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Writers Club; For anyone interested in story writing share ideas get ideas look at each others work
Topic Started: Oct 20 2014, 03:22 PM (537 Views)
HavocTheGreat
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It's about a kid who gets trapped on a remote island full of canibals
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TRYTOBEATMENOW
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When I think about havoc's story I think of a combination of the book "Hatchet" (Great book if you haven't read it, you need to read if you like survival stuff) and the game "The Forest"
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HavocTheGreat
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see its lame :( I have to go back to the drawing board but the funny thing is this was inspired once when I went fishing with my family and our boat broke and and there was a storm and we were pushed to shore on some random person's property and we had to walk all the way back to go get our truck to take the boat out. everyone was wet that night :(
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TRYTOBEATMENOW
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It doesn't sound lame, survival stories and horror stories are some of the most difficult to write. You should keep it going until you find the mood you want in it and what ever else you'll trying to accomplish in it.

I am postponing all my projects right now! I just came up with one of my greatest ideals so far. I'm not going to really say anything about it yet other then the title of the series and name of the first book. So I'm calling the series Descendants and the name of the first book will be Descendants: Bows of The Sun and Moon. If you really want to know the story message me and I'll tell you.
Edited by Burnarator, Oct 25 2014, 09:17 PM.
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Vindicated57

Havoc, I love the sound of the story. It's a survival story, it's a horror, it's man vs. man. See? You have three story elements already. And I think that if you focus on the survival and man vs. man part, if you really get us invested in your protagonist as well and SHOW us the cruelty of the cannibals, it will draw the readers in send them through a roller coaster of emotional highs as the protagonist struggles to survive but also to reason out his current situation.
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PvtCryan502
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I'm talking all chronic diseases, but I will be focusing on things personally because I believe and the teacher too that it will add more impact.
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HavocTheGreat
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wow thanks guys I was also gonna includes some mystical element to it like magic or something like that.
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