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| Deleted User | Feb 20 2012, 11:48 AM Post #1 |
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Awakening: ( PLEASE BOLD YOUR SELECTIONS ) "In front of you there floats a sword, a shield, and a staff....each represents a power....which do you choose?" 1. The power of the warrior. (++Attack) 2. The power of the defender. (++Defense) 3. The power of the mystic. (++Magic) "What's most important to you?" 1. Being number 1. (+Speed) 2. Friendship. (+Defense) 3. My prize possessions. (+Magic) "What do you want out of life?" 1. To see rare sights. (+Defense) 2. To broaden my horizons. (+Speed) 3. To be strong. (+Attack) "What are you afraid of?" 1. Getting old. (+Magic) 2. Being different. (+Defense) 3. Being indecisive. (+Attack) Name: Jake Ateris Alias: The Mechanical Master Age: Appears to be 24. Actual age, 3-5 years. Element: Nothingness Race: Android Home World: Polaris – A planet with highly sophisticated technology light years ahead of what anyone currently has. The planet disappeared, and Jake is now in Traverse Town trying to find it. Job: Travelling Warrior Weapons: Imitation System – The Imitation System is the improvement to the Pseudo System Jake formerly used and combines both the Pseudo and the Creator System. This is also streamlined, and so requires less power for Jake to use. The Imitation System is inside of him and cannot be removed without disabling all of his core combat capabilities. The Imitation System is also improved by Vexen, able to recharge off of solar energy like Jake is. Ethereal Claymore Coder Gloves Bleeding Rose Targeting Visor Magic: No Summons: None presently Special Techniques: 10101023031830318031831031830831031 (Translated, Central Processor) – Jake will hold out both hands, covered in the Coder Gloves and the Phantom Claymore will appear in the hands. Using the Imitation System along with the power of the Coder Gloves Jake will charge the Ethereal Claymore with one element other than nothingness. With that done, he will swing it at an enemy and slash at them. If the slash connects, this does high nothingness and whatever element damage to them. This is one of his techniques that can be done as many times per thread as he wants to. Central Processor is only the first of his techniques, and is not even the most powerful one possessed in his arsenal actually. 704804802480282041808120484108420-4181 (Translated Viral Burst) Jake will hold out his hands while wearing the Coder Gloves and shoot out several homing spheres of each element, five total to go after an enemy. Each sphere will do low damage if it hits an enemy and will also cause them to have mute for 2 posts. The Viral Burst can be used once every seven posts and is one of his more advanced techniques that he can perform and use. The Coder Gloves technique is one of his favorites to actually use. 204384108208028210180180418048204802 (Translated: Data Flow) Jake will use the flow of data in his body in order to heal himself up to half of what his maximum HP at one time could be. This is something he will use if in severe straits. It will also heal up his body somewhat. Data Flow is a useful tactic for when he does need to repair himself after all. The Data Flow is his alternative to potions which simply would not work on him. This is his way of healing up. 49642480258520582052853205280528520528523 (Translated Dual Slash) Using the Imitation System, Jake will form two swords…one in each of his hands. They will be curved blades and he will use them to slash an enemy. Each slash will be charged with a random element, and Jake will perform fourteen of these on an opponent. Each slash will do pitiful damage to the opponent, but it will add up of course. This does not need to reload. 4204822408103428018430180484018410481048401 (Translated: “Lethal Force, Authorized.” Jake will de-summon whatever weapon he has at the time and go into a series of unarmed combat attacks at his opponent. The attacks will be calculated, highly destructive and do high amounts of damage per hit to the target. This can reload after fourteen posts. 390244842084048404820284024842084 (Translated “Crash Course in pain”) – Jake will use all manner of cheap shots on a person. This includes poking them in the eyes, stepping on their toes…for men kicking them hard where it hurts…and various other things in order to render his opponent unable to fight back. The Cheap Shots do not need to reload however. 420582058024840428204282048420828 (Translated: “Taste this. Crimson Steel!”) Jake will pull out a knife in one hand and a shorter sword more like a wazikachi in the other and dash at an enemy. Both blades will charge with nothingness energy colored crimson and the Poison Element simultaneously. Once this is done, he will do his best to ensure he cuts an opponent. Once this is done the opponent will suffer poisoned status for the next 6 turns. 0950385038530385053835053805835085035805 (Translated:“For the honor of the Organization, you will feel the fury of my dynamic might. Zealot Burst!”) Jake will hold out a hand and unleash a piercing beam of light from one hand towards an opponent, doing low damage. Does high damage to dark elementals or heartless however. This can be used as much as he wants. The Zealot Burst was developed so that he could do more damage against the Heartless. This mainly would be his coping mechanism for not being able to hit them as much as he wanted. 83403850538350850385053287-52820528520852 (Translated: Coded Defense) Five Screens will appear floating around Jake. Each will be a different color and tied to a different element. The screens however have multiple purposes. The first purpose is that anything less than a GA of special techniques or similar will be completely absorbed by the screen corresponding to that element. Once this is done, the screens will retaliate by sending a bolt of elemental energy to strike whoever had launched the attack of the opposite element. In other words, the person who attacked would be hit by their elemental opposite. This does low damage per hit. It does not need to reload. 59532358502823052802850528052852052850852085 (Translated: Tesla Shock) Jake will hold out his hands and use the Imitation System. From the skies, a massive blast of lightning will come down and strike one opponent. This will do high damage, and paralyze the opponent. It can be done five times per thread. The Tesla Shock is one of his more powerful attacks. The Tesla Shock is a move that he made himself in order to evaporate massive amounts of enemies in one go. This reloads after fifteen posts. 310481084202842042802823505-022-58228052082 (Translated: “Blaze Storm” ) Jake will hold out his hands and use the Imitation System. Unlike the Tesla Shock, from the skies will come a massive torrent of flames to burn for high damage any and all enemies on the battle field. It will also give them the burning status effect. To do this Jake closes his eyes, puts his hands out in front of him and yells out the binary code needed. This reloads after fifteen posts. 24024824042802481240812051385312058202585208520 (Translated “Warranty Expired.” ) Jake will lose twenty percent of his health right when he does this attack, but will rush at an enemy grab them and send electrical shocks through himself to do damage to his opponent. This is a self-damaging attack but can also hurt his enemies. It is not something you want to be caught on the wrong side of as it is a fairly powerful attack in his arsenal for him to use. This can only be done four x per thread. This continues for three posts and immediately locks him from doing Tesla Shock or Blaze Storm until he recovers his full amount of health. 420428202482408240248021-41-1840148002802083208 (Translated “Magnification at .003”) Jake will unleash a rapid salvo of blasts from his Coder Gloves at any and all enemies around the field and each blast will do moderate damage. 20 will be fired using this technique at a time, in hopes of stacking the damage on an opponent. 2040252840284204280428240840248420842042842084 “Prime Directive” If there are Heartless nearby, even the slightest Shadow Jake’s eyes will glow red and lock onto them and those will be the ones he attacks first. All others will be disregarded. It does not matter who the others are, but the Heartless will be his first priority. 0148401280481201484041840418410814048104184048. “Free Code.” When this is done, Jake can temporarily resist the Prime Directive allowing him to target whoever he sees fit at any point in time. Joint Techniques: Abilities: One Hitter Non MP Creature + 5 Special Tech Slots Guard Teleport (This is done using a Matter Converter, allowing him to get to any world no matter what as long as he has the coordinates in his memory banks) Limit Breaks: 14240482018404180181084`10412814048012840148410418041841041841084140-84120418410840484108410418108410418108410814084. (Translated: Taste the Fury of my Creators) Jake will perform a cheap shot and depending on male or female will be the execution. After that is done Jake will box his opponent with his hands charged with various elemental energies due to the Coder Gloves, and then he will kick his opponent hard. After that, he will summon the Ethereal Claymore and then slash his opponent three times. All in all, this adds up to massive damage. This can only be done twice per thread as it is a limit break. Character Description: (When cloaked) (When not) Biography: On the world Polaris, the scientists there had learned about the elements and so a bold revolution in new technology was made, that of androids powered by Elemental Gems they had found. Several failed ones had to be scrapped before any successes could be made. So the scientists took all the precautions and went to work on what they hoped would be their first success after 25 failures with the technology. This one was unlike the others and actually worked. The Sentient Elemental Combat Droid or SECD as they called it for short was one of their more advanced weapons. And then the Heartless came across Polaris to strike terror and inflict misery. So, the scientists had to upgrade the android to be even more powerful. What they did is download into the memory banks of the android every bit of invention they had ever created. Every last piece of tech was stored in his memory banks as a precaution should the Heartless take the world. But the android Jake Ateris worked better than expected. The soldiers and their conventional weapons such as lasers did little against the heartless but Jake led the charge using his elemental affinity of lightning to barbecue the heartless with massive shocks. But the scientists knew that not even Jake could continue the battle against the Heartless Forever even if that was what he was built for. So they built several inventions and tried them, but none of them would work. So Jake was modified and converted to Nothingness Element, he would be installed with another powerful technology, Pseudo. Now he has been sent on a mission to see if there are ways to destroy the Heartless. Jake would also be entrusted with on board his ship all of their most powerful relics so that he could find wielders for them should their world die. Little did Jake know the world was Overtaken by heartless when he left. However, recent events such as an encounter at the Castle of the Beast with the Heartless left Jake reconsidering his role in the grand scheme of things until another teleportation mishap. There he met Vexen, and would be swiftly upgraded. Upon meeting the Superior, he would be given the phantom claymore, a weapon made out of a technological version of nothingness manipulation. And now he has started a new journey in life to help the Organization and also to make the Heartless suffer. Personality: Jake Ateris was a machine created for one purpose and one purpose only to slaughter the heartless. Over time however thanks to the massive amounts of data his neural network was exposed to, he has sort of gained sentience and a personality. Jake has become very violent and aggressive and impulsive. Also he is very insistent on getting his own way and does not like to take no for an answer from people. Jake is also very investigative and will do what it takes to get information. Jake can also be seen as hot headed as he will often leap into things without thinking them through. But when the chips are all down the android can turn Bi Polar and assume a colder and more ruthless personality than he has. This personality is thought to be corruption by the android. So he does not like to go into the bi-polar mode but will if the need arises. However, he has changed due to the loyalties he now has to the Organization thanks to Vexen essentially saving his life. Jake has become someone you can rely on and someone who will rarely surrender even if the battle is a lost cause. Also he has become less aggressive to a degree anyway. He has also become more level headed. RP Sample: Teleportation was an imprecise science and after recharging himself to full power Jake had added another attack to his memory banks. Arriving in another unknown place…this time Jake was rather starting to get annoyed. Why did his teleportation keep messing up on him? What did the universe have against him that kept causing him to teleport to random locations he did not want to go to? Something would need to be corrected about this flaw in his programs and capabilities. But he did not know any scientists skilled enough to fix him so he could control the coordinates of where he teleported. Great, now he was somewhere else. His sensors did not indicate any heartless and if there was he had a new surprise ready for them of sorts something that would blow them away literally. This situation kept getting out of control. First he had teleported to Beast’s Castle which now had 4 heartless too many and now he arrived here. Okay, definitely the flaw with his teleportation would need to be examined and fixed, but he would need to find someone worthy of the Crusader’s Sword since his control over the blade was weakening…. The Pariah Slash was growing harder for him to perform. Worlds often held many secrets and Jake as the last survivor of his even though he did not know it made a promise to himself that he would learn to open those secrets and record them in his memory banks in order that he might have more information. This whole teleportation messing up thing was starting to make the android reconsider using the teleportation. It was however safer than him piloting a Gummi Ship fortunately unless he could find one that he could not mess up by piloting. "Why do my teleportations keep messing up?" |
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| Deleted User | Mar 8 2012, 09:19 AM Post #2 |
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Did some edits. Can this be re-approved? |
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| Negi | Mar 8 2012, 11:10 AM Post #3 |
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DENY ALL THE THINGS!!![]() Jake I deny your changes for the simple reason I already told you NOT to edit your character book every day which you have been doing. SO put everything back and actually make an attempt to earn changes. You can't just beef up your character for no reason and so constantly. That's all, give it some time and you'll be able to make changes for now stay the same >_> |
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| Deleted User | Mar 8 2012, 12:57 PM Post #4 |
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There. Edited.... |
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Shiva created by Sarah & Delirium of the ZNR




From his memories of the Analytical capabilities of his creator and also the skill Vexen showed in repairing him the Targeting Visor has been made. The Targeting Visor allows Jake to see opponents more clearly. This can one time protect him from blindness, but that is it. It can only stop blindness once per thread. In addition, it can see in Infra-Red, Ultra-violet, Polaroid and X-Ray. The Targeting Visor is something Jake made so that he can hide the glowing red eyes he has as well. It can also see through smoke or similar, filtering it out.
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