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CYOA: Chaplan
Topic Started: Jul 11 2011, 06:41 PM (2,876 Views)
Speedy
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Good to see you guys haven't lost your enthusiasm. :)

Also, I'm liking that green with blue idea. Like, ALOT.

Unless someone comes with a mysteriously better suggestion, which I doubt, I think we can already put that down as definitive.

Also JB.. *holds hand up high, with a ten-er in it* Guess who. :P
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JBRam
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I'll let you contact Naka, and have him send me an invoice when he sends you one :D
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Speedy
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Me on a DeviantArt Note to Nakate
 
Subject: CYOA Chaplan..

You may or may not have noticed this, but I've resumed work on this CYOA.

We're almost done with creating the character, with only the final touches (eye color and hairstyle) getting added now.

Next week Tuesday, there should be a definitive answer.

Now then, I made a joke that 'someone should draw her', but then JBRam came with 'dude, we should commission Naka if nobody wants to draw her'.

And well, we sort of agreed on it that we would ask you for a commission and split the costs. $10 from JB, $10 from me.

I guess you can read it yourself in the topic here: http://s4.zetaboards.com/VagrantEpochers/topic/8870136/


Note sent. :D
Edited by Speedy, Aug 16 2011, 10:51 AM.
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JBRam
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I approve of this message :D
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Naku Nyame
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Just continue on if it dosn't come within this month.
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Speedy
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I just gave people the time until yesterday. Anything that would've been submitted today would've been too late, Naku. SO NOW.. Chaplan! Almost ready to truly begin.


You see quite a few people with hair stopping at their shoulders. But also really long hair, really short hair.. The amount of ideas are just too much, so you decide to simply go with your hair stopping around your shoulders. You look around some more, trying to find an idea for a color.. but you find nothing that gives you a good idea. Disappointed, you look down.

You realize that the black of your outfit.. if it were just a bit shinier, maybe.. silky somewhat.. would be a good haircolor, wouldnt it? Maybe add the firey colors of your wings to it? You suprise yourself with the amount of choices you just made purely becuase it'd look okay. Just suddenly picking something, almost as if random.

Perhaps you should do the same with your eyes? Just randomly picking two colors? Like.. red and yellow? Green and red?... Green and blue? You spot someone in the distance wearing a green and blue outfit. Would it be a good eyecolor? You shake your head, and you decide you should just take the color, and stop doubting yourself already. You already have no idea what is going on, no need to make things more difficult by doubting.

As your decision is made, your eyes start to sting. You close them, and not even a second later, the stinging stops. For some reason, you hear a soft thud behind you on the floor, and as you look, you could barely see your old hair vanish. It was just replaced like that. At least it didn't hurt or felt weird, like the earlier changes to your body.

As if timed, you suddenly hear a soft gong. As you look around where it came from, it rang again, but a tad louder.. from the light from the center of the room. As if it tries to get your attention, so you would get to the light. Reluctantly, you move towards the light. Once more, you hear the gong, again a bit louder. As you get closer to it.. you hear a muffled 'no'. As if someone was trying to get your attention but was too.. afraid to actually yell?

You look around, but you see nobody looking at you or the light. What.. did it mean? Was there someone really trying to tell you not to? Or did you just imagine it? The gong sound is there once more, this time loud and resounding. It almost hurts your ears.. and you in fact hear a muffled noise, as if someone felt pain.. WAS there someone else? Someone else who you had only thusfar not noticed? You look at the light, and look around again once more. The time interval for the gong passes, but it doesnt ring again.

The light fades a little; you hadn't even noticed it started to shone brighter earlier, as as you look at it now, it looks 'only' just as bright as when you first look at it.. You get the creeping feeling you perhaps.. missed something? Should you have walked on towards the light? You walk closer to it, and even stand under it, but nothing happens. So.. four gongs, going from soft to loud.. like a calling..?

Whatever was going on, it's not happening now. Nobody else responded to the gong, so you're alone again.. or are you? You are determined to find the source of this muffled noise. It sounded almost like a scared child, didnt it..?

A. You decide to look near the light. You didnt get a warning before you got there, so maybe it's near there.
B. You decide to walk away, and look near the edges. You haven't actually inspected the area there, so maybe you can find something new there.



Definitive Design


I had less to work with this time, so I hope this is agreeable by all.. I found this the most.. fitting, considering her outfit. Time to send Naka a note. :)

In related news, first A/B question. It's.. not really that consequential this time, I just didn't feel like just stating out 'to be continued'. =_=;
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Boredalo
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I go B
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JBRam
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I say A. I'm curious about the light. :P
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Lord of Ruin
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A. Go to the light!!!!
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Naku Nyame
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I like to find secrets so B
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