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Writers Club; For anyone interested in story writing share ideas get ideas look at each others work
Topic Started: Oct 20 2014, 03:22 PM (539 Views)
Dead Master Nightmare Zero
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The Reincarnation of DMZ and Nightmare, You may call me DMNZ, Zero or Nightmare whichever works.
My story is essentially darkness vs light vs grey in space...BECAUSE FUCK YOU! :P . Its sci-fi but I'm writing my series of books like essentially an anime that i'd want to watch but unfortunatley I can't draw so literature will have to do for the moment. Its set in a galaxy where humans and giant spiders are in an alliance together along with a few other races such as: spartan mafia lizards, werewolves that stay in 2 legged form, trolls from skyrim, cat like people, goblins, snakeman and others (need a couple of more races and then i'm good, probably giant flies with 4 arms :P ) Main characters a badass character with a scythe because scythes are awesome, my main objective is to write a good story, with good action and memorable characters for one reason or another. Also add a bit of morality shit aswell, first story I think might be a bit bland since i'm opening up my story and i'm not really good at starting anything...or grammar :( . But i've had good feedback so far story wise so must not be the worst writer in the world :P . But I do need to rewrite my earlier chapters (i've only done about 5) but meh :P
Edited by Dead Master Nightmare Zero, Oct 24 2014, 02:49 PM.
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PvtCryan502
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I'm currently developing a speech on those of us who live with chronic diseases.
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Vindicated57

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I'm currently developing a speech on those of us who live with chronic diseases.


Informative or persuasive?
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TRYTOBEATMENOW
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Captain of Akatsuki/ Supporter of ED/ Creator of the Pokemon League
DMZ send me a PDF of that because I down right curious of it and vin if you want feedback send me a copy of your's as well.
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Dead Master Nightmare Zero
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The Reincarnation of DMZ and Nightmare, You may call me DMNZ, Zero or Nightmare whichever works.
I'd prefer if I don't send it right away as I would feel more comfortable sending you a rewritten copy thats not so covered in grammarly sins :P
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TRYTOBEATMENOW
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Captain of Akatsuki/ Supporter of ED/ Creator of the Pokemon League
that's fine
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PvtCryan502
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Vindicated57
Oct 24 2014, 04:08 PM
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I'm currently developing a speech on those of us who live with chronic diseases.


Informative or persuasive?
Informative
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WickedPhantom
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Oct 24 2014, 12:27 PM
I'm just going to stick with my story question:

Seth Ashton has been chosen by God to save mankind and stop Hell from absorbing Earth. But will he succeed when murderers, demons, and his own faith threaten to destroy him?

I will gladly share PDFs if anyone is interested in reading. If you do decide to read this book, please provide feedback, comments, and editorial comments. The book is complete and is currently going through its 3rd and (hopefully) final edit before I start to pursue an agent/publisher.
Might it be ok, if I take a look at it?
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HavocTheGreat
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Jesus everyone idea sounds so cool and compelling compared to my idea my idea is shit.
Edited by HavocTheGreat, Oct 24 2014, 06:52 PM.
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Vindicated57

Cryan, may I ask what chronic illness? Would a PM be better?

Phantom, Trytobeatmenow, give me about two days. Like DMZ, I have some sins in there. The biggest one is the fact that I've added a whole new chapter, which kind of throws a wrench into things. So, what I might have to do is give you everything that happens before the new chapter and then send the rest to you after I've been able to tie the new chapter into the rest of the novel (i.e. finish it). Sound good?

And Havoc, I think I missed your story idea. What's yours about?
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