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Universal Century Gundam; Suggestions and Table of Contents
Topic Started: Apr 22 2012, 03:39 PM (2,479 Views)
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Will updated this thread as more chapters are written so as not to make people have the scour the forums for them.


  • Chapter One: "Richmond"
  • Chapter Two: "Tieria"
  • Chapter Three: "Trixie"
  • Chapter Four: "Shirudo"
  • Chapter Five: "Shade" [Coming Soon]
  • Chapter Six: "Sol" [Coming Soon]
  • Chapter Seven: "Yuuichi" [Coming Soon]
  • Chapter Eight: "Tinkle" [Coming Soon]
  • Chapter Nine: "Rosenthal" [Coming Soon]
  • Chapter Ten: "Woogie" [Coming Soon]
  • Chapter Eleven: "Yaranaika" [Coming Soon]
  • More to come...


If you wish to post ideas for later chapters, concepts regarding your own pilots in the story, or if you have a good idea/suggestion for your own chapter please post it on this thread c:
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After reading the first chapter, I was amazed. It was odd to see you having a good writing ability, let alone any Broman having any sort of literate skills. :U

Joking aside, I enjoyed the first chapter. Gives a good story to the generic warfares of UCGO. With your permission, I'd like to either involve Sol in your own story, or create a separate story relative to this one on the EF side.

The reasoning behind my first idea is that I'm teamless, which means I can be a lone entity to either be a simple cannon fodder character, or something bigger. Anything really, I don't mind.

If not that, then I'd love to make a separate story for the EF side. Mostly because you're going to be telling this from a Zeon perspective, and having an EF player write in the same universe from the EF perspective would be nice for us. :v
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I can write a chapter for myself to include as a side-story if you like. I'm actually a decent writer.

My idea was to run a solo-mission raid on an EF camp in my DOM. Or perhaps with one or a few other people.

With my whole thing with the ZCA, too, can I be included as something of a supplier (also seeing combat in my Dom, of course)?
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An interesting thing I've always thought of Trixie, with her adherence to shell weapons even on beam-capable suits, is that she's actually afraid of them for various reasons. One such reason is because she was involved in the Zeon's first beam weapon project, and one of the prototype rifles backfired on her during the initial test firing, nearly getting her killed. You can incorporate that if and how you want- it'd be interesting (and no doubt amusing), I think, for some to discover that "The Great and Powerful" Trixie is actually flat-out frightened by the weapon type most often employed by the EFF.

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@Sol I already have a chapter for you planned out, actually. And this story will be told from both sides. Chapter Two, "Tieria", will be told from the EF perspective.

@Durbs
If you want to make a side story for Wesley, by all means go ahead. Up to you if you wanna include it in the same canon as my story (if you do, I'll link to it on this thread ^^). Either way, I'll make references to ZCA too. And you'll see some action in a Dom ;P

@Trixie That's an interesting idea. I'll totally put that in your chapter for your backstory.
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Oh boy, Sol gets a chapter. The kamikaze idiot with shells-fer-brains. :U
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OH, almost forgot! If anyone has preferred suits for their pilots to use, you should say so now.
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Fanfiction for this game?

... I can't even begin to comprehend the massive stroking in this thread.
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Sleepyhead
Apr 22 2012, 09:26 PM
Fanfiction for this game?

... I can't even begin to comprehend the massive stroking in this thread.
:U I'm giving everyone their time to shine. It's a fun project and something to do.
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Naranja
Apr 22 2012, 09:25 PM
OH, almost forgot! If anyone has preferred suits for their pilots to use, you should say so now.
Trixie's typical suits are MS-06R-1A Zaku High Mobility, MS-06 Zaku II, or captured RX-77-3 Guncannon. More rarely, usually during major battles, she'll use an MS-14S Gelgoog Command type. All (sans the Guncannon) are painted in her her custom cyanish-blue color scheme, the color she usually has her 14S as. Pick-n-choose based on the situation and battle; Guncannons get pulled out for defensive ops, Zaku variants for city warfare, and the Gelgoog for large confrontations.
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Sleepyhead
Apr 22 2012, 09:26 PM
Fanfiction for this game?

... I can't even begin to comprehend the massive stroking in this thread.
Assuming there's much else this game has going for it.

Anyways, on the subject of suits. Keep me in the ice blue G Gundam.

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if i am in it then Keep me in a full armored gundam blue color

or just a random guncannon does not matter which
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Sleepyhead
Apr 22 2012, 09:26 PM
Fanfiction for this game?

... I can't even begin to comprehend the massive stroking in this thread.
BOREDOM BEWARE: You're in for a scare! :v




You should know me well enough, Naranja, Black/Red Gouf or 14B as appropriate to the situation.
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Black and White Ground Gundam or a Blue G2, G Gundam for regular skirmishes and G2 for big fights.

Also feel free to make me into a cannon fodder that dies unceremoniously in the first 3 minutes of battle.
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All you do is judge, Sleepy. Either way, I won't stop writing it just because some people think the very concept is "retarded". I know the majority of you enjoy the concept and I'll continue writing it for myself and for you guys.
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id like to be in a GC2 if you decided to use me,

i can die alot too lol since thats how things are currently :§
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Chapter 2 is posted. It's a little short, but it'll make for some good build-up.
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can you add me in a Ground GM plz :3
:with dying and screaming scenes..
lol...
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Humorous note for the Richmond Warfare thing: Tieria and I are actually like, best buddies, and he knows I usually hate going to Warfare due to my computer being shit, touchpad, etc. There is some sort of humorous interaction you could pull from this, I am sure. We find enough ways to get our own humorous interactions out of it, after all. :v
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the story is awesome!! :D
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the story is awesome!! :D
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youblack
Apr 23 2012, 04:00 AM
the story is awesome!! :D
So awesome it made you double-post.

Also, I forgot to mention Trixie's love of using Adzams, but I doubt many people needed to be reminded of that. Those she actually does custom color; the cyan-ness blends in with the daytime sky a little better.
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Have Sol and Trixie engage in a shell-duel of the ages ending with Sol disposing of the pony menace and her terrible magic tricks. :U
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The Great and Powerful Trixie
Apr 23 2012, 06:08 AM
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Apr 23 2012, 04:00 AM
the story is awesome!! :D
So awesome it made you double-post.

Also, I forgot to mention Trixie's love of using Adzams, but I doubt many people needed to be reminded of that. Those she actually does custom color; the cyan-ness blends in with the daytime sky a little better.
I actually would enjoy an Adzam battle in chapter 3... It should be realistic to expect Trixie to attack in an Adzam....

Although if it blows up, it has to be in a really comedic way.
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Sol
Apr 23 2012, 06:49 AM
Have Sol and Trixie engage in a shell-duel of the ages ending with Sol disposing of the pony menace and her terrible magic tricks. :U
At the end of a long, drawn out battle, with both sides having used all their ammo, Sol, in a victory charge, lunges at trixie's suit and activates the self destruct, taking the pony out with him!
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late post as usual XD, Great idea, and an even better read.
BTW if you have need of fodder, Errym usually pilots a Zaku II FZ with a focus on Shell based weaponry.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
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I gotta be in this B-) Like as A Shady "information dealer" ..Hey, we all got questions..and I got the answers. B-)
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Chapter 3 is up. Next chapter we get the battle for the cliffs, and you can expect a lot of action!
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put me into a cannon fodder mecha, grey GM. just make sure i put up a good fight before i blow to pieces or something like that, depends on your courtesy.
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Here's to hoping the next chapter comes out soon~
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I too shall add some stuffs later on featuring Yuuichi and My trademark Black 06S. if you have fought my main, you know i litteraly dont use ANYTHING in battle but my black 06S. If its not black, im not using it :v
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Next chapter(s) will come out tomorrow, I worked yesterday and I work tonight.

Also alright Yasa, expect a chapter for your pilot coming soon. I have chapters 4 through 9 outlined with notes and I'm ready to polish them up.
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Yasawatse
Apr 26 2012, 07:10 PM
I too shall add some stuffs later on featuring Yuuichi and My trademark Black 06S. if you have fought my main, you know i litteraly dont use ANYTHING in battle but my black 06S. If its not black, im not using it :v
i remember them days B-)
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Naranja
Apr 26 2012, 07:27 PM
Next chapter(s) will come out tomorrow, I worked yesterday and I work tonight.

Also alright Yasa, expect a chapter for your pilot coming soon. I have chapters 4 through 9 outlined with notes and I'm ready to polish them up.
excellent work so far, hope to see more soon ^^
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Chapter 4 is up. I'm really curious to see the feedback on this one.
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poor sparky, he got doused, D:


also, reb would like to be mentioned or appear in this in some way
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bear
Apr 27 2012, 12:24 PM
poor sparky, he got doused, D:


also, reb would like to be mentioned or appear in this in some way
Sure thing. A big part or smaller one? I have plenty of spots open for both, plus I need to know what suit.
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i've been splitting my time between RS Dom's(BB's) and either a green G2, or white/green ez8

either one is fine, but i'd like to see some airtime, lol.


also, it was requested through TS that i demand to be shown at least once with a mail truck, lol.
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bear
Apr 27 2012, 12:39 PM
also, it was requested through TS that i demand to be shown at least once with a mail truck, lol.
I can do this.
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oh yeah, character details and such... name is Robert Bryant, moniker is Johnny Reb, and i'll leave character history and development to you, since it's your story and all.
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emphasis that I use a blue g3
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Heh, I guess Zero's in this story one way or another. Here's what I'd like to see from him:

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I had a quite a bit of fun thinking about this, especially what he'd pilot. You can give him a small part or a big part, depending on how interesting you think that backstory is. It's not set in stone either, you can take some creative liberties with it... except with the Mobile Suit, I really like the idea behind that Mobile Suit. lol
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/backstory :v

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...Yeah, that was long and i kinda got absorbed in it. I actually have MUCH more but i dont want to put you in any more of a box than i already have :v
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Oh cool, backstories. :U

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By God I got into that. Should we have a pilot dossier section in the fan-fiction section?
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You can blow up my Z gok'S in your stories whenever you want, heavens know I do it all the time and I just keep coming back to get them blown up again :D
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peruzzi, your sig is....mezmorizing :v
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Sol
Apr 27 2012, 07:44 PM
Oh cool, backstories. :U

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By God I got into that. Should we have a pilot dossier section in the fan-fiction section?
This suggestion is relevant to my interests. *Seconded*
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The only problem with a dossier is conflicting stories as far as fics done by different authours. If you want me to make a thread for UCG Pilot Dossiers (as in canon to my story), I'd welcome it.
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Naranja
Apr 30 2012, 03:34 PM
The only problem with a dossier is conflicting stories as far as fics done by different authours. If you want me to make a thread for UCG Pilot Dossiers (as in canon to my story), I'd welcome it.
Works for me. Also, I seem to overuse the Quote button in my posts.
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Sure, I'll throw my name into the hat.

My suit of choice happens to be the RGM-79SP. MacDougal has always been one to stick to his sniping duties, and readily runs away from close combat ("To live and fight another day."), relying on positioning and coordination over personal skill or combat prowess. He loves scotch whiskey and smoking a cigar or pipe. Personality wise, I guess a cross between Lt. Sleggar and Kai Shiden. A cynical, borderline-cowardly soldier, if nothing else.

Oh, and he has a mild Scotch-Irish accent, of course.
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MacDougal
Apr 30 2012, 05:09 PM

Oh, and he has a mild Scotch-Irish accent, of course.
SEE, these kinda things make you go.....wish i knew that earlier, lol not really but still...

I have no backstory :|

i just like using Rx-77-4's

GC2 FTW peoples!
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WTB Pilot Dossier. I'd make it, but I'm not certain how Naranja wants it to work.
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lost an arm & live another day, as cannon fodder mecha still able to pack some punch before it get totaled or being hamburgered. B-)

btw nice story Naranja, keep it up. :D
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I will make a dossier topic now.
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can i jump in another chapter? :U
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Silentdagger
May 2 2012, 05:19 AM
can i jump in another chapter? :U
Most likely, but I'm leaving for a week in like three days...so I'll announce here not to expect a story update to at least the 15th (though I may release Chapter 5 before I go, meaning it'll be until then for Chapter 6 if that turns out to be the case)
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What about Raus? will you write about him? :D
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Sieg has already been in the story, unless you're asking if he'll get a chapter? In which case, most likely. I intend to make one chapter for every pilot I'm personally familiar with.
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Naranja
May 4 2012, 10:06 AM
Sieg has already been in the story, unless you're asking if he'll get a chapter? In which case, most likely. I intend to make one chapter for every pilot I'm personally familiar with.
And who in your list? :D
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Besides the ones already listed... I really can't sit down and name them all at once. Members of Nintendo, Evil Academy, Shadow Squadron, Lone Battalion, BroManSquad...and a few players not in teams. I really don't have a solid list -- it's more like if I know a player and I think either: A) They'll fit in the story or B) They ask to be in the story and give me something interesting to work with, then I'll add them in.
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woot.once ur back,get me in a RX-79G,pls dont make me die fast lol.

make me survive until a ace pilot comes >:3
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You should add me as an Ace Pilot to appear in other peoples stories ;o
I only hate how my lagtop wont let me rape people the way i usually do in PvP in rich and newman :3
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I'll toss you in my next fanfic Kaiser, you'll be the grunt that dies first. :U
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You should make me Kaiser's abusive rival in the vein of Blue from the Pokemon games.

>also not having a chapter about me
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nah,make me die in the hands of Kaiser,make it epic :U
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If you make me a grunt, ill edit and fix your post sol ;o
@Mosu: <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Your writing is so bland and tasteless.
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Let me write my own deaths please :3
they must involve some form of malfunction or lag like they actually do xD
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Lady Kaiser
May 12 2012, 10:03 AM
Let me write my own deaths please :3
they must involve some form of malfunction or lag like they actually do xD
Or you end up getting confused and inexplicably attracted to the way I use my Mobile Suits, resulting in error of judgement and imminent death.

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WTB next chapter; will trade Zaku II.
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