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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 30 2006, 06:15 AM (170 Views) | |
| Holocollector | Jun 30 2006, 06:15 AM Post #1 |
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Christmas is Coming
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I wanted to motivate myself so wrote this. White Thoughts I have empty white thoughts, stillness, Whiteness that has black slanted blocks in darkness. Darkness obscured by a huge white fence. Everything lay still gathered under a white sky eldritch, Unreal. Bending the fabric of space. So here I lay rafting though the rift, I am here. I like this emptiness so much it is gold crafted. The wings of destiny destroy time and rhyme. I look out and get out from my rifting rafting in the rift, I climb the huge white fence but fall off. Silence is music When there is ryhme. Where am I? |
| Note: My english writing skills need work so donīt even think of asking me to change it entirely or relearn my english (the impossible). I donīt like the signature, I willl eventually add a picture. | |
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| hostilecrayon | Jun 30 2006, 03:19 PM Post #2 |
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In Repair
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Very nice. I like the emotions it evokes. Beautiful! |
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Marci: What is the world coming to? You've become me, Xantar's become Slappy... Dragon: I bet Xantar is like the ultimate designated driver Dragon: drops off all his drunk buddies at each other's ex-girlfriends' houses Mystic Gohan: xantar has had his lasting effects on our easily influenced minds Mystic Gohan: hes probably at home cackling as we speak Me: Xantar never really talks unless you talk to him first. Marci: And that will hold until he makes the first move. I've learned. Don't ever go into a Xantar conversation blind. It's like going swimming naked. You make sure there aren't any sharks nearby and that you don't have any open wounds first. My LJ | |
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| Holocollector | Jul 1 2006, 02:29 AM Post #3 |
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Christmas is Coming
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Well what did you get from the poem? I might have made it a little hard to see. White thoughts is pretty abstract imo as are poems but this more so. Before I say thank you I want to know. |
| Note: My english writing skills need work so donīt even think of asking me to change it entirely or relearn my english (the impossible). I donīt like the signature, I willl eventually add a picture. | |
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