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CYOA: Chaplan
Topic Started: Jul 11 2011, 06:41 PM (2,875 Views)
Rescla
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Resident Lazy Coder
B. Never leave an area when there are still things to explore.
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abadlex
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Random~
A.
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altoguy16499
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the light....move towards the light...so A
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KrazynessNetwork
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That Dude, You Know, THAT Dude.
A.
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McDodgerman
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♦ Grazing mindlessly ~
B, always do your Checks first.
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Speedy
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Fairly sure I've given up.
Can I have your attention please?

Naka has finished the commission. Please comment on it. :)

Thank you for your time. An ACTUAL CYOA update will be in a few more days. I want to get something else done first. I MIGHT update Kibby before that, but dont get your hopes up.

Remember, up until the update, you can still vote.
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Speedy
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Fairly sure I've given up.
BAABBAAAB.. 4 Bs, 5 As.


You decide to look near the light. You didnt get a warning before you got there, so maybe it's near there.

As you stand there, you look around. There are several people, but none of them seem to attract your attention.. wait.. there! Something just moved over there! But.. there is no way to get there.. there are too many of these people, and you cant possibly slip through with these wings of yours..

As you think that, you feel the wings vanish.. yet.. it still seems like they're there? You still have the slightly heavy feeling on your back of the wings, but even as you rub your back with your hand, the wings are completely gone. As you think you want them back, you feel the feathers pushing your hand away from your back. So.. that's another Valky ability?

Ofcourse, due to this amazing discovery you completely lose the sight of that what you thought you saw moving. You decide to hide your wings again, and push through the mass of people. It's actually rather easy, as everyone around you pretty much drops forward the moment you lightly push them away. It's true then, that they just simply not respond.. after all, if they did, they would be complaining, or perhaps reacting to the fact they're falling, right?

What happens next is a minor struggle through this mass. The people are so densely packed, that it's hard to get through.. fortunately, everyone pretty much falls over with one a slight push, so everyone at least gets out of the way easily... Hey.. what the..?!

"Le..Let me go!" Huh? What? You felt one person not falling over as you slightly pushed, and grabbed their clothing as YOU were about to fall.. but now.. You look at the person whose clothing you're holding. "Just.. p..please let me go.." It looks like a little girl, but it's hard to be sure.. her clothing and everything are just as bland as yours were earlier, as if they're not yet designed. It pretty much looks as if gender is the only thing this girl has decided on.

You feel the clothing in your hand dissipate, and you're no longer holding on to her. As she runs off, you yell "Wait!" but she vanishes in the mass of people.. As you look around for her, you notice you've made your way to the end of the dome.. That's odd, you were sure you weren't THAT far yet.. is it smaller than you expected? You examine the wall, but the plating on it seems unmoveable.. Unbreakable, probably, too.. but there's no way to tell with just your physical strength.

Something is definately odd. The girl is obviously concious, so.. why didnt everything activate for her..? The light activating is probably related to how 'ready' you are, huh.. And as scared as she seemed to be, she may have been preventing herself from getting ready just so she didnt need to go on..

But what risks would that bring? Are there.. maybe more people like her? Well, there is no noise, no nothing.. so perhaps you have more time to look around.

A. You figure there might be more people like the girl around, and decide to waltz through the masses again. You might never know if someone would respond.
B. There's probably not another person. You're more interested if there's really nothing around the dome, and decide to circle around.


Again a two-choicer. We'll get to the rest of the story soon enough.. for now, this is everything you get~

..By the way, had to decided to go to the edge first, you would've ended up spotting her on the way.. eheh.. ^_^;
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JBRam
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Don't play with fire, kids.
A. Although I'd personally like to chase after the girl and ask some questions, but this is close enough :P
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DiskytheFrisbee
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I AM looking rather beautiful today.
More people would be good. So I vote for A.
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abadlex
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Random~
A.
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