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Random idea; Exist Code; Yeah, remember Tree of Angels?
Topic Started: Apr 21 2013, 05:44 PM (509 Views)
The Rex with the Specs
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I kinda changed Tree of Angels to be entirely different. It's still in somewhat of a game idea format, but i tried to make it so that it was a little versitile. It's not really as much creative writing as it is a writing idea.

I'll even include a rewrite of a passage i wrote to make it count for writing a little bit more. I rewrote it to fit with the story a bit. I'll be at the very end so yeah.

Story


Crystallian Mythology (aka important points to notice)


characters (this time including some side characters and antagonists)


The passage: "The Crystal Palace"

Edited by The Rex with the Specs, Apr 22 2013, 07:41 PM.
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abadlex
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Ah, I see that you added some new characters. All of which are quite interesting in various ways... Irene's ability to invade dreams sounds like it can open up a number of possibilities. Also I like that passage, really caught my interest.

Oh, and I'm amused that the big bad (Adonisus) has a major love for someone in the hero's group (Rima). Even if the person in the group is a 14 year old and could raise some concerns depending on the big bad's age...
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The Rex with the Specs
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Okay, maybe that idea might not be so strong. Maybe Grace...? Anyways, I have worked on this since I was 16 though. I still have bugs to work out on it but so far so good. (also note: I already got people asking me to do fanart on this stuff based on character descriptions. Please note that there's no official designs, but you can still try. I like to see what people get out of the character descriptions actually.)

edit: edited Adonisus' profile so he likes Grace instead. I didn't leave an empty gap for Rima though.
Edited by The Rex with the Specs, Apr 22 2013, 07:40 PM.
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Cedi Fonei
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... just glancing at this idea, I feel a need to ask about a specific detail.

Specifically, the crystal code.

... how can a crystal be inside of a soul? Aren't souls a metaphysical concept, while crystals are physical? Is there any significance to these crystals other than their "energy" or "codes", such as why they need to exist in the first place? And how do you break these crystals? Do you just stab someone in a particular part of their body, or does it require some sort of forbidden magic or something...? I'm looking at the whole thing, and it just doesn't seem like it makes sense...
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*Points Cedi at Rozen Maiden* ... That's the first thing I think of when I hear "Soul inside a crystal"
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The Rex with the Specs
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Cedi Fonei
Apr 23 2013, 08:16 AM
... how can a crystal be inside of a soul? Aren't souls a metaphysical concept, while crystals are physical? Is there any significance to these crystals other than their "energy" or "codes", such as why they need to exist in the first place? And how do you break these crystals? Do you just stab someone in a particular part of their body, or does it require some sort of forbidden magic or something...? I'm looking at the whole thing, and it just doesn't seem like it makes sense...
Well, Crystal Not all serets are exposed about them yet according to how I saw this little bit of info. It's basically a crystal that is only visible and physical when extracted and exists in order to help you exist.

There is a special magic used to extract them though. Or you could use the same type of magic to extract energy from the Crystal Code. It wors either way; pick your poison basically.
Edited by The Rex with the Specs, Apr 23 2013, 11:04 AM.
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