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| Elysian L | Dec 8 2013, 08:02 AM Post #1 |
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[align=center]PLAYER INFORMATION[/align] NAME: L CONTACT: EspadaSparda (Skype) HOW YOU FOUND US: Google ;D OTHER CHARACTERS ON THE SITE None RULES CODE: Blackbird CREDIT WHERE IT'S DUE: [align=center]CHARACTER INFORMATION[/align] [align=center] [/align]BASIC INFORMATION CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original (Play By Mukai Osamu) AFFILIATION: Other (Not sure what plans i have for him. Perhaps xiavers school for the gifted or the x men.) FULL NAME: Elysian L Espada CODENAME: Discord (L) NICKNAMES: Espada or L CURRENT AGE: 17 DATE OF BIRTH: Dec 8 1995 MARITAL STATUS: Single SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual BASE OF OPERATIONS: Unknown TIME AT INSTITUTE: N/A REGISTERED WITH SHIELD? N/A HOMETOWN: New York KNOWN RELATIVES: Mother: Susan Father: Vaas Brothers: Marco, Vino, Eli PHYSICAL APPEARANCE HEIGHT: 5ft9 BUILD: Tall and Lanky EYES: Turquoise Blue HAIR: Black DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Black tattoo of an eye on back of his neck. CLOTHING STYLE: Elysian has a rather picky clothing style seeing as he likes to look 'classy.' He is normally seen wearing black jeans with a purple button up dress shirt and dress shoes. A lot of the time his sleeves are rolled up. He has also been known to wear a fancy black vest over his dress shirts simply because he enjoys looking nice for anyone he may encounter. When not seen wearing this he is often caught wearing a black leather jacket with a fur rimmed hood. Also wearing cargo pants with knee pads and military boots. This is the outfit he is typically seen running around in when doing task that require him to move freely. UNIFORM: N/A POWERS GENERAL DESCRIPTION: Primary Mutation Electricity: Elysian since the age of five has been able to control the element of electricity on a mass level. Given his intelligence and knowledge on how things work as he got older his abilities with it only grew more stronger. He is capable of creating shock waves and or blasting bolts of lighting out of his limps. Although attacks like that are not nearly a powerful as close combat attacks. When touching someone he can deliver an extremely large amount of electrical charge into an opponent. Elysian has developed many styles with this mutation such as applying it with hand to hand combat. For example. By applying a very large amount of electricity to his fingertips he often strikes extremely quickly dealing a massive amount of damage with nothing more but the tips of his fingers. The electricity conducted from his body if often very loud, sounding almost as if there where hundreds of birds chirping. Making his powers very noticeable when used openly. At full power Espada can send 100AMPS through ones body if needed. Although since this takes a lot out of him he normally only sends about 20-30 depending on the person. Secondary Mutation: In contrast with his primary. There is a second ability. Given the electrons constantly cycling through his body he is capable of achieving extremely enhanced speed. He can become about as light as a feather and move extremely quickly, using some acrobatic skills (Parkour) to execute mid air movements, By using it to stimulate nerves to increase reaction and movement to the maximum he can enhance his reflexes due to the increased brain activity. This however since it is kept within his body has its ups and downs. An up side is it is constantly active and he never has to call upon his powers to do this. The down side is once he runs out of electrical power he grows slower, tired, and needs to recharge. WEAKNESS: Given the fact Elysian is a electrical mess. He requires recharges every so often. Rather it be sleeping, eating, or simply standing still for a long amount of time he needs to give himself a recharge about three times a day every day regardless of what activity he may be doing. If using his ability constantly throughout the day he will need to recharge himself even longer. Then there are fatal situations that will require more drastic measures. If seriously wounded or out of power Elysian will need a boost. Rather is be a defibrillator or him going into a building opening the electric box and sticking his hand in there and absorbing the electricity of the building. Fact is he needs these things to stay alive, almost like a gas tank. If he where to ever be deprived of these things he would undoubtedly die. When in stressful situations he must absorb the electrical power of another object. Car battery, electric box, or anything else he can get his hands on. This is a major weakness for him when in the heat of battle. Elysian can only use his powers constantly for about an hour before he needs to recharge himself. PERSONALITY Espada has the appearance of someone who is intelligent, over confident and extremely crafty. He is seen often as a childish fool that is always smiling and has way too much time on his hands, and even though he is in a sense smart beyond his years he acts as if he were a fool or joker. He has a very jolly and mocking personality, speaking informally with most people as if they are close family or even lovers. Often using nicknames. To add to this he is repeatedly referred to from his friends and what is left of his family as charming and handsome, persuasive as he is towards others he has a undying talent in manipulating everyone purposely and accidentally. He either does this purposely because a lot of them are simple to deceive or because he is not paying attention to what he is saying. Although he treats everything like a game Espada is very serious about what he does and has a very complex way of handling and doing things. He enjoys putting people in situations that are hectic or chaotic simply to see how they would react to certain scenarios. Almost everyone around him is a test subject of his little game of life. However when he actually does make friends (Witch is often) he forms a very close bond with them and will do almost anything for them so long as it does not cross the bounds of reason. Espada has a bad habit of turning people against each other, often instigating fights between others but never taking part in it. He normally just sits back and watches the fun from a far, often throwing out percentages or something to decide the winner. Just something he does to keep himself entertained. Although Espada enjoys conflict, often showing up wherever there is potential for one, he usually stays out of it, preferring to observe the fight instead of directly taking part in it. Therefore he is usually seen as the one starting fights, but hiding in the shadows instead of directly taking part. What makes him a crazy and somewhat unfair bastard is that if he were challenged to a dual he would openly decline implying that he will 'Get his ass kicked' and leaving it at that. He does not mind being looked down upon for weakness simply because he likes to be. He enjoys weak and does nothing to hide the fact. However all because he seems weak does not mean he cannot fight when need be. When truly provoked Espada acts quickly and without much hesitation although he barely aims to kill or even maim. Simply to disable. He does not believe he has to hurt someone to get his way and prefers to use the weapon he is truly skilled with. Speech. With fighting Espada is a skilled in evasion and tactical combat. Often fluid like water and moving like a leaf against the wind. Given his smallness he is difficult to hit depending on the attacker. Some may get frustrated trying to get a good grip on him. Espada is also a skilled strategist. Capable of coming up with complex plans that have been able to stretch weeks in advance. He has been known to come up with a plan A through Z. This is proven when he creates a conflict between a small clan that eventually causes the clan to disband, simply by toying with each members emotions while helping them. He often thinks of life as a strategy game and does not like it when things do not go as planned although he believes in free will he dislikes it when things down to according to his design. He claims to love everyone regardless of race, gender, beliefs, or past events. In thinking this he thinks that if he loves everyone that they have no choice but to love him. Though this has its ups and downs he accepts each person for who they are and never really thinks negative about anyone unless forced. He has a very open heart despite his actions and such. Espada also, given his jolly personality is able to get close to people. And what influence he does possess allows him access to a lot of information since he loves to hang around the high officials. But his carelessness and fearlessness can incline him to mischief. He himself can find himself in fights he had no intention on starting yet alone being in. But to heck with it. Fear to him is just as fake a courage. He finds it nice to have more information that others at all times and takes pride in trolling others. Information is as important to him as food and water is to others simply because without it he is in the dark and cannot function properly. He also has little respect for authority figures and reacts to them almost violently. Sometimes resisting the urge or temptation to hurt them so instead insulting them or mocking them. Guards, bosses, anyone who think they are better than others or stand high on the social latter Espada always defies and disrespects without thought or hesitation. This is one of the windows to the more damaged side of his carefree and upbeat personality. While he is always viewed as the one who can never be put down and always has a smile on his face no matter what is being done to him secretly he is constantly suffering inside. In his family he was always viewed as the weak one and his childhood only confused him growing up. To prove to himself he was still human he attempted to cut through his chest so he could see his heart. This attempt of course failed with him almost dying but it was one of the many things he does to make sure he Is still sane. While he may seem like the over confident happy guy or sometimes a manipulate devil in reality he is just hurt and hiding behind several different mask. When alone he is silent and always screaming at himself but when in public he shows no real acknowledgment of this behavior. He is hypocritical in a way but for his own reasons. Espada given his genius intellect and mastermind tendencies he has a deep and complex understanding of almost anything and everything. Making his extremely knowledgeable in various subjects. He enjoys it when others try to question his own intellect and often will have short of long debates with them, proving several points, theories, and philosophies that ultimately win him almost every argument or debate. He normally does not like to approach things straight on and constantly thinks from an angle, annoying the people who try to ask him questions but are answered with a complex logic or another question. He thinks of himself a prodigy of the keepers of knowledge themselves, given his vast understanding of the world around him Espada is nearly impossible to prove wrong and even his personal beliefs and ideals have a tendency to worm their way into the minds of others. When speaking about a subject he does so with that charismatic gusto that it is obvious he enjoys talking. Though some say he likes to hear the sound of his own voice he truthfully just likes to educate the weak minded even if it means he has to go through a long winded speech. He has been known to speak in riddles and poems that could either inspire or mind fuck and has earned the nickname 'Poe' by those he inspired and 'Discord' by those he has confused. HISTORY: PRE-APOCALYPSE (((I half assed my history because i was confused by pretty much the whole plot thing. Although I'm told its self explanatory i cant understand the way it was set up...because I'm weird. Opps...))) Espada was born to a rather poor family who did not have much of anything. Being the youngest child out of a family of three brothers Espada was the smallest and thus the weakest out of all of them. Although his parents where constantly scraping the bottom of the barrel and constantly getting the scraps society left them the young boy grew up pretty poor. Not having much as he grew up did a number on him and the fact his parents paid no attention to him as a child made him feel unwanted. School however was another story. Even at a young age Elysian had shown superior intelligence and was extremely clever going through school, his observation skills and problem solving abilities easily made him the top of every class he was ever in. When he was five years old he discovered his electrical abilities when he was electrocuted by a electric box, not knowing what is was and growing curious about it he accidentally set it off and almost killing himself. After the voltage knocked him out he woke up three weeks later in his home on the couch. Unaware of what happened to him he shrugged off the feeling and continued on with his day. When he walked outside he saw his mother sitting on the stop smoking as she always did when stressed out. When she realized he was awake and alright she nearly jumped and hugged him, explaining to him what had happened. Not really to effected by the news Espada simply nodded and continued as if nothing happened. However, a few days later when he went to school he found that he was able to think a lost faster then normal. And when gym class came along he discovered he could move a lot faster and his reaction time seemed to enhance rapidly. It was only a matter of time before he realized he was a mutant, and ever since realizing this he had secretly developed his powers. But there where several times he lost control and hurt several students and citizens with his power. When middle school came along his intelligence and powers surpassed and he left his family and dropped out. Fully aware he was smarter then most of the teachers and better off without a family who did not really care about him he moved to the underground. Although he was young he quickly made a name for himself and became a widely known info broker in the streets. Living on benches most of his childhood and constantly being outside he eventually figured out where everything was located and who everyone was. He eventually gained so much intelligence on various things around him he was able to make a small living off of being a information broker. Being known to help a lot of the worlds organizations for cash such as the brotherhood, the X men, and even SHIELD under the alias 'L' he was able to secure his place as a famous info broker. All of this at the age of 13. DURING APOCALYPSE (April 7th through April 12th, 2009) During the Apocalypse Espada was very...well confused. Being a Info broker he often had access to information others did not. Having several contacts such as hackers, spys, and ect thanks to underground connections when this happened he was befuddled. When chaos broke out and everyone panicked Espada wasted no time and moved to an abandoned warehouse to take shelter within the attic. He had his cell phone, bed, fridge, and everything he needed to keep to himself up there. And since he had controlled his powers to a degree he had his own form of electricity and kept everything in his attic powered. He mostly laid low until everything blew over, not wanting to risk anything going wrong. After the Apocalypse Espada left his attic and began to dig around to see what had happened, wanting to know everything and anything that might have to do with it. SAMPLE RP POST: The city...a wonderful place of bustling humans going about there everyday life as if nothing outside of their lives mattered. The human mind was indeed very complex and almost unpredictable in ways. Every individual was a like a snowflake...exactly the same but completely different. Unique in their own creation. Then of course there where those who lives among them. Blending within their society as mere mortals. Beings with power beyond comprehension living subtle lives almost as if they belonged in this world. And who was to say they did not? Every being mortal or immortal should have the freedom to live where they pleased. Unless of course they intended to disrupt the lives of others. Time and time again there will always be those snowflakes that never hit the ground...and the snowflakes...that don't seem to hit the ground at all. The sun was high within its domain as the wind blew steadily upon the surface. The citizens below continued about their typical day unknowing that there where a pair of watchful eyes on them. Guarding them while at the very same time scheming the events of their city. Standing upon the rooftops of this...simple city was a rather odd character. Indeed unique to his own creation. With a pair of binoculars at hand the figure looked through the scope and scanned the surrounding area. All he could really see where the multiple humans doing what they did best...nothing. The boy standing atop the building tsked and lowered the binoculars. Just as expected, nothing seems to be going on as of now... He thought to himself. Reaching into his jeans he pulled out a purple Stone and began to go Think. "Lets see if we can change that..." He whispered ever so innocently. Calling out the names of his contacts as he went through his mind. "Alex, Aranni, Ash, Angle, Barakus, Patrokolas, Vino, Ezi, Eli, Esiya, Mavith, Uncle, Xemal, Kira, Neon, Vaas, Akido, ect, ect, ect." He called out the list blandly as he looked for the person he actually needed to call. "Perhaps Septh would be good for now." He asked himself. Thinking silently what he needed to do at the moment. 'It is true that i am running out of pieces for the game...too many pawns and not enough knights...this could be problematic for me. I need to find new pieces...Marko wont be here for another few hours so i should use that time wisely. Think Ely, what is the best way to find new pieces. Surely that group of projectors full of children can be of use somehow. If i play my cards right maybe they could stir up some new recruits for there very own. I would be happy, They would be happy, and uncle sketch will be happy undoubtedly. So lets see what resources i have.' The boy named Espada thought deviously. Although he seemed human, he was far from it. He was not a regular human in this world...much like his contacts. He was something far from human. As of now he took the appearance of a typical human just with a few minor differences. His eyes where a bright violet shade and his pupils where slit. His facial features held the attributes of a pretty boy in the eyes of many beings he was considered almost irresistible. His attire was pretty simple. He wore black jeans with a faded shade of white and a purple dress shirt to match his eyes and the sleeves rolled up to his elbows. On top of the shirt was a fancy black vest that was normally seen worn with a suit. He had on shiny black dress shoes that where rather classy and a pair of black leather gloves that had the fingers exposed. For this was a very fancy snowflake. Although he took pride in his features his body build was very...average and consistently scrawny. Tall and lanky in other words. Sighing deeply Elysian went through his Mind and thought. Holding the stone firmly he focused his mind and remembered Sephs face. Eyes searching the streets below when suddenly something caught his eyes...something new. Reaching for his binoculars once again, he held them up and looked down at the corner of West Vran. Two men stood talking among themselves. Ely smiled mischievously. I know everyone in this city...and yet, i have not seen these two before. How interesting... He thought to himself as the a voice suddenly picked up. Shallow breathing heart easily from the other end. |
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| Cyclops | Dec 8 2013, 08:39 AM Post #2 |
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there are some major problems with this app, but it's not unsalvageable so bear with me and we'll try to get through it. We need a name for your playby. I don't recognize that actor/model/singer whatever AFFILIATION: None (As of now) What are you plans for him. What would you like to happen? You can stay an "Other" but it's the hardest faction to get involved in the board with. If you expect someone to come calling for you and beg you to join their faction, that won't happen. You might think it will, but I can guarantee, it won't. FULL NAME: Elysian L Espada No one in the history of the world was named Elysian Espada, but that's not a deal breaker. Just to be warned though, this is a VERY Mary Sue name. SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Bi sexual Is there a reason for making him bisexual other than it's totally cool and trendy? We welcome and have players of all sexual orientations, but we demand these subjects be handled with respect. If you intend on treating this casually and/or using it as a soap box, staff will ask you to stop. KNOWN RELATIVES: Unknown No, they aren't unknown. Other characters might not know them but Elysian knows who they are. He remembers his mother and his siblings in his history which means he knows their names. You need to put that here though you can put a note saying that only Elysian knows. EYES: Purple Why? What does electrical powers have to do with purple eyes. That's a Mary Sue trait. Rethink or justify this. POWER: Fine except we need more particulars. How long can he use them? How many volts, how long can he last before he needs to recharge? If you can't explain them, then how can you play them? PERSONALITY: This is where I have the most issue with this app, even more than the history, which we'll address below. You have succeeded in making the most bad ass yet ineffectual character ever. He is totally the smartest, coolest and most awesome guy who everyone loves, and yet he is such a sociopath and so evil appearing that he can talk wolves into killing themselves? No. No he can't do that. No children worshipped him as an idol, no serial killers saw him as their god, and no one thought he was the antichrist. He's an emo Gary Stu with electrical powers and this is a world where Apocalypse's Horsemen killed 1/6th of the population, where Purifiers launched a nuclear attack on New York City, and Dr Doom gave the members of his Villains' Illuminati the powers of the Phoenix to destroy the planet and rebuild reality. If you think to make yourself a big bad boogeyman, you have HUGE shoes to fill, and I want to see you earn it. AND, if he is THIS BAD ASS EVIL, how on earth is he jolly and loved? How is he a nice guy? Then, you say he hates authority figures and treats them rudely, yet hangs around the high officials and brokers information from them because they trust him? What? No. Just no. You need to decide if you are writing him as a mischievous pixie or Satan incarnate. You can't have both. HISTORY: You need to read our history. We call it self explanatory because it IS self explanatory. I've even gone so far as to sum up everything, and link to important threads right here. You need to read that, and incorporate those events into your history. Talk to staff or ask in the cbox if you are confused about which events would affect Elysian. SAMPLE RP: This seems to be from some other site. Recycling posts is not necessarily frowned upon, but it shows no knowledge of our world and how to play in it. That will probably be fixed once you understand our history. I know this might seem like a lot, and it might be discouraging, but we'd rather be hard now than to have issues in game. Please contact staff if you have any questions. |
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| Elysian L | Dec 8 2013, 09:14 AM Post #3 |
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Edited...some of it. Pardon me as i spend a few more hours of my life decoding the sites history X_X |
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| Alix | Dec 8 2013, 09:17 AM Post #4 |
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Understandable! Please let us know when you finish working through completely so that we can properly finish the review. I know that it is long and tedius to go through the site history, however it is something that we have done everything possible to ensure that new members are able to read and understand the events. It's the blessing and the curse of a site that has been going for 7 or so years now with storylines that happen each year. Don't worry about speed, and don't try to rush through it. It's going to take time and we are patient towards the endeavor. just let us know when you finish and Scott will be right back on it to review the requested edits. |
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| Cyclops | Dec 8 2013, 08:15 PM Post #5 |
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It's been pointed out to me that this seems to have a lot in common with a Death Note character named L. Please note that we don't allow characters based on other genres here. If you are planning on making this L the Mutant, that will not be acceptable. Please address this problem and/or contact staff. |
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| Elysian L | Dec 9 2013, 12:14 AM Post #6 |
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He has absolutely 0 relation with L other then the alias. |
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| Songbird | Dec 19 2013, 04:23 AM Post #7 |
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Still waiting on you to say that you have made the edits that were required. Also, just saying that it has zero relation with that character doesn't really show that there is no relation. This is just a reminder to post here when you have made the edits. You can have a few extra days since it is the holidays, so make the required changed by the 28th or this will be moved to denied. |
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