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Draft Recruitment TG
Topic Started: Oct 27 2011, 06:18 PM (326 Views)
StGeorge
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Possible Recruitment TG:
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Feedback is very much appreciated obviously.
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Milograd
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I like the tone, however I can't help but think that it is a bit too focused on things such as movie-night as opposed to explaining what the UDL truly is. I'm not good at recruitment TGs or anything, but these are my thoughts. :P
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Harmoneia
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my 2 cents:

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Hey there! o/ St George here obviously.

Fancy helping out your friendly neighbourhood defending group, the United Defenders League? The UDL helps to (insert definition of our defending here), and we could always use a hand! Whether you join as a Merryman or merely one of our militia, defending with the UDL offers great opportunities to widen your NS experience and have fun at the same time.

And don't think we're all about kicking raider ass, oh no. The UDL also hosts a vibrant off mission scene, with movie night being an almost tradition.

You'll be surprised at the wide range of UDLers, from veteran gameplayers to roleplayers or NSGers interested in defending, or just want to try something new.

If you're interested, hit us up on http://s4.zetaboards.com/UDL or come chat with us on http://04.chat.mibbit.com/?server=irc.esper.net&channel=%23udl

For further information either tg me or [nation]Unibot II[/nation], our Chief of the Band! Thanks for taking the time to read this, and happy defending!
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StGeorge
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"The UDL helps to protect regions and ensure their security" perhaps?
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Harmoneia
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Sounds good :)
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StGeorge
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Wootisms.
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