Soy amor! |
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| ~Soy amor~ | Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:50 pm Post #13 |
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Thank you for the nice comments! |
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| DennisQuaid's#1Girl | Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:44 pm Post #14 |
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LetThemEatCaserole! AsIAwokeFromAStrangeDream...
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Go Soy Amor! Great Poem! Hope to hear more from you in the future!!! :D :bananacow: :yeah: |
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| ~Soy amor~ | Sat Sep 16, 2006 8:33 pm Post #15 |
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THE REAL SUPERMAN!!
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Posted Image "Los Ojos" Tongues of fire Lightning blue Cobalt eyes. . . Piercing his victims Through and through. Crystals of ice Forged blue steel Eyes of redemption. . . Searching, saving Boundless zeal. Good turned to evil Love turned to hate Passionless father Sealed his fate. Love in abundance Yet no choice to make Being a saviour Set in his wake. Two boys grew to be men In that very small town Lost was a friendship Once strong and sound. Eyes of blue Cobalt and steel Windows to the souls. . . One would kill One would heal. |
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| ~Soy amor~ | Sat Sep 16, 2006 8:51 pm Post #16 |
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DQG, I really liked your interpretation of "Lex's World". You've captured the mood of his character perfectly. Great job! :supes: :slogo: |
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