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| KrazynessNetwork | Jul 16 2011, 02:46 PM Post #31 |
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That Dude, You Know, THAT Dude.
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I think I like Sigh-ill better. Also, your bird mask idea, reminds me of the attire that people had during the Plague. So, just kinda' stitching my own ideas and idea I like in here. Beak-like mask: I say nay, NAY! but if so, have it be movable like a hat, I like the idea of a Phoenix. Ears: Elvish, with a gold earing on each, lined with designs of silver stars across them. Hat: None, if not the mask. Gloves: None. Shoes: Simple, leather boots, black, and with gold plating on it that snaps the boot closed, holding it onto the persons foot. Outfit (Upperbody): Starting with the arms: Left Arm: A gold colored gauntlet with black lining, very smooth, and has a glowing aura around it, that feels very warm, the hand is free. Right Arm: An inverse of the left, a black gauntlet, with gold lining, seems to have more protruding edges, very sharp, the hand, once again, is free. The aura around this gauntlet, is very cold. Next is the chest: A silver chest-plate, along with a white cloth, just simply wrapped around her waist. Outfit (Lowerbody): Loose fitting cotton pants, colored black, has silver knee guards on them. That's about it I think. |
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| McDodgerman | Jul 16 2011, 10:10 PM Post #32 |
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♦ Grazing mindlessly ~
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I'd pronounce it like "style" without a "t". Yes, it's one syllable. Sy-uhl sounds too Southern. I like the phoenix route, I'm just putting something new in here. I don't know what kind of bird this one's supposed to be though. Beak-like mask: This one here. I just really like this mask. Ears: Slightly pointed. Half-elf maybe. Speshul pierceless earrings (with golden stars instead of pearls) on left ear. Hat: Circlet, gold and lightly distressed with silver. Gloves: Long gloves, ends about 3/4 forearm. The thumb, its fleshy section of the palm, and an inch of trim are black, the rest is white. The trim is decorated in silver moons and gold stars. Shoes: These, with more gold stars! instead of the little rivet-looking things. White low-cut socks. Outfit (Upperbody): White wraparound top with open back for her wings. Short sleeves are loose but not poufy. Outfit (Lowerbody): Thin silver belt with simple buckle. Simple black capris with silver ribbon tie-offs. Two normal pockets and one on her left calf(?) Hairstyle: Silky black. Most of it falls to about shoulder height. Long braid reaches the small of her back, tied with silver bows at both ends. Look at Reimu in the Bad Apple video to see what I mean, but it's not obvious. I couldn't even find a good still to show off. Silabus has better pictures but still isn't what I'm looking for. Wings: This was supposed to be an option, right? I just put it in for completionist's sake. Large and feathered, starting white and fading to black towards tips. |
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| KrazynessNetwork | Jul 17 2011, 08:12 PM Post #33 |
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That Dude, You Know, THAT Dude.
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I like your torso ideas, that's seems a bit more creative than my chest plate, also sounds more comfortable. |
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| kirop99 | Jul 19 2011, 09:18 AM Post #34 |
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I am very interested so... Mask: I can't remember the name of the bird but it is more short beaked, nearer to the eyes in a filled circle design would be blue feathers and everywhere else around it would be red feathers, yellow beak. Ears: Similar design as mask yet inverted so blue on outside red on inside Gloves: none Shoes: Dodgy's idea for shoe but with white angelic wings at heels (Like Mercury?) Wings: Mask design, Red outside feathers Blue inner feathers OUTFIT: Upperbody: Platemail gauntlets from wrist to elbow with matted feathers in a constant red, blue horizontal line hiding the metal and extending slightly beyond elbow. Dress that is pale blue and short at lower area (Skirt?) for rest of body clothing. Also holes in back area for wings. I may revise the clothing part as I don't know the name's of areas in female's clothes. Edited by kirop99, Jul 19 2011, 09:23 AM.
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| Speedy | Aug 15 2011, 05:15 PM Post #35 |
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Fairly sure I've given up.
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Alright. I think I can safely say ideas have died down by now. Now, I can tell you, with the sheer amount, this was NOT easy to do, but I think I've found a slight compromise. Anyway, onto the next part of Chaplan! You take a deep breath. Once more, you look around for inspiration. You kinda like the feathers, it's sorta.. cute? Hm. You think and the first that comes up to you is a pink outfit. A short loose blouse with a small skirt, and your hair is completely loose with a hairband in. You look at yourself, but it.. really isn't your taste, is it.. You're a girl, but.. are you supposed to think girlish? The man earlier said that everything was going to be dangerous.. maybe you need armor. Maybe need to stand out less.. as you worry about safety and yet trying to look great, you find yourself in a rather simple black outfit, but there's steel plating all over it. You find yourself with a beak again, but.. it feels more like an actual mask. It fits right over your entire face, and looks very sturdy.. And.. unlike the previous beak, you can take it off. As you put it back on, you notice it does move along with your mouth's movement.. Perhaps it is an innate ability of your race to configure your outfit to go along with your movement? The hat on your head seems a bit bland being just brownish leather, but the colored feathers behind your ears suit it very well strangely enough.. You look at yourself and you're satisfied. It feels light despite the steel plating, most likely also an effect because of the large yellow/orangey red wings on your back, protuding through your clothing. It seems your tanktop and breastplate are open where your wings come out.. And it's all strangely comfortable. Yes, your mind is set. The black might be a bit bland in color, but the steel plating, the wings and the objects on your head balance it enough to be suitable fashionable yet practical. You think of detailed etchings, but decide it may be too much of a hassle.. besides, you dont really know anything to get an example from. It may just end up random lines, and that doesnt seem like a good idea.. Ofcourse, now that you realizes that you actually have clothing matching nobody elses', you start wondering just how much of these 'new things' you just now came up with. Or did they perhaps already exist, and you're merely remembering them? Again, you confuse yourself with your thoughts, despite that you had sworn it off earlier. ..And again, you blink in realization. Your head, despite the hat, feels cold. You dont have what quite a few of the others seem to have.. hair! ..and what would your face look like? You dont really care about your mouth or nose, they're probably just fine.. but your eyes.. Everyone has these.. colors. You have no idea what yours are, so you decide to get ahead of yourself.. and decide on a color instead of just going with what you have. And HAIR! Oh heck yes, hair. You need hair. Maybe a fun hairstyle. What color, though.. and it still has to fit your hat, doesnt it.. Hrm. Well, time to look around and decide.. And now, to be without the story, I present to you..!! The End Result Now for someone to draw her. ![]() I apologize for the lack of finer details, I found them .. well, TOO detailed.. Elvish ears, earrings, rings and other accessory have been blandly ignored, quite honestly. Valkies are somewhat fantasy-like characters, but I do not wish to delve too deep into this, so let us keep it to simple states. And yes, I once more ask the help of all of you; eye colors and hairstyles! I realize that these details have already been given by some, and I shall immediately state that they SHALL be taken into consideration. If you feel like changing, this is your chance to edit them out of the old posts and post new posts in here. ![]() And I wasnt kidding. Any volunteers on drawing her? I assume if someone's interested, that they'll be holding off because of the lack of eye color and hairstyle. Well, I'm going to end this little questionnaire NEXT WEEK TUESDAY, so you should have your answer by then.
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| altoguy16499 | Aug 15 2011, 05:20 PM Post #36 |
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Eye color, I have to say an "electric" blue i think it's called and for hair style, how about a little more than shoulder length wavy light brown. just my ideas but i like how she looks so far |
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| abadlex | Aug 15 2011, 05:26 PM Post #37 |
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Random~
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Purple eyes, brown hair in a ponytail that ends halfway down her back.
Edited by abadlex, Aug 15 2011, 06:59 PM.
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| KrazynessNetwork | Aug 15 2011, 05:36 PM Post #38 |
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That Dude, You Know, THAT Dude.
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Green eyes, with a little bit of blue in them. And for her hair.... How about a sort of dirty blond hair color, with the occasional black streak through it. I think the hair being about shoulder level sounds good, maybe make it a bit curled in one direction.. Edited by KrazynessNetwork, Aug 15 2011, 05:58 PM.
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| JBRam | Aug 16 2011, 07:11 AM Post #39 |
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Don't play with fire, kids.
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I like alto's electric blue suggestion for eyes. Krazy's hair suggestion is pretty cool too. If no one wants to draw it, I wouldn't mind chipping in for a Naka commission if someone did another portion of it. Say $10 from me, and $10 from someone else. |
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| McDodgerman | Aug 16 2011, 09:44 AM Post #40 |
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♦ Grazing mindlessly ~
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Hairstyle: Silky black, with streaks of fire-color. Falls about halfway down her back. Long bangs. Eyes: Green touched with blue, as Krazy says. Looking for that effect like a gas flame. [1] [2] [3] Edited by McDodgerman, Aug 16 2011, 09:47 AM.
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