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Smallville Poetry Thread; Post all your SV-related poetry here...
Topic Started: Fri Sep 1, 2006 9:49 am (376 Views)
DennisQuaid's#1Girl
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Since there are so many talented writers and artists on this BB, I thought it natural that there might be some poets among us as well. I thought it would be fun to have a place to be able to combine the fun of writing poetry with the fun of enjoying Smallville. So give it a try and post a poem about Smallville! :well:

I'll go first . . .

"Lex's World"
By DennisQuaid's#1Girl

Eyes of cobalt reign supreme
in a giant tower of glass,
where he alone rules devine
and others bow at his behest.

Locks long torn by unseen events,
a father too weak to act, all
have changed his life in ways,
his only true friend, Clark Kent.

The voice of a tired angel
his brow weary, his mind set,
Lex sets off unto the bow of a rapidly
sinking ship.

"I'll right the wrongs, undo the deeds, I'll
even take back the blame, just
grant me enough, the decency,
to not judge me by my name."

He's sincere, no doubt, his heart is pure,
but have his thoughts gone astray?
For naught but the pride of a poor farmer could keep,
the Luthor millions at bay.

And after so long the door will close,
and he will turn away,
"Am I really just like my father,
or can I make my own way?"

A love so bright he wants to share,
but only the cold unfurls,
a reason to be, to live his life,
That's Lex's world.

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Comments, questions? :well:

I'd love to hear other poems!!! :hyper:
:grouphug:
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Carrie01
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl, there is already a poety thread in the Wall of Weird.

Here is the link to it ...
http://z4.invisionfree.com/Smallvillevirtu...last_post&st=30

I'll ask one of the Group Admin to move this post to that thread. :)
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl
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Carrie01
Sep 1 2006, 12:59 PM
DennisQuaid's#1Girl, there is already a poety thread in the Wall of Weird.

Here is the link to it ...
http://z4.invisionfree.com/Smallvillevirtu...last_post&st=30

I'll ask one of the Group Admin to move this post to that thread. :)

Actually, the thread that I started was specifically for Smallville-related poetry, that's why I didn't put it in the "Wall of Weird" since the idea for that thread would not have been off-topic, and it really belonged where I put it in the first place, not where it got moved to . . . mods, don't be so over zealous. :P:
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl
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BTW, I'm just joking, don't ban me. :D
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Carrie01
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl
Sep 1 2006, 11:35 PM
Carrie01
Sep 1 2006, 12:59 PM
DennisQuaid's#1Girl, there is already a poety thread in the Wall of Weird.

Here is the link to it ...
http://z4.invisionfree.com/Smallvillevirtu...last_post&st=30

I'll ask one of the Group Admin to move this post to that thread.  :)

Actually, the thread that I started was specifically for Smallville-related poetry, that's why I didn't put it in the "Wall of Weird" since the idea for that thread would not have been off-topic, and it really belonged where I put it in the first place, not where it got moved to . . . mods, don't be so over zealous. :P:

DennisQuaid's#1Girl, we did discuss whether to leave your new thread or to combine it with the existing thread before deciding to move your post.

The decision was taken because we felt that to have two poetry threads running at the same time could lead to needless confusion. We decided that if we kept all the poetry in one location then it would be simpler for everyone.

Mods don't move posts and threads around the board for fun. We move them so that similar topics remain together or to avoid duplication of posts/topics or because we feel that certain items are better sited in a different forum or thread.

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DennisQuaid's#1Girl
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Carrie01
Sep 1 2006, 04:44 PM
DennisQuaid's#1Girl, we did discuss whether to leave your new thread or to combine it with the existing thread before deciding to move your post.

The decision was taken because we felt that to have two poetry threads running at the same time could lead to needless confusion. We decided that if we kept all the poetry in one location then it would be simpler for everyone.

Mods don't move posts and threads around the board for fun. We move them so that similar topics remain together or to avoid duplication of posts/topics or because we feel that certain items are better sited in a different forum or thread.

That's fine, thanks for clarifying, although we must "agree to disagree", I can still undersand your reasons for moving the post. Thanks.
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Carrie01
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You're welcome. :D

By the way, I forgot to mention that I really like your poem! :clap: :clap:
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl
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Carrie01
Sep 1 2006, 04:56 PM
You're welcome. :D

By the way, I forgot to mention that I really like your poem! :clap: :clap:

Thanks very much! :grouphug:

I hope to read some more of your work in the future as well! (Those screen caps were histerical!) :D
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Knight/m
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl... that is a way cool poem…it was eloquent and it flowed so easily as I was reading it…Kudos :clap: :hi5: nicely done :pfft:
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~Soy amor~
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"Days Gone Bye"

Dreams soaring,
Red capes flying,
Krypton green ablaze,
In the night.

Heroes coming,
Faster than lightning,
Foiling villains
Causing fright.

George to Chris,
Dean to Tom,
Passing the torch,
In the marathon.

Always there waiting,
Anticipating,
Our Man of Steel
Infinitely lives on. . .

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Knight/m
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:clap: Nicely done Soy Amor :pfft: and the pics are cool also :coolyo: …I love poetry cuz usually they are very theatrical & visual in substance…you did yours justice :hi5: .
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roman1967
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Excellent poem Soy amor!
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~Soy amor~
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Thank you for the nice comments!
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DennisQuaid's#1Girl
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Go Soy Amor! Great Poem! Hope to hear more from you in the future!!! :D :bananacow: :yeah:
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~Soy amor~
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"Los Ojos"

Tongues of fire
Lightning blue
Cobalt eyes. . .
Piercing his victims
Through and through.

Crystals of ice
Forged blue steel
Eyes of redemption. . .
Searching, saving
Boundless zeal.

Good turned to evil
Love turned to hate
Passionless father
Sealed his fate.

Love in abundance
Yet no choice to make
Being a saviour
Set in his wake.

Two boys grew to be men
In that very small town
Lost was a friendship
Once strong and sound.

Eyes of blue
Cobalt and steel
Windows to the souls. . .
One would kill
One would heal.
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~Soy amor~
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Sep 16 2006, 06:44 PM
Go Soy Amor! Great Poem! Hope to hear more from you in the future!!! :D  :bananacow:  :yeah:

DQG,
I really liked your interpretation of "Lex's World". You've captured the mood of his character perfectly. Great job! :supes: :slogo:
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