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Diamondspots; my application for riverclan
Topic Started: Sep 5 2008, 04:57 PM (93 Views)
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Name:Diamondspots

Gender: She-cat

Clan: Riverclan

Age in moons: 13
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Apprerance: like that except with diamond shaped spots

Personality:keeps to herself most of the time, and prefers talking to senior warriors. If something embarrasing happens she will carry the pain of the memory for days before it fades away.

In Character Writing Sample: Diamondspots lifted her head and tasted the air. There was a strange scent- one she did not recognise from training. She carefully moved towards it, wondering what the scent was. She ignored the warning call from another warrior on the patrol. As she moved closer, a red shape barreled out of the bushes, snarling. Fox! she thought. She remembered the descriptions from older warriors about what foxes looked like. She had thought she could take one on by herself. Now she wasn't so sure.

Codeword: Cow bell

Position: warrior
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A few things: If she was only 9 moons old, then she'd be an apprentice, so you can either change her age to at least 12-13 moons or make her an apprentice and I'm sure Dragon would give her the warrior name Diamonspots. Also, I know it isn't on the form, but could you add a little bit of history so we know what her terrible memory is?
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Okay edited
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Alrighty! Accepted ^-^
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