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My Own Secret Oasis (short poem); umm, falling into temptation?
Topic Started: Jun 20 2009, 07:58 PM (423 Views)
Crystal
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My Own Secret Oasis

Desire suspended in my firey core
-heart racing
-done waiting
-gotta be something more...

I think they call them
"butterflies"-I'm nervous, is that right?
-so close to saying no...
I'm gunna lose the fight...

Aroma...
-sweet curl of perfume that leads me too...
Oh God, I can't look!
-temptation kindling the rage
of a life I should've never took
on.
Edited by Crystal, Jun 20 2009, 08:00 PM.
Happily Married to Patrick{(ghosty)} <3

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Nemesis
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That's pretty good. I never could get into writing poetry. You seem to have a knack at it.
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Ghosty
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I like it a lot.

It's deep yet simple enough to understand. Good job, dear
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Crystal
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Thank you, Nemesis:) Hopefully you'll continue to read my work:)

Thanks, dear...sorry but I don't think I can write one about you:/
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