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| hostilecrayon | Aug 11 2005, 09:36 AM Post #1 |
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Marci: What is the world coming to? You've become me, Xantar's become Slappy... Dragon: I bet Xantar is like the ultimate designated driver Dragon: drops off all his drunk buddies at each other's ex-girlfriends' houses Mystic Gohan: xantar has had his lasting effects on our easily influenced minds Mystic Gohan: hes probably at home cackling as we speak Me: Xantar never really talks unless you talk to him first. Marci: And that will hold until he makes the first move. I've learned. Don't ever go into a Xantar conversation blind. It's like going swimming naked. You make sure there aren't any sharks nearby and that you don't have any open wounds first. My LJ | |
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| Xantar | Aug 11 2005, 01:55 PM Post #2 |
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Not Jeff Probst
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Title: In the Shadow of the Triforce Link: http://s4.invisionfree.com/The_RPG_Spot/in...p?showtopic=340 Fandom: The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Genre: Eh? Review preference: Thread. Let's have a discussion. Special notes: Do you know what's going on? Do you understand why it's written the way it is? |
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| hostilecrayon | Aug 12 2005, 12:13 AM Post #3 |
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Title: Traces of Distant Days Link: http://s4.invisionfree.com/The_RPG_Spot/in...p?showtopic=464 Fandom: Hikaru no Go Genre: Romance/Angst Review Preferrence: Thread Special Notes: Shounen-ai, one sided. G rated. I've heard from other reviewers that though Touya is rathar proper, it still sounds too formal for a journal, even for him. I'm looking for comments on this as well as emotional appeal. |
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| Deirdre_the_Sorrowful | Aug 14 2005, 08:23 AM Post #4 |
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Title: The Unfortunate Side Effects of War Link: http://s4.invisionfree.com/The_RPG_Spot/in...p?showtopic=458 Fandom: none Genre: surreal Review Preference: thread Special notes: there's violence, but don't worry; no animals were hurt in the creation of this story. as far as area of concern, the voice seems inconsistant to me. |
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