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Naava Delaine Loker; O.O
Topic Started: Jan 30 2013, 11:16 PM (697 Views)
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NAME: Natalie
CONTACT: nwhitehead121@gmail.com
HOW YOU FOUND US: Searched for best X-Men RP
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BASIC INFORMATION

CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original
AFFILIATION: Student

FULL NAME: Naava Delaine Loker
CODENAME: Hemo (Short for Hemogloblin)
NICKNAMES: Lainy, Lokey, Pheno

CURRENT AGE:19
DATE OF BIRTH:March 17, 1993
MARITAL STATUS:Single
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Hetero
BASE OF OPERATIONS: Xavior Institution
TIME AT INSTITUTE: Um 3 1/2 years
REGISTERED WITH SHIELD? No
HOMETOWN: Monteray Bay, California
KNOWN RELATIVES: Deacon Loker (Father), Tehya Loker (Mother)

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE

HEIGHT: 5'5"
BUILD: Toned, but plushed.
EYES: Bright red
HAIR: Brown
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Due to her mutation Naava has developed bright red eyes.
CLOTHING STYLE: Naava perfers breezy clothing, things she can easily move around in. She is a boot fanatic, perfering them over sneakers any day.
UNIFORM: The standard black and yellow uniform. On days she relax though she can be seen in a plain over-sized T-shirt and boy shorts.

POWERS

GENERAL DESCRIPTION:
Naava possess the ability of Haemokinesis, which allows her to control not only her own but another's blood as well. In this she can heal wounds 9by causing blood to coagulate).stop blood loss, an on more than one occassion have full control over one's motor functions. She can accelerate or slow down the rate of blood flow, which let's her control body temperature and heart rate.

Naava has shown that she can use her own or another's blood as a weapon, similiar to one's control of water. Let's it flow freely and whipping it around. In extreme cases Naava can even taint one's blood system (inducing septicemia).

She can also see the blood flow with in one's body, helping her stop blood clogs or other injures and know as well where exactly to cut for the most blood flow.Recently she is working on a way to change one's phenotype.

WEAKNESS: If Naava is not careful she can cause herself to have Anemia through to much blood loss. Due to a sufficient decrease in her red blood cells beacuse of acute hemorrhage (bleeding). The average human has a total blood volume of approximately 5,000 to 6,000 ml and can usually lose 500 ml of blood without serious or lasting effects; but, if the loss reaches 1,000 ml or more, serious acute consequences may result. Naava can last up to 1,500 ml before serious effects begin taking toll. If more then 70% of blood is lost, acute blood loss can lead to shock and even death

PERSONALITY
Naava likes to dream - in fact, she prefers to spend her time in a dream world rather than the world of reality. At the very first glance she will look like the girl every guy falls in love with. She looks totally vulnerable, very different from the modern, liberated girl of today. Highly sympathetic, compassionate, self-sacrificing and unassuming, Naava is most likely to absorb emotions from the environment around her, often becoming happy or depressed based on the mood of others. Due to this she often prefer the company of optimists and is a optimist herself. She tends think with her heart and not her head, also dislikes confrontation or hurting others in any way, and often have difficulty saying no.Se tends to always go with the flow and friction of any kind drains their energy.

Beware though is becomes angry or feels as if she has been wronged. She can become down right scary, and she knows how to hit where it hurts. Since she trys to avoild confrontation she tends to hold in her anger only for it to be unleashed all at once. You can only push her so far-consider yourself warned.

HISTORY: PRE-APOCALYPSE
Naava Delaine Loker was born into this world on March 17, 1993 to a lovely biologist couple, Deacon and Tehya Loker. Expect for the occasional trip to the doctors, since she was born with the rare blood type of AO-, to have her blood drawn and storaged. Naava grew up a simple life. Ahead of her all her class, she was offered at only the age of 15 a full scholorship to Oxford University.In which she gladly accepted.

There she majored in Biology following in her parents footsteps. She found herself very intriged by the very popular subject of mutants and evolution. Wishing she could study the mutant population up close. Sometimes in this crazy universe wishes come true.
One day while staying after class hours to do some extra experiments with her professor, Dr. Zebediah Killgrave. Naava accidently broke one of the beakers, slicing open the palm of her hand. Yet before she could start even to clean the wound, she noticed her blood reciding back into her cut area.

Ever more intriged Naava excused herself and headed straight to her dorm room to conduct farther experiments. She began cutting and slicing causing huge lacerations on her skin to see if the same reaction would accure. To her other amazement her blood would recide back into her body, sometimes even healing the sliced area. She concluded that she possessed the ability of Haemokinesis and that she was infact a mutant herself.

In shock, Naava locked herself in her dorm for several days not quite sure what to do with her dicovery. After awahile Dr. Killgrave became concerned by Naava's sudden absenties. Deciding to go and see just what it was that was keeping his favorite student at bay.
When he arrived, Naava went to a frenzy having been still conducting varies experiments to see just how far her new found abilities could go. She tried to play off her poor attendence on her having "womanly issues", but the good doctor would not leave until he saw that she was well.

Annoyed, Naava hadn't meant to but she had gained control over Dr. Killgrave's body and sent the poor man tumbling down the flight of stairs that led to her room. Deciding it best if she left before anyone esle became hurt. Naava took the first plane back home. Her parents greeted her with joy, but their expression soon changed when Naava informed them of why she was back. Loving her all the same, but thinking it best she was with her own kind at least until she gained control of her abilites. They sent her to stay at Xavier's Institution.

DURING APOCALYPSE

Naava remained at the Institution engrowsing herself in her studies rather than worrying herself farther about her parents.Yet she continuely watched the news as the four Horseman wreak havoc all over the world, and told signs of the coming apocalyse. Soon the Institution itself became under "attack". She watched fron her window as a Horseman stood outside the school. War had arrived.
Naava was useless to help the X-Men, not having full control over her power yet. It bugged her to no end that she was unable to help. Soon the students were evacuated from the mansion, to Graymalkin. Naava helped in what little way she could by calming the children and fellow students.When War and Death were defeated she was horrified by the losses. Partily blaming herself for not have been able to something more than just worry.

When the Apocalyse arrived on April 12th, Naava could only watch as more people were hurt and hating even more that she could do nothing. She watched as the storm grew and engolfed the planet. It was terrifying to say the least, but Naava found it to have a hint of beauty to it. yet that didn't stop her fron trying to get in contact with her parents to see if that were ok.

POST-APOCALYPSE

After the apocalyses it took her several weeks to get in contact with her parents. The news was not good, her father had been injured and layed in the hospital. Naava on the brink of depression returned back home, staying with her mother during her father's ordeal. When it was clear that her father would need sugury. Naava insested that she would be in the operation room with him. Denyed by the doctors, Naava used her abilites to sneak her way in.

She watched from behind the protective glass as the doctors began the surgury on her father. Seeing into her dad's body Naava was able to help control the blood loss and blood flow during the surgury.
With her help her father was able to make a swift recovory. Naava stayed with her parents until she was sure they would be ok and when the Institution reopened she was more then happy to join her fellow mutants back home.

SAMPLE RP POST:

Naava played with the lab rat ideally, making it bend in imaginable ways. She had come down to the basement level in hopes of finding Dr. McCoy here, but unforunately he was no where to be found. She was bored and usual a nice chat with the doctor always seem to brighten her day. Sighing she saw no point in staying any long in the medical room she left. Deciding that maybe a nice movie would entertain her instead.

She headed for the kitchen walking through the familiar walls that made Xavior's manison. She loved this school the sight, the sounds, and even sometimes the smell. Yes she would always love her hometown and the house she grew up in, but to her this was home.
She walked into the kitchen opening one of the cabinet door to grab some kettle popcorn to heat up. She stood there wondering which movie she would actually watch. When the beep from the microwave sound, she decided to on watching Back to the Future. Something sciency and funny was ironically the thing she need to keep her mind off of well science.

Naava pulled her large T-shirt down to cover her bot shorts as she reached for the popcorn. Pouring it into a bowl she headed for the Rec-room. Hopefully no one was there or at least useing the T.V.
She was surprise to find it empty, guessing most students were studying for the Biology test that had just been given that morning. She chuckled to herself, she should be studying herself. No matter what anyone said Dr. McCoy was the hardest teacher she had ever had.

Settling in one of the many cushioned couch she poped the movie in and sat back to watch.
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Natalie,

I really appreciate the fact you are trying, but again, you are seriously missing the mark in a LOT of areas.

Please read:
http://z4.invisionfree.com/Xrevolution/ind...?showtopic=6891


If you cannot get things up to standard - and I have repeatedly offered the help of staff - I really do suggest that you find a lower level site, then return to us with some practise. I don't want to slam or discourage you, you're trying, but you obviously need help and to pay a lot more attention to the rules and standards of the site than you have been already.

Staff List -

http://z4.invisionfree.com/Xrevolution/ind...?showtopic=8264

Please use this list to get in touch with me or another staff member on AIM, so we can talk to you properly.

Thank you.
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Is the applicant still interested in trying? Please take out the banned elements and improve the overall quality of this application, or contact staff for help by FEBRUARY 16TH or this will be moved to denied.
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Moved to denied through lack of activity.
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