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Sweet; comedy for the populace
Topic Started: Mar 26 2008, 06:41 AM (153 Views)
Holocollector
Christmas is Coming
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Sweet

I try eating candy
But I don’t taste it.
White sparks fly like
Sugar straws,
I load a Pez candy
Dispenser, inside a
Magazine.

A kid in the candy
Store, such innocence.
Reckless, rewarded.

I do not take them
Like drugs.
I take a leave of absence
And imagine the sense
Of reward.

Cotton candy like cotton,
Stuffed in bullet wounds
The sweet smell
Sugar confections

I stuff gum inside
A gun hoping
For the best.

The chocolates
Melt my heart,
Alcohol inside
Them a serum in
The hospital.

Boredom hits me,
I eat candy,
Sugar in the blood
I feel electric.

I chip of a piece
Of a mint, a kid, my
Teeth fall off
Recipe for revenge.

A kid in the candy
Store, such innocence
Reckless, rewarded.
Note: My english writing skills need work so donīt even think of asking me to change it entirely or relearn my english (the impossible). I donīt like the signature, I willl eventually add a picture.
 
Davemcc
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Hilarity king of RPG Spot
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Sweet!
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Holocollector
Christmas is Coming
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Thanks Dave the only one that replied. You just made my day. No one ever replies so many thanks to you Dave since I can see you are a person who likes to give his opinion.
Note: My english writing skills need work so donīt even think of asking me to change it entirely or relearn my english (the impossible). I donīt like the signature, I willl eventually add a picture.
 
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