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Topic Started: Nov 3 2005, 07:38 PM (196 Views)
+ Missingo
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well Im not sure if this abstract or grungy....
but w/e please rate: 1 through 10; 10 is best 1 is worst...
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Its too late its too late....they wont let go...they wont let go...follow my foot steps through that open door...open door....It must be very under the heart that makes this place so insane youll find in time that the gates have been upon
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Zeerus
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a very unique style, and good for two of your first designs. I'd give them both a 7/10 for creativity. I especially like the text layout of the second one, with the lines of text flying across the whole design.

I do have some suggestions though. Use less blur and get rid of the tire tread patterns. Patterns, in most cases, don't really look good. I also suggest getting a few good abstract/grungy brushes, http://deviantart.com is a good place to start. Finally, lose the big borders.

but overall, good job. I don't want you to take this like Francisco did and go trashing everything. Just trying to be honest. By the way, are they at the original size, or did Photobucket compress them?
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+ Missingo
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well thank you,
yea Im pretty new, Im not really sure if photo bucket compressed em..it looks that way, but thanks for your comments..
Ill make sure to fix em up..
Its too late its too late....they wont let go...they wont let go...follow my foot steps through that open door...open door....It must be very under the heart that makes this place so insane youll find in time that the gates have been upon
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Zeerus
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yeah, Photobucket compresses images if they're too large, which is stupid for large rimages. I suggest signing up for a Deviant Art account at http://deviantart.com
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