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| Theron Xenon; This is my application for a character. | |
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| Topic Started: Feb 9 2013, 02:32 AM (590 Views) | |
| Mellenius | Feb 9 2013, 02:32 AM Post #1 |
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[align=center]PLAYER INFORMATION[/align] NAME: Chris CONTACT: chris_thompson_skype (Skype) HOW YOU FOUND US: Google OTHER CHARACTERS ON THE SITE N/A RULES CODE: Blackbird CREDIT WHERE IT'S DUE: N/A (all Original!) [align=center]CHARACTER INFORMATION[/align] [align=center](Image unavailable at the moment. Will be put in later.)[/align] BASIC INFORMATION CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original AFFILIATION: Loner/Independent (may join an affilliation when willing) FULL NAME: Theron Xenon CODENAME: Mellenius NICKNAMES: Phantom, Reaper CURRENT AGE: UNKNOWN DATE OF BIRTH: UNKNOWN MARITAL STATUS: Single SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight BASE OF OPERATIONS: TIME AT INSTITUTE: N/A REGISTERED WITH SHIELD? No HOMETOWN: Lowell, Massachusetts KNOWN RELATIVES: None PHYSICAL APPEARANCE HEIGHT: 6' 0" BUILD: Slim build, Medium Frame EYES: Bright Silver HAIR: Midnight Black DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Silver eyes that glow in the darkness CLOTHING STYLE: Hooded Black Long Coat, Black Leather and Black Chromed Titanium Gauntlets. Black Leather with Titanium plating. UNIFORM: N/A (yet) POWERS GENERAL DESCRIPTION: Mellenius is an Atomic-Kinetic. The definition is that he controls nearly all forms of matter at the Atomic level. Able to deconstruct, reconfigure, and reconstruct atoms and molecules. (An example would be deconstructing 4 Helium atoms and reconstructing them into a molecule of NaH5 (One Sodium atom with Five Hydrogen atoms).) Of course the more matter he has to manipulate the harder it is to precisely control the sub-atomic particles accurately. A common benefit of being able to manipulate Atoms, he can change the state of matter (solid to liquid, liquid to gas, gas to plasma, etc.). Common attacks include Proton beams and Electron surges. Each of those uses excess sub-atomic particles from molecular manipulation to create powerful energy-based attacks. The most deadly move is when he intentionally destabilizes atomic particles which would create an atomic explosion. WEAKNESS: Physical Melee attacks are fairly effective against him. Since most attacks are physical it makes him naturally heir on the side of caution and defense when fighting. Another weakness that is just as severe is telepathic attacks since his ability to attack is dependent on his ability to focus. PERSONALITY HISTORY: PRE-APOCALYPSE Theron was believed to have been born in 1951 but has been unconfirmed because of no certificate of birth. According to some who lived in his childhood neighborhood in Lowell, Massachusetts. His father was a biology teacher of Harvard University who had a hobby of trying to learn more about the genetic mutations in humans and "mutants". Theron's birth name was Joseph Thompson. He had great fascination with his father's research, unaware of the fact that he himself was a mutant. During Joseph's Middle School years, he grew up playing with mutants whom were genetically and psychologically studied by his father. The only detail that Theron revealed about his childhood was that he was used to create Sebastian Shaw's helmet that was used to block telepathy. Which would date to about the same time period when he was enrolled in Middle or Junior High school. No other connections to more 'well-known' mutants are known since then. In 1966, Joseph's father died by unknown causes. This predated his disappearance by only three days and he was not seen for over two decades since. DURING APOCALYPSE (April 7th through April 12th, 2009) During the "Apocalypse" Mellenius was experimenting in different ways to use his abilities, he had learned how to turn Nuclear Fission waste into usable Uranium. He made his living selling Uranium to weapon builders and resource merchants. When the chaos broke out he then simply sold the last of the Uranium he had in stock and fled to the Northern-most parts of Canada. About 3 months of isolation he was trying to get over radiation sickness having trouble to keep any food down. POST-APOCALYPSE Currently Mellenius is moving from city to city trying to find a new life. He got into his share of skirmishes with the authorities and often used his ability to manipulate the state of matter melting their weapons and running of. He personally has not killed anyone since the apocalypse but has had many close calls with getting locked up by mutant-phobics. SAMPLE RP POST: Mellenius was sitting under a dim lightbulb in a shack of a icy field. He presses his index and thumb on his forehead. He grumbles and speaks to himself, "This job is good pay but horrible benefits." He then takes a ladle into a metal drum on one side of the small 4x4 wooden table and drizzles the metallic radioactive ooze onto a metal cooking tray. He places the ladle back in the bucket that sat on the floor next to the leg of the table and then spreads his hands out three inches above the drizzled radioactive waste. He closes his eyes to focus and soon the waste begins to glow into a bright white. Theron then raises his hands so that both hands had their palms facing each other as if holding a large sphere. Tiny dust-sized lights begin collecting together between his hands and then as the last of the small lights have collected together. The light fades away leaving behind a metal rod that is four inches long and half an inch in diameter. A smile carves across his face pleased taht another successful production has been accomplished. He places the rod with five others in a metal box lined with lead being his traditional carrying case for sales. He slides the rod in slowly and closes the box clicking the lock on the lid. He stands up and then holding the box on his side walks to the door. The door swings open with a gust of wind blowing in. And shuts with him vanishing into the blizzard outside. |
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| Alix | Feb 9 2013, 02:39 AM Post #2 |
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Telepathy, Telekinesis / Empathy
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Hi Chris! Thank you so much for applying here at XMR. Hopefully, after some edits we can get you going and you can enjoy the site. There's alot of things here, however, that really need to be looked at. -you must include a personality section -Your abilities need a great deal of expansion to include limits, examples, and other type things. -Your history needs alot more detail. We need to know about his childhood, his teen years, how he got where he was at and more about him, and less about his abilities. While your sample post is within the range of the 200 word limit, we really would like to see more. After you do these things, I'll give another read. Remember! This is not a race. There's no rush to finish your app and we are not going anywhere. So don't be afraid to take your time to really fill in the details to the furthest extent of your ability. Reply here once you've done the above things, and I'll be back around to look at it. |
[align=center]![]() STRIKE ME DOWN SHOULD HAVE HELD IT ALL ALONE WASH THE QUESTION OFF MY HANDS I'M THE FATE IN NO ONES PLAN[/align] | |
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| Songbird | Feb 22 2013, 04:52 AM Post #3 |
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If you are still working on this, post in a week or this app will be moved to denied. |
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