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Bryan Marks-World Hunger
Topic Started: Dec 1 2010, 08:02 PM (168 Views)
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Committee: Health and Human Services
Subject: World Hunger
Proposed by: Republic of Iraq

1)The General Assembly,

2)Aware of the hungry population in all parts of the world, including the developed and undeveloped 3)world,

4)Proclaims the hunger issue is due to:
5)A. Financial situations
6)B. War
7)C. Location;

8)Emphasizing the importance of helping the hungry,

9)Deeply disturbed malnourishment can cause:
10)A. Sickness
11)B. Weakness
12)C. Death,

13)1.Approving mini-loans to grow agriculture given to those eligible:
14)A. Clear of offenses
15)B. In prime spot to grow
16)C. Willing to help out the hungry,
10.C.
17)2.Fully aware the UN attempts to help:
18)A. World Food Programme
19)B. World Health Organization
20)C. United Nations Children's Fund(UNICEF),

21)3.Expressing its appreciation to countries currently helping end hunger,

22)4.Bearing in mind many independent countries that have helped others in need,

23)5.Convinced the best way to help the cause is through financial assistance,

24)6.Considers governments to create Public Distribution Systems to give out ratios of food monthly; 25)7.Urges groups:
26)A. Individual countries
27)B. Non-profit organizations
28)C. Countries experiencing hunger issues themselves
29) to continually assist to achieve the Millennium Goal by 2015.
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In your preambulatory clause, you have a good definition of the hunger issue, but then it becomes redundent with stating whay hunger can do to people. You can keep it there if you want to, but try to expand a little more on the issue. You operative clauses need work, line 17-20 belongs in the preambulatory clauses. Finally you last clauses need to be re-worked, try saying that it urges groups to follow the millenium goals and then define the groups below. Also you may want to go into some detail regarding the micro loans to countries, such as clearer distribution standards.
If you make these corrections, then i know you will have an awesome resolution. Just rememebr to make the changes before sunday evening otherwise you grade for the paper will drop.
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