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My Personal Writing; Wondering if anyone would want to hear some things I've made up...
Topic Started: Aug 13 2012, 12:24 PM (974 Views)
AeroA113
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Ohai gais

So, I do this little thing called 'writing' sometimes... And, well, it's all pretty much fan fiction. But I think it's pretty good. I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the crap I wrote? .w.U

And before I post the first story: who knows what Total Drama is? From Cartoon Network?
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abadlex
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Random~
You mean Total Drama Island? If so, I saw a few episodes...
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AeroA113
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Yeah, Total Drama Island. They've had four seasons (Total Drama Island, Action, World Tour, Revenge of the Island) and let me tell you: They get crappier and crappier every season.

Anyways, anyone else heard of it?
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Hatsune Candy
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The soul of a forgotten file
I've heard of it, know the gist of it. Haven't seen much of it though.
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spiritomb108
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Bringing THIS baby back
I've heard of it. I hate that show. All four incarnations of it.
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The Gentleman of The Fur Returns!
I watched the first season. My favourite character was the fat guy, whose name I can't be bothered to remember.
Edited by Omegalock, Aug 13 2012, 05:20 PM.
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AeroA113
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Welp.

I used to be a total nerd for it.

Especially for the two characters Duncan and Gwen.

I went on this site called "Fanpop", and joined as "Gwuncanfan". I had to leave fanpop due to personal reasons, then I grew further and further away from Total Drama. Then eventually I just "forgot" about it. Meaning I forgot about Duncan and Gwen.

Then, a few months later, I began to love Kirby. I drew the video game characters and perfected drawing them. Then after a year, I started to not draw them as much. I kinda thought about how this sorta thing happened with Duncan and Gwen, and I got nervous. Now, I sometimes make comics with me interacting with Meta Knight, Kirby, and Magolor, my three favorite Kirby characters. It's Meta Knight who usually represents my inner-thoughts when it comes to those three. So, I created a comic about them complaining to me about not being drawn as much, and then they bring up Duncan and Gwen.

I wrote a short story out of it, and am going to ask my friend to put it on Fanpop.

Would y'all like to read this story?
Edited by AeroA113, Aug 14 2012, 12:03 AM.
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Omegalock
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The Gentleman of The Fur Returns!
Fanpop?

I'd probably read it. I currently have a distinct lack reading material. (Maybe I should get out more...)
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AeroA113
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Hmm. Alrighty then.


(My P.O.V.)
I looked around. I was in the sketchbook world again; I was dreaming, but I wasn't. I was in the blank nothingness that most people call: the page. 
Quietly sitting there, I saw three figures appear in the distance. Two of them were round, and the other was like an oval.
"Oh my..." I murmured. It was Kirby, Meta Knight, and Magolor. I shrunk and said, "Erm... H-Hi, guys..."
The three glared daggers at me. Meta's eyes were crimson red with anger.
"WHAT--" began Meta Knight.
"IN--" Magolor continued.
"THE HELL?!" Kirby finished. His face flushed red. He walked up to me and shouted, "You've barely drawn us!!"
Stunned, I sat there, nervous. I had never seen Kirby so angry, especially at me. Magolor turned away and clasped his floating hands together. "I thought you said I was as cute as them! Why haven't you drawn me more then?" 
Meta Knight shot him a look. "She never said that..."
Desperate to make them know that I still cared, I stammered, "Guys, I'm sorry! I just made up a character, and she needs to have more of a personality, so I--"
"So what?!" Kirby interrupted. "We're insignificant now?! We're not as important?! Do you even care about us anymore?!" 
Tears started to run down the little pink puffball's face. I knew he was young, and he needed attention, but...
"... Are you going to abandon us?" said Meta Knight, sitting down in what looked like defeat.
I froze in total shock. Then I shouted, "WHAT?! I would never THINK of that, Meta! I don't abandon characters, no matter what!" 
I looked at the three solidly. Kirby stepped forward, and looked at me, tears still trickling down his face. "I doubt that..." he sniffled. "I heard what happened... To Duncan and Gwen."


Okay, this is the counterpart of the first page of the two page comic. It may be short, but it's meaningful.
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Wheatley Joins the Team: Part 1

Meta Knight glared at me.
"Really? Just... Really?"
I glanced over at Wheatley. Yet another character that I can draw. Well, kind of, anyways. 
"Meta Knight, I am sorry, but really... I just couldn't resist. I mean, the game is really cool!"
"Yeah, mate," Wheatley rolled over to Meta and tapped his shoulder-pad. "Gimme a chance!"
Meta Knight took a step away from the personality core. He stayed silent, looking at Wheatley with green, thoughtful eyes.
"You're going to get attached to this game," Meta Knight looked up at me, his eyes fading back to yellow. "You know that, right? If you continue to draw him?"
I sighed and didn't make eye-contact. I knew that perfectly well. 
Wheatley glanced back and forth between Meta Knight and I curiously.  He lowered one of his steel lids over his optic, irritated. "Luv," he began, "don't listen to him. You can stop drawing me whenever you want, I don't mind. You're not going to get attached. HE'S the moron..."
With his eyes glaring red, Meta shot a look at the robot. 
I giggled with Wheatley. Picking up the small robot, I said to the puffball, "Meta Knight, you have to realize... Wheatley is a robot. Robotics are NOT my thing. Honestly, I'm gonna be trying to not draw him very often. N-no offense." 
"None taken," the robot said sarcastically. "Na, but seriously, mate, that's alright." He chuckled.
Meta looked up at Wheatley. 
"I've heard what you've done," he said coldly, "and you're not to be trusted. He's not to be trusted,"—he looked up at me, pointing to the one I was holding—"got it?"
Rolling my eyes, I mumbled, "Yeah yeah, Mety."
Fed up with me and my stubborn ways, the knight wrapped himself tightly in his cape, then walked away, his eyes glowing red.
"He's got a temper, that one does..." mumbled Wheatley, glancing after Meta Knight. I smiled at him and admitted, "He can be a pill sometimes, but he really is very loyal once you get to know him."
"Right, right..."
We stood in awkward silence for a while.
Eventually, a small plan formed my head. Grinning to myself, I tossed Wheatley into the air. He screamed as he hurdled back down to the floor; I caught him just before he hit.
"Th-That was not funny, luv!" he shouted, the two handles on his face going up and down frantically.
"C-Can't hear ya! Ahaha! Laughing... Too hard!" 
Eventually he started to laugh with me, but he whacked my hand with the top handle. "Don't do that again."
"Too late! Shouldn't have said that, moron!"
"I am NOT a mor–AHHH!"

•••••••••

Meta Knight peaked around the corner of the doorway. He saw Julia tossing Wheatley up and down, like they'd been friends forever. Quietly, he turned back around the corner and slumped up against the wall. Secretly, he wanted Julia to do that to him... It looked like fun. But he, like always, kept his feelings to himself and walked away, leaving the two to their mindless fun.

•••••••••

Wheatley's head spun. "A-Alright, that's enough... I'm so bloody dizzy now..."
I laughed, setting the small robot down. "So... Welcome to the family, mate." I said, holding out a hand.
He looked up at me, suddenly surprised. "R-Really? You're gonna let me stay?"
"Of course. I trust you." I gave a gentle smile.
Wheatley gave his equivalent of a smile, and put a handle on my hand. "I'll try and enjoy myself,"
"You'll never be bored with the team I'VE got..."
We shared a laugh. I picked him up by the handle I was holding—he let out an, "OW!"—and I carried him to the next room, where everyone would meet the newest member of our little family.
Edited by AeroA113, Sep 1 2012, 10:37 PM.
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