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Anna Murray - Energy Policy; Republic of Iraq
Topic Started: Dec 1 2010, 08:54 PM (187 Views)
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Committee: Environmental
Subject: Energy Policy
Proposed by: Republic of Iraq


The General Assembly,

1) Realizing many people in developing nations have a lack of
2) reliable power sources,

3) Believing that the ways that these people get power often
4) pollute heavily,
5) a) including oil,
6) b) and coal,

7) Observing that developed nations have a role to play in the
8) pollution of developing nations,
9) a) including environmental destruction from war,
10) b) and not assisting in repairing the environment,
11) c) and not assisting in improving environmental friendliness of
12) power sources,

13) Keeping mind that there are many reasons factoring into the
14) poor state of the environments of developing nations,

15) Fully aware that the governments of developing nations have
16) difficulties funding improvements,

17) Encourages funding projects to help developing nations repair
18) and improve infrastructure to increase generation of electricity
19) and to provide more reliable electricity;

20) Further requests that nations make access to electricity easier to
21) outlying residents of their countries and take steps to eventually
22) lower electricity prices;

23) Emphasizes the importance of countries making their electricity
24) grids independent to more easily provide for the needs of their
25) residents;

26) Supports assisting developing nations in installing basic
27) renewable energy systems such as wind and hydro power in
28) feasible areas;

29) Recommends providing fiscal and non fiscal incentives to
30) businesses and countries that choose to use renewable energy
31) sources;

32) Considers the International Thermonuclear Experimental Reactor
33) (ITER) as a project to create energy from nuclear fusion to
34) provide environmentally friendly power to developed nations in a
35) secure way.

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Jimmy_Dean
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However, you will want to edit some of your preabulatory clause, such as line 3-6 because they are not grammatically correct, so take another look at those areas. Also you may want to detail a little more in your operative clauses on how funding might be aquired. Finally just nitpicking, make sure you have your preambulatory clauses italicized and operative clauses underlined.
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Anna_Murray
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Committee: Environmental
Subject: Energy Policy
Proposed by: Republic of Iraq


The General Assembly,

1) Realizing many people in developing nations have a lack of
2) reliable power sources,

3) Believing that the energy sources for these people are often
4) heavy polluters, these sources including
5) a) oil,
6) b) and coal,

7) Observing that developed nations have a role to play in the
8) pollution of developing nations,
9) a) including environmental destruction from war,
10) b) and not assisting in repairing the environment,
11) c) and not assisting in improving environmental friendliness of
12) power sources,

13) Keeping mind that there are many reasons factoring into the
14) poor state of the environments of developing nations,

15) Fully aware that the governments of developing nations have
16) difficulties funding improvements,

17) Encourages funding projects through the United Nations Capital
18) Development Fund (UNCDF) and other programs to help
19) developing nations repair and improve infrastructure to increase
20) generation of electricity and to provide more reliable electricity;

21) Further requests that nations make access to electricity easier to
22) outlying residents of their countries and take steps to eventually
23) lower electricity prices;

24) Emphasizes the importance of countries making their electricity
25) grids independent to more easily provide for the needs of their
26) residents;

27) Supports assisting developing nations in installing basic
28) renewable energy systems such as wind and hydro power in
29) feasible areas by increasing funding to projects such as the
30) Commission on Sustainable Development;

31) Recommends providing fiscal and non fiscal incentives to
32) businesses and countries that choose to use renewable energy
33) sources;

34) Considers the International Thermonuclear Experimental Reactor
35) (ITER) as a project to create energy from nuclear fusion to
36) provide environmentally friendly power to developed nations in a
37) secure way.
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