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White Thoughts
Topic Started: Jun 30 2006, 06:15 AM (170 Views)
Holocollector
Christmas is Coming
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I wanted to motivate myself so wrote this.

White Thoughts

I have empty white thoughts, stillness,
Whiteness that has black slanted blocks in darkness.
Darkness obscured by a huge white fence.

Everything lay still gathered under a white sky eldritch,
Unreal. Bending the fabric of space.
So here I lay rafting though the rift, I am here.

I like this emptiness so much it is gold crafted.
The wings of destiny destroy time and rhyme.

I look out and get out from my rifting rafting in the rift,
I climb the huge white fence but fall off. Silence is music
When there is ryhme.

Where am I?
Note: My english writing skills need work so donīt even think of asking me to change it entirely or relearn my english (the impossible). I donīt like the signature, I willl eventually add a picture.
 
hostilecrayon
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Very nice. I like the emotions it evokes. Beautiful!
Marci: What is the world coming to? You've become me, Xantar's become Slappy...

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Dragon: I bet Xantar is like the ultimate designated driver
Dragon: drops off all his drunk buddies at each other's ex-girlfriends' houses


Mystic Gohan: xantar has had his lasting effects on our easily influenced minds
Mystic Gohan: hes probably at home cackling as we speak


Me: Xantar never really talks unless you talk to him first.
Marci: And that will hold until he makes the first move. I've learned. Don't ever go into a Xantar conversation blind.
It's like going swimming naked. You make sure there aren't any sharks nearby and that you don't have any open wounds first.


My LJ
 
Holocollector
Christmas is Coming
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Well what did you get from the poem? I might have made it a little hard to see.

White thoughts is pretty abstract imo as are poems but this more so. Before I say thank you I want to know.
Note: My english writing skills need work so donīt even think of asking me to change it entirely or relearn my english (the impossible). I donīt like the signature, I willl eventually add a picture.
 
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