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ST 12 Script Outline?
Topic Started: May 5 2012, 11:37 AM (213 Views)
Xon
Ensign
This smells like BS but I'm going to post it anyway.
******MEGA-SPOILERS******

Reportedly taken from a pre?production script

NEAR-COMPLETE summary of ST2 Plot

***DO NOT READ BELOW THIS LINE IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW

EVERYTHING ABOUT STAR TREK 2***

"Kronos IV In The Klingon Empire" appears on screen. We zoom into the

planet...
(very vaugely described, generally misty and alien)...

A body is carried into an interrogation chamber by two Klingons on an

antigravity sled... The room is dimly lit with a prominent array of

machinery in one corner. A bright light blazes down overhead focused

on the prisoner, creating lens flare.

Kardor: "Secure the prisoner and prime the Mind Sifter."

Guard: "Yes, My Lord."

Placed upright, strapped into a chair we finally see that it's Spock

Prime!

The machine starts humming to life as probes are placed on Spock's

forehead. He struggles then stops as he realizes it's futile.

Spock Prime: "This is not necessary."

Kardor: "I say what is necessary, Spock. My name is Kardor. I am the

Empire's Chief Interrogation Officer in Imperial Intelligence. Your mind

is a dilithium-chest worth of value."

Guard: "All prepared, my Lord."

Kardor: "Begin with Force One."

Spock becomes tense as pain shoots through his mind.

We hear Kardor's voice as the camera zooms Deep into Spock Prime's

eye: "The chest will open, Spock... Force Three!"

The machinery's hum rises as we hear Spock's scream and we cut to

the Opening Title Sequence.

The credits are overlaid against a Klingon monitor screen which throws

up data displays (all in Klingon) presumably of information being

drawn from Spock Prime's mind. This includes technical line drawings

of various starships. We even see the Genesis Torpedo! Eventually it

freezes on the technical diagrams of the SS Botany Bay!


Cut to Space as...
The Starship Enterprise warps thorough space.

Kirk's voiceover: "Captain's Log, Stardate 2259.7. Following a major

weapons upgrade, the Enterprise is on course for star charting in the

remote X'Nodi Sector located on the outer fringe of Federation space.

Located near the Klingon Neutral Zone I have full faith in my crew and

our new shipboard hardware..."

[POSSIBLE PAGES MISSING HERE! POSSIBLE INTRODUCTION OF NEW

CHARACTER/S?!]

Sulu: "Captain! I'm picking up a Klingon battle cruiser on extreme long

range scan..."

Kirk: "Tactical plot."

Sulu hits a key, a holographic 3-D schematic appears before the

viewscreen showing the Enterprise and Klingon ship in relation to

various color-coded grid lines.

Spock: "Technically outside Federation space."

Sulu: "Not if they continue on that course."

Chekov: "There. Technically Inside our Treaty Zone!"

Kirk: "Okay, gentlemen. Mr. Sulu take us in on a parallel vector. Warp

2. We'll keep our distance and see what they're hunting for."

Scott (smiling): "Ah! We're armed and ready. Let's go kick some Klingon

ass."

Kirk: "Easy, Scotty. You'll get your chance."

Chekov: "At this speed. Time to intercept: 2 hours, 47 minutes."

We follow the Enterprise through space, overlaid on the tactical grid...

Close-up of Klingon cruiser coming along side the Botany Bay!
The Botany Bay is a battered and pock-marked hull, looking lifeless

and decrepid. Yet we can clearly make out its name on the hull and the

registry "DY-102."

Cut to the Interior...
Klingons beam over. They are stunned by dozens of sealed cryo-pods

lining the bulkheads! They are occupied by lifeless bodies.
One dominating pod is flashing.

The following dialogue is all in Klingon, relayed to us through English

subtitles...

A Klingon consults his tricorder and points to the flashing pod: "Over

here! This is the one!"

First Lieutenant: "A Human!"

Commander Krode: "Open it."

First Lieutenant: "It's a dead Human corpse."

Commander Krode: "I said open it!"

First Lieutenant goes over and opens the enclosed Pod. We see the

face of Khan!

First Lieutenant: "He's Alive!"

Commander Krode: "Of course he is. He's why we're here. Take

him--Alive!"

First Lieutenant starts pulling off sensor webbing and medical monitor

paraphernalia from Khan. Suddenly Khan's hand jerks to life, his eyes

open and he grabs First Lieutenant and strangles the life out of him!

The other Klingons, shocked, grab their sidearms, but it's too

late--Other cryo-Pods are coming to life! Fists are smashing through

glass and steel containers, grabbing the Klingons before they know

what's happened!

Khan stands up, looks at them: "Not Human... Not even Close!"

He throws the corpse of First Lieutenant against a bulkhead and

advances on Commander Krode, smiling...

Commander Krode stands his ground: "I am a Klingon Warrior!"

Khan laughs. He picks up Commander Krode Vader-style, lifting him to

the ceiling. He's sent sailing through the air and we hear a bang where

he hits a bulkhead. The other Klingons, gaping, stare at one another in

wonder.

Khan: "Warrior. You do not know the meaning of the word..."

Khan picks up the Klingon tricorder and begins fidgeting with it.
Turning to Third Lieutenant: "You will explain the operating principles

of this device to me..."

Zoom-in to the tricorder's screen. It's all in Klingon but the diagrams

and text are strangely familiar--They are from the title sequence,

technical information extracted from Spock Prime's mind! Khan reads

much faster than normal humans and the pages of images flash by at

fucking-fast speeds.

Close-up of Khan smiling...


The Enterprise arrives on the scene as we see the Botany Bay appear

in the distance on the main screen.

Sulu: "Unidentified vessel ahead... Appears to be stationary or moving

at extreme sublight speed."

Spock scans the Botany Bay reading his instrumentation: "Fascinating.

Ancient sublight explorer. Possibly even interplanetary..."

Kirk: "Interplanetary? This far out. Must have taken them centuries..."
(turning to Uhura) "Uhura..."

Uhura: "I've been trying to raise them, Captain. No response. I've tried

everything from subspace lingua-code to old-style radio bands.

Nothing."

Spock: "Confirmed, Captain. Sensors make it out to be of the DY-series.

DY-100, Savannah class. Simple first generation nuclear engines..."

Scott (excited, smiling!): "DY Series! An ancient Earth ship? Ach,

Spock, you must be mistaken. Some alien hoax, maybe. Or your

sensors are out of calibration..."

Spock (still looking into his sensor display viewer): "Yet there are life

signs. Human, Captain."

KIrk: "Sulu, any sign of the Klingon?"

Sulu: "No sir. I've been scanning for them but they've vanished off the

scopes."

Kirk: "Spock, assemble an away team, we're beaming over!"

Spock gets to work, calls over Uhura and intercoms McCoy...

Kirk turns to Chekov: "Mister Chekov, an excellent opportunity for you.

You have the con!"

Chekov rolls his eyes and gapes in excitement: "Me sir? ME?"
He hops out of his seat towards the center chair.

Kirk turns to Spock: "Great time for a little training lesson for the

Ensign."

Chekov happily hops into the chair. We cut to the transporter room.

Kirk instructs the officer to "Energize" as Kirk, Spock, McCoy, and

Uhura beam over.

We cut to Space and the Enterprise. There is a rippling as the Klingon

cruiser decloaks, rapid-fires wads of torpedoes at the Enterprise's port

side engine nacelle which sheers off! All this before Anyone can react!

Chekov: "Holy Shit! Shields! Shields UUUP!"

The Enterprise rocks. Consoles explode. All hell breaks loose. Officers

run around and shout for Damage Control teams. Smoke and fires.

Rocking camera angles and lens flare.


Cut to the interior of the Botany Bay. It's somewhat better lit now and

more alive. Crewmen are moving about making repairs. Khan is flexing

his heavily-muscular biceps and stretching. Focus is on his bulging

muscles. We now see various Islamic death tattoos covering parts of

his body.

The away team materializes and Khan's men instantly grab them,

disarming them and taking their equipment.

Kirk: "We come in peace. I'm Captain James Tiberius Kirk representing

the United Federation of Planets..."

Khan: "Peace. Long ago maybe. Peace... I am Khan Noonian Singh,

one-time supreme ruler of your planet Earth. A prince amongst ordinary

men. My destiny is back there. To return to the home world and take

my rightful place as it's prince..."

Spock: "A Eugenics Wars 'superman' I take it. One of a fragmentary

governing body which once ruled Asia..."

Khan: "Captain Kirk. You will turn your starship over to me. I need it

as my chariot to return..."

Kirk: "I don't think so."

Khan: "You have no choice. I am not giving you a choice. It is my

destiny to rule Earth. I am a descendant of genetically-engineering

superior perfection, with my genes going as far back as Bin Laden. You

will serve me or you will die."

Kirk holds his ground, unintimidated.

Khan looks around and grabs Uhura--and notices Kirk's reaction!

Khan: "Well now, let's see what a 23rd Century Black Bitch tastes

like..."

Kirk freaks out, even startling Khan. Spock neck-pinches two of Khan's

henchmen. McCoy grabs two phasers and throws them--one to Kirk and

one to Spock. A phaser fight breaks out. Khan's men fan out, open up

lockers and break out Energy Pike weapons (like light sabers on

steroids with beams that whip around. Very cool and deadly!)...

Khan grabs Uhura again and Kirk goes after him, running through the

ship.

Kirk (to Spock and McCoy as he chases Khan): "Get back to the

Enterprise!"

McCoy argues. Spock argues. Spock applies logic explaining that Khan

has many times his strength and can't fight him. "But he's got Uhura!"

blah blah blah. They take off after Kirk.

Spock (to Kirk): "Under Star Fleet regulations, Captain..."

Kirk: "There's no Time for this."

Kirk drops to the deck as we realize McCoy pressed a tranquilizer hypo

to his arm.

McCoy (Angry): "Satisified, Mr. Spock?"

Spock's eyebrow shoots up...

They beam back to the Enterprise but find one of Khan's men operating

the transporter! "Hands up!" Energy Pikes close-in on Kirk and co.
They're taken prisoner. Khan has his ship!


Back on the Botany Bay in a dimly-lit Sleeping Quarters compartment,

Uhura is crouching down in a corner. Khan approaches. He is topless.

Khan: "Ah, my dear. Now I grant you a gift which few Natural human

women have experienced..."

Shot from rear, Khan approaches Uhura. He drops his pants. The

doorway swooshes shut but we can hear Uhura scream. A scream of

pain, shock, pleasure, awe--or all four?


On the Enterprise...

Kirk, Spock, and McCoy are thrown into the brig where they meet the

Klingons.
They learn that Khan's crew have all been revived and Most of Kirk's

are now in the cryopods on the Botany Bay.

Various exchanges between Kirk, Spock, and McCoy. "We wouldn't Be

here if..." etc.

Kirk emplores the Klingons to join forces...

Commander Krode: "Work with you, Kirk? I would rather suck a dead

tribble!"

A fight breaks out. Khan's guards find it very entertaining and approach

closer for a better view. They get decked. Everyone escapes the brig.
The Klingons run to reclaim their own ship.

Kirk (to Commander Krode as they leave): "Start sucking."

We cut to the Bridge. We see Chekov under guard. Kirk and Spock

emerge another fight as They learn to properly use Khan's Energy Pike

weapons in combat and eventually regain control of the ship. Chekov

gets it bad. McCoy treats him. Unfortunately the bridge is in even

worse shape with consoles sliced in half, sparks and smoke

everywhere...

Spock runs to the Intruder Control Station: "Shipboard phasers set to

Stun and Inverted."

Kirk: "Isolate Bridge deck and fire all phasers."

Exterior Enterprise. Phaser mounts pop up all over the hull and do a

curious 180-degree flip. The outer hull blazes bright red for 10

seconds.

Cut to various shots of interior decks as we see Khan's crew drop

unconscious...

The viewscreen comes on.

Khan: "Your ship--give it to me, Kirk!"

Various insults exchanged here. Eventually a one-on-one meeting comes

up. Kirk refuses. Khan says he has no choice...

Khan's got Uhura and shows her on the viewer: "Then you sacrifice your

Black Bitch, Kirk."

Kirk gives his famous "Khaaahn!" scream and the screen goes black.

Kirk: "I'm beaming over there."

McCoy: "Jim, that's what he Wants..."

Kirk: "Then he's gonna get It."

As Kirk departs for the transporter room, we see a third Energy Pike

wand sticking out of his back pants.

Kirk beams over. We cut to a view of the Botany Bay on the main

screen. Portions of its hull open up revealing bad-ass laser cannons!
First two, then four, then a dozen, then two dozen...

McCoy: "I've got a BAD feeling about this."

Spock: "They're targeting us. Interesting... Old-style pulse lasers."

McCoy: "Spock! Do Something!"

Spock takes the Helm. He jestures for McCoy to take Navigation.

Spock: "I Am, Doctor..."

McCoy: "What the hell am I doing Here? I'm a Doctor not a Russian!"

Lots of button-pushing. Spock tells McCoy press this, do that, monitor

this... The Enterprise swings around, still barely maneuverable on one

nacelle. Phasers fire on the Botany Bay but the Botany Bay scores

some serious hits on the E first...

The Botany Bay is rolling around as Kirk materializes in the dark.

We hear Khan's voice in the blackness: "Your ship is Sinking, Kirk..."
We see from Kirk's point of view a shitload of cryo-cubicles Stacked

with Enterprise crewmen in suspended animation. These include Scotty

and Sulu!

Kirk (ignites his Energy Pike): "You'll pay for this..."

Cut back to Exterior of the Botany Bay and Enterprise still blasting the

shit out of each other. The Enterprise now has No nacelles left.
The Botany Bay's extteior is in bad shape too with its fins shot off, but

it's stopped firing.

Spock (checking targeting display): "All weapons neutralized"

McCoy (sighing): "At Last..."

But then airlocks pop open on the Botany Bay's exterior and space

suited crewmen float out with jetpacks. They're heading toward the

Enterprise blasting away. The main screen explodes.

Spock: "Prepare to repel boarders"

Spock runs for the turbo-lift. McCoy follows: "SPOCK!?!"

Cut back to the Botany Bay Interior:

A long sequence ensues with Kirk and Khan fighting. This is a bad-ass

fight! Energy Pikes eventually sputter and fail resulting in

hand-to-hand... Khan picks Kirk up and throws him around. Just when

Khan thinks he's done-in Kirk, comic relief is interjected: Kirk kicks him

in the genitals. Khan screams, releases Kirk who runs off.

Khan: "At least Fight like a Man! Coward!"

Deep within the Enteprise, Spock and McCoy emerge from a turbo-lift.
Spock says the space assault force is headed for the shuttle bay.

McCoy's ready to panic. Spock tells him the logical course of action is

to ambush them.

Spock: "Logically they will have to pass Jefferies Tube Delta."

McCoy: "I'm not trained for this."

Spock: "Neither were you trained to pilot a Class One ship of the line,

Doctor, until approximately 13.43 minutes ago..."

Back on the Botany Bay, Kirk's wandered into another compartment.

He hears a voice...

Spock Prime: "Jim!"

Prime is found bound, in a bad way with various metal implants

through his skull...

Back to the Enterprise, various shots of Jefferies Tube Delta...
Space suited warriors begin climbing aboard, marching through

airlocks.

Close-up of JTD as Spock and McCoy leap out. They are armed with

phaser rifles and wearing combat gear. They open fire and drop Khan's

soldiers.

McCoy: "I used to be a Doctor. Now I'm a gunner..."

Spock raises an eyebrow.

On the Botany Bay, Kirk and Spock Prime confront Khan.
Various chit-chats are exchanged. Khan boasting of his superior

strength and intellect. He threatens to turn off the life support systems

and kill all of Kirk's crew in cryo pods.

Kirk ignores most of Khan's threats: "Where is Lieutenant Uhura?"

Khan points to an adjacent compartment. We see Uhura unconscious,

her uniform shredded, her breasts partially exposed.

Khan: "Women three hundred years ago were Better. More Durable."

He grabs Kirk and lifts him Vader-style to the ceiling.

Just then we hear the transporter effect. Klingons materialize and raise

their weapons.

Klingon: "You can keep Kirk but Khan is Ours..."

A beat. Huh?

Klingon: "We're on a mission. We need the secret of Khan's genetic

engineering to save our race."


Captain's Log voiceover here. Outlining the situation with Klingons and

Khan. An agreement is drawn up. The Enterprise crew are revived and

back on duty. Blah blah blah...

Varous shots and dialogue exchanged (i.e. PAGES MISSING!) with Khan

telling Kirk "This is not over... We'll meet again..." blah blah blah...

Chekov and Sulu are looking good. Stupid Russian joke from Chekov.

Sulu says he's ready to leap back behind the help like a tree-squirrel.
Scotty is still confined to sickay but happy so long as he has access to

Treknical blueprints and manuals...

In Sickbay:

We find Spock Prime nearly dead on total life support systems. McCoy

says he can't save him. Spock Prime mind-melds with our Spock,

transferring his katra and all his future knowledge before dying.

McCoy: "He's dead, Jim."

McCoy: "At least Uhura will be alright..."

After a moment of silence, Uhura (sitting on an adjacent diagnostic

bed) turns to Kirk: "Captain, I'm pregnant."

FADE OUT

END

Over End Credits is Spock Prime's: "Space, The Final Frontier. These

Are The Continuing Voyages..."

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Ok, honestly I don't believe any of this. Really in terms of what the plotline will be, there isn't much information out right now. Just recently I watched a MTV interview with Benedict Cumberbatch about the Star Trek XII movie and he was in my opinion pretty tight-lipped. I don't know if that's the same for any of the other crew/cast though.

If you don't mind me asking. Where did you find this "script/summary"?
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