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| Dead Master Nightmare Zero | Oct 24 2014, 02:44 PM Post #21 |
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The Reincarnation of DMZ and Nightmare, You may call me DMNZ, Zero or Nightmare whichever works.
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My story is essentially darkness vs light vs grey in space...BECAUSE FUCK YOU! . Its sci-fi but I'm writing my series of books like essentially an anime that i'd want to watch but unfortunatley I can't draw so literature will have to do for the moment. Its set in a galaxy where humans and giant spiders are in an alliance together along with a few other races such as: spartan mafia lizards, werewolves that stay in 2 legged form, trolls from skyrim, cat like people, goblins, snakeman and others (need a couple of more races and then i'm good, probably giant flies with 4 arms ) Main characters a badass character with a scythe because scythes are awesome, my main objective is to write a good story, with good action and memorable characters for one reason or another. Also add a bit of morality shit aswell, first story I think might be a bit bland since i'm opening up my story and i'm not really good at starting anything...or grammar . But i've had good feedback so far story wise so must not be the worst writer in the world . But I do need to rewrite my earlier chapters (i've only done about 5) but meh
Edited by Dead Master Nightmare Zero, Oct 24 2014, 02:49 PM.
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| PvtCryan502 | Oct 24 2014, 03:06 PM Post #22 |
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More than Just a Conjurer of Cheap Tricks
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I'm currently developing a speech on those of us who live with chronic diseases. |
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| Vindicated57 | Oct 24 2014, 04:08 PM Post #23 |
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Informative or persuasive? |
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| TRYTOBEATMENOW | Oct 24 2014, 04:33 PM Post #24 |
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Captain of Akatsuki/ Supporter of ED/ Creator of the Pokemon League
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DMZ send me a PDF of that because I down right curious of it and vin if you want feedback send me a copy of your's as well. |
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| Dead Master Nightmare Zero | Oct 24 2014, 04:40 PM Post #25 |
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The Reincarnation of DMZ and Nightmare, You may call me DMNZ, Zero or Nightmare whichever works.
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I'd prefer if I don't send it right away as I would feel more comfortable sending you a rewritten copy thats not so covered in grammarly sins
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| TRYTOBEATMENOW | Oct 24 2014, 05:19 PM Post #26 |
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Captain of Akatsuki/ Supporter of ED/ Creator of the Pokemon League
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that's fine |
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| PvtCryan502 | Oct 24 2014, 06:38 PM Post #27 |
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More than Just a Conjurer of Cheap Tricks
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Informative |
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| WickedPhantom | Oct 24 2014, 06:42 PM Post #28 |
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Might it be ok, if I take a look at it? |
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| HavocTheGreat | Oct 24 2014, 06:47 PM Post #29 |
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Former Gohan Coach
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Jesus everyone idea sounds so cool and compelling compared to my idea my idea is shit.
Edited by HavocTheGreat, Oct 24 2014, 06:52 PM.
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| Vindicated57 | Oct 25 2014, 04:20 AM Post #30 |
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Cryan, may I ask what chronic illness? Would a PM be better? Phantom, Trytobeatmenow, give me about two days. Like DMZ, I have some sins in there. The biggest one is the fact that I've added a whole new chapter, which kind of throws a wrench into things. So, what I might have to do is give you everything that happens before the new chapter and then send the rest to you after I've been able to tie the new chapter into the rest of the novel (i.e. finish it). Sound good? And Havoc, I think I missed your story idea. What's yours about? |
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. Its sci-fi but I'm writing my series of books like essentially an anime that i'd want to watch but unfortunatley I can't draw so literature will have to do for the moment. Its set in a galaxy where humans and giant spiders are in an alliance together along with a few other races such as: spartan mafia lizards, werewolves that stay in 2 legged form, trolls from skyrim, cat like people, goblins, snakeman and others (need a couple of more races and then i'm good, probably giant flies with 4 arms
. But i've had good feedback so far story wise so must not be the worst writer in the world








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