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Trade; Jonathan learns of his destiny
Topic Started: Wed Sep 20, 2006 9:26 pm (209 Views)
raethehazzard
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Hi
I know you are dissapointed in the death of Clara but I wanted to show Jonathan's love for and her love of him.Just because she is dead doesn't mean she is GONE.
After the story there is going to be two questions.I would like to hear your answers.
Thanks and God Bless


Trade


Jonathan held his lifeless daughter in his arms.He looked up to see everyone that Clara loved in tears and in pain.Jonathan looked at her again hoping for her eye's to open but they never moved.He put his head on her chest hoping to hear a heart beat but none.
Suddenly Clara's body began to glow and a atmosphere began to grow around both Clara and Jonathan. Jonathan and Clara began to be lifted off the ground and in the air.Jonathan with tears still in his eye's wondered what was happening.A yellow light shot from Clara and into Jonathan.Causing a surge of power to make an explosion so powerful it sent Jonathan flying across the yard.Jonathan landed on his back stunned.Martha ran to him
"Jonathan"
"I'm alright"
"What happened?"
"Clara. . . she did something."

Jonathan carried Clara's body into the Fortress of Solitude.He laid her body on the white bed of snow."Help me please" he pleaded.
"Jonathan Kent once you where powerful like Kal-el and Car-ella and know your name will be Jay-l my new son"
"I dont understand"
"Six months ago Earth time you died of a heart condition"
"How is that possible I'm alive know"
"After you perished Clara Kent could not bear your absence.So she made a bargain.The propecy says that Car-ella will die for someone of great feeling.
Jay-l you are that person.You died in her arms.She went back in time and traded your destiny for hers."
"Why didn't you do something to save her" he yelled
"Jay-l she is not my daughter but was yours.She gave up her power and used her power to heal your heart.Your pain you are feeling is loss of a child.
bloodly she was your child know you are mine."
"No"
"I'm sorry for you loss my son"
"I'm not you son- before he could finish he was transported out of the Fortress and into the cave.He realized Clara was in his arms and still dead.

Three days later
Jonathan's eye's opened and realized today he was going to bury his daughter.


Questions

1, Is it Clark's fault that Clara had to make such a big sacrafice.Since he went back in time to save Lana?

2,Would you have done what Clara did to bring her Father back?
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SamwiseAtHeart
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I think my answers for both of the questions are one in the same. Yes and Yes.

This was a good chapter, pretty short, but very good.
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Red K
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raethehazzard
Sep 20 2006, 09:26 PM
Questions

1, Is it Clark's fault that Clara had to make such a big sacrafice.Since he went back in time to save Lana?

2,Would you have done what Clara did to bring her Father back?

both are a yes... the first one is a yes 'cuz Clark is an airhead... it sometime always seem to be his fault when someone dies 'cuz of his stupid choices

great story... I can't wait for more :D
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angelofmusic930
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yes for bother answers over here too. I agree with Clark being an airhead, I'm always saying then when watching Smallville now lol.
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coolg90
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1. Yes, because clark had the choise to stay and let lana be dead, it was really his fault for the death of clara.

2. Yes, I would have done the very exact thing. And i would never regret it either! The loss of her father was to great for her to handle. She did the right thing!

Great story raethehazzard!!! :coolyo: Can't wait to hear more. :beg: Hope to hear from you soon!! :dance:
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