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Kingdom Hearts: Confessions of a Knight; A Tale of Valor Through the Fall of a Nation
Topic Started: May 9 2014, 06:31 PM (351 Views)
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About four years ago, after I've finished with Part one of the Unsung War Trilogy RP on the other forums, I got around to work on a tie-in fan fic that was not only set before the events of the aforementioned RP, but also would have alluded to them. Of course things slowed down and by the time it slowed enough to a crawl I lost interest in continuing the fic, ending with a prologue, five chapters and a sixth that was nearly finished.

For the past few weeks now I have been working on fixing mistakes, taking out parts that didn't make sense (I ended up having to delete a chapter because of how off putting it was and I'm now going to rewrite the sixth/fifth chapter) and added a style that fell more in line with my ongoing RP, Kingdom Hearts: Marche au Supplice.

I doubt it's going to win any awards, but I would love to hear what you think of this story. I would also appreciate any constructive criticisms that you may have.

So without further ado, here is the Prologue of Kingdom Hearts: Confessions of a Knight.

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Prologue: Das Erwachen (The Awakening)
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Chapter 1: Der Adler (The Eagle)
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Chapter 2: Der Stahl des Schicksals (The Steel of Destiny)
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Chapter 3: Die Himmelfahrt (The Ascension)
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And with that, this is the last chapter I've completed up to the time I've stopped, the next few updates will be a little further apart from now.

Chapter 4: Die Herzen der Eisen (The Hearts of Iron)
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