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| Tabitha Smith | Jan 18 2014, 10:42 PM Post #1 |
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[align=center]PLAYER INFORMATION[/align] NAME: Miles CONTACT: Ask for AIM or YIM! HOW YOU FOUND US: Well, there was a twister... OTHER CHARACTERS ON THE SITE Beat RULES CODE: Blackbird CREDIT WHERE IT'S DUE: Marvel Comics, for one. My brainstuffs, for another. [align=center]CHARACTER INFORMATION[/align] [align=center] ![]() Freya Mavor [/align] BASIC INFORMATION CANON OR ORIGINAL: Canon AFFILIATION: X-Men FULL NAME: Tabitha Marie Smith CODENAME: Meltdown NICKNAMES: Boom Boom, Boom-Boom, Boom, Boomer, Tabby, Tabs, Tab, Time Bomb CURRENT AGE: 25 DATE OF BIRTH: September 23, 1988 MARITAL STATUS: Single SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual BASE OF OPERATIONS: Charles Xavier’s Institute for Gifted Youngsters TIME AT INSTITUTE: Coming up on eight years. REGISTERED WITH SHIELD? No. HOMETOWN: Roanoke, Virginia KNOWN RELATIVES: Martin Louis “Marty” Smith – Father, Estranged Beatrice “Bea” Smith – Mother, Estranged Amanda”Mandy” Smith– Ex Step-Mother, Estranged Wanda Jo Bialowsky-Smith – Step-Mother, Unbeknownst to Tabby. PHYSICAL APPEARANCE HEIGHT: Five Feet Eleven Inches BUILD: Taller than average, Tabitha has an athletically toned frame that retains some curves. EYES: Blue HAIR: Blonde and wavy, Tabby normally keeps her hair down so that it sweeps just below her shoulders. On the occasion she’ll curl it or put it up in a pony-tail, though she doesn’t do either of these all too frequently. DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A series of scars going across her torso from her childhood, but otherwise nothing out of the ordinary. CLOTHING STYLE: Tabitha considers herself to be up on the trends, having had a penchant for fashion since she was a young girl. Lacking the funds to actually go out and but clothing that could be considered high fashion, she makes due with what she can get and what she has on hand. She has a number of pairs of sunglasses on hand, and normally wears a cropped leather jacket over her tops. She normally wears jeans paired with phrased t-shirts or tank tops, and either sneakers or heels. Though she wears them less frequently, she also has a number of shorts skirts, blouses, blazers and trousers. Given the opportunity, Tabby cleans up well, enjoying the small occasion to dress up. UNIFORM: Tabitha’s costume consists of a sleeveless red top, zipping all the way to the top of her neck, made from the leather and kevlar material that constitutes the majority of X-Costumes, and white pants consisting of the same material, as well as red leather boots, and gloves of the same color with streamlined wrist launchers attached to both of them. To top the look off, she typically wears her hair up to keep it out of her way and wears a brown form-fitting leather jacket. POWERS GENERAL DESCRIPTION: At its core, Tabitha has the ability to generate and manipulate plasma, that she (at the present time) can shape into the form of small orbs that are attached to a mental fuse, normally timed at about three seconds though some could go for longer and others shorter, and when the fuse comes to its end, the spheres detonate and explode. The fuse for her time bombs normally range anywhere from three to ten seconds, but can however lay dormant for up to an hour. Anything else, and the bomb is entirely likely to either explode prematurely or to fizzle out into nothingness. She can generate the plasma in the forms of balls, normally ranging from the size of pebbles to the size of a beach ball. She can generate her time bombs if she puts her mind enough to it to be the size of a medium sized dog, though she can’t normally make more than one of these time bombs at a time. Normally, she makes them the size of either baseballs or soft balls, depending on what suits the mood, but ones that are smaller or larger aren’t unlikely, either. Tabby has a telekinetic control over her time bombs, being able to control their path after having been thrown. She can control her bombs so long as she is able to see them, though if it turns a corner and she knows the area well enough she’s still capable of controlling them for a limited range. Her control over them isn’t unflappable, however, and if she’s distracted enough the balls could easily lose course and go against how Tabby originally intended. If she’s generated more than one bomb, Tabitha is still able to control them just as she would normally be able to with one bomb, though it takes a little more effort than otherwise. The more bombs that she has generated at a time, the more difficult it becomes for her to focus on each one. Tabitha is able to reabsorb the plasma bombs back into her body, and she’s able to cut off the detonation as long as it’s before it’s reached the end of its rope. To do this is to pull the plasma back into place in her body, which is also energizing for Tabitha, causing her to feel refreshed (or at least how she did before she made the bomb) afterward. The bigger the time bomb that she’s absorbing, the longer it takes for her to reabsorb it, but the fuse is always cut off and the detonation always stopped when she’s in the process. The size of the bomb doesn’t always determine the strength of it; normally, a bomb the size of a pebble would be the weakest bomb that Tabby could create and a bomb the size of the beach ball would be the strongest, but that’s not always the case. The intensity of the bombs generated are dictated by Tabitha when she decides the size of the bombs—because of this, a bomb that’s the size of a pebble could create an explosion that’s intense enough that it could destroy a large trailer truck. Along with this, Meltdown is capable of creating bombs that fizzle out when the fuse reaches its end. Tabby refers to these as duds, and they’re normally used to distract enemies when needed. Tabitha also has a tendency to use duds recreationally. Though Tabitha’s abilities are quite formidable on their own as they are now, they haven’t quite reached their peak yet. With time and training, Tabitha will be able to create both streams of non-explosive plasma that, while not explosive, could still burn her opponents and could potentially manipulate them into hard light streams or structures. WEAKNESS: First and foremost, it has to be said that Tabitha is entirely mortal, without any sort of healing factor that can be said. She can succumb to any sort of illness and be killed just as any flat scan human that you pick out of a crowd can. The most noticeable weakness of Tabitha’s is the fact that the more bombs that she generates; the more taxing it becomes on her. When her ability first manifested, she was only able to generate one bomb at a time, and even then it took a bit out of her—the more is taken out her as the size increases. At this point she has trouble creating more than fifteen bombs in the most average size that they grow into, though the smaller the bomb the more she can create at one time. She hits a limit, however, at anything that’s over the size of a medium-sized dog like a spaniel, where she can only achieve creating one—and even then, it’s still extremely difficult. Tabitha is also capable of being distracted when telekinetically shifting her time bombs to their directions, causing them to go off course, and has a difficult time when using them in harsher conditions (such as under the water) than she is used to. The larger the time bomb that she makes, the more unstable it has the potential of being if she isn’t directly controlling it. While the explosions from the bombs don’t have any effect, directly, Tabby can still be blown back from the blast. She also isn’t able to use her plasma any other way, yet, though she’s learning. PERSONALITY Tabitha Smith was never the most beautiful, nor the most popular. Tabitha has only ever been seen as average in comparison, and though every girl has a point in their lives where they wish that they were prettier or that they were more popular—Tabitha has had these moments just as anyone else, though she has always been alright with the person that she is. Though she may come off as abrasive when she’s first meeting someone, Tabitha has always known where she comes from and where she stands in society. She’s always held a humble stance when it comes to that, and that’s something that likely won’t change given time. Tabitha’s codename, Meltdown, is generally seen as nonsensical when compared with her power set, but that isn’t the reason that she chose it. Since she was a child, Tabby has always been quick-tempered and hotheaded, likely to get angry faster than a lot of other people would before her. When she was younger and more immature, Tabitha was a lot more likely to go off of the handle and do something that she would regret—now that she’s older, she has a bit more restraint and more of a handle over her emotional state, which isn’t to say that she still doesn’t have moments where she loses her temper and becomes more likely to get herself into trouble. To put it into one world, Tabitha is, erm… explosive. Tabitha has never really had a true family of her own, basically raising herself during her childhood. Though it’s not something that’s ever been on the forefront of her mind, Tabby has subconsciously yearned for a family since she was young—something that she believed to be found both when she was taken in by the Fallen Angels, and then later when she was taken in again, this time by the X-Men. She believes that she’s found a semblance of a family unit with the group of mutant superheroes, something that she doesn’t want to use any time soon. Similarly, there’s a part of her that wishes her relationship with her father was better, but she doesn’t expect anything to change between them. Though it’s not nearly as apparent or “bad” as it was when she was younger, Tabitha has always been a bit of a kid at heart. Though she really isn’t, Tabitha can at times act immature, which allows her to get along well with those younger than her. This is a defense mechanism, and the girl that is underneath it is one that is much more troubled and hardened because of the experiences that she’s had throughout her lifetime—but, she doesn’t let things like that get to her. She’s always been a fun-loving type of girl, but she has a particular aversion to any sort of alcoholic substance because she doesn’t want to end up like her father. Since everything that happened with the drug known as kick quite a ways back, Tabby’s also made it a point to avoid drugs, too. Tabitha may act boyish on her rough surface, but when it comes down to it, she’s very much a girl. When she was younger she dreamt of one day being a big-wig fashion designer, even making it a point to design her own clothing when she was at the institute and making them when she could. This aspect of Tabby has lessened a lot since then, her dream moving to something that she’s not quite sure of at this point in her life, but it’s not forgotten. She still appreciates fashion, but not nearly as much as she did when she was, say, seventeen. Tabitha is extremely honest with her peers, choosing not to mince words. This makes her seem blunt and rude to those that aren’t really close to her, though those who are know that she means her best… even if it comes out like she’s vilifying you and everything that you stand for, as it has on the very worst of occasions. Tabby deals with abandonment issues, because all the people in her life that she’s come to care for seem to leave her in one way or the other, but she isn’t really vocal about it. This is part of the reason why she takes being a part of the X-Men seriously, though she might sometimes think that the whole role of “costumed super hero” is a tad silly at times. When it comes to the throws of battle, Tabitha is considerably reckless. She’s always been of the mind to act first, and then ask questions later—despite this, she’s definitely someone that you would want to watch your back, especially all that she was forced to learn during WWX. She might leave herself open at times, but when it comes to her comrades-in-arms, she isn’t the type to shy away from protecting them. Though she’s headstrong and perhaps immature at times, Tabby is good when she’s in the middle of battle against whichever threat. She isn’t nearly as inexperienced as she would allow herself to seem, though some would say that was the whole point to the charade. She was never at the head of her class, but she didn’t need to be; what she may lack in book smarts, Tabitha makes up for in street smarts. There was a point in her life that Tabby has a noticeable air of naivety about her, something that attracted the Vanisher to her prospects when she was on her streets, which allowed her to be used more easily than some others may be. Since being turned in by the aforementioned villain, Tabby has become wiser when it comes to those trying to use her or anyone else, having certain acuteness when it came to those things. Not normally the type to hold a grudge against anyone, Tabby has found that there are exceptions to be made in any sort of circumstance—the exception in this case being a grudge that she’s held against Vanisher since she was first arrested and subsequently taken in by the X-Men. HISTORY: PRE-APOCALYPSE It would be a lie if it was claimed that the love story of Martin and Beatrice Smith was one for the ages, the life story that you would see once in a lifetime and then it would be lost, forever, when those involved passed away. That was not the relationship that was shared between the parents of one Tabitha Smith, who met when they were still in their junior year of high school. Martin, the up and coming football star, and Beatrice, the newly appointed head cheerleader, became the talk of the school when they came together. It wasn’t because their relationship was a shock nor was it because the two were the most popular kids at the school—it came up because Beatrice revealed that she was pregnant. Deciding to raise the child as their own to the best of the means (with little choice beyond the parents of the pair, who wouldn’t at all allow them to get rid of the child), the two were eloped. Marty took a job at a local mechanic shop, and his parents co-signed on a lease for a home in one of the local trailer parks for the couple. On the outside looking in, everything appeared to be peachy keen; they seemed to be happy, to be comfortable, to be that loving family that, despite rough beginnings, would make it. While that couldn’t be further from the case, it’s also neither here nor there. Eventually, a daughter was born to the not-so-loving couple—a daughter that they would name Tabitha. For appearances’ sake, the Smith’s stayed with one another as long as they could put up with each other. They had both started on a downward spiral, and Marty had taken up drinking as a reprieve from his wife, who had taken to being barely ever there for her child, or her husband. The marriage was in shambles—and soon enough, Beatrice had decided that enough was enough. One day, when Tabitha was still a toddler, she left and wasn’t heard from again for a few months yet, when she sent the divorce papers without a word. Marty signed, and the marriage that shouldn’t have been in the first place, was ended. As a result, Marty delved further into his drinking, using the alcohol to quench the problems that he had been having. To Tabitha, Marty was just as much an absentee parent as her mother had been in those early years of her life; he was at work at the auto shop in the day, and by night he was passed out drunk in front of the television set before Tabitha was even given a chance to ask him for help, or to ask for a meal. Tabitha learned quickly that she had to take care of herself, because there wasn’t any chance in hell that this bozo was going to do anything for her, as was his obligation as a parent. As a child, Tabitha felt more like she was Marty’s parent than he was hers. As she aged, and started to more grow more into her features, she started to more and more resemble her mother. In a drunken stupor one night, Marty hit Tabitha. It happened again the next night. And again, and again, as the beatings started getting worse. Soon enough it had become the natural process of things, something that Tabby came to expect when she came home at night. That was why she started staying out later and later as she aged, staying at a friend’s house for the night when she could and going home when her father was at work to grab a change of clothes before she would head off to school. Somewhere along the lines of things, Tabitha hatched a plan with her friends—she was going to run away. Some of them had claimed that they would come along, but the promises were empty. When Tabitha was fourteen, Tabitha’s plans would come to fruition. Her father, the night before, had beaten her one too many times. After being beaten the worse that she had been in all the time that this was going on, she blew up. Both literally and figuratively—it was during this time that her powers had manifested. She manifested one of her time bombs and, as a result, blew out one of the walls of the trailer that she had called home. The wall fell in on her father, and nearly her as well, and Tabitha hastily packed some of her clothes and other belongings and she was gone before the police arrived. She hitch-hiked her way to New York city, and heard that her father survived somewhere along the way. She was alone, working off of the streets and stealing to eat what she could, for a month or two before she was taken in by a villain known as Vanisher, and taken to his club (that he referred to as Beat Street), where she found that there were other children that he had taken in just like her. Though she was, and is, unaware about it Vanisher took a special liking to Tabitha, teaching her everything he knew and basically becoming the father that she basically never had. She learned how to take care of herself, but sooner than later, things would fall apart as Tabby was taken into police custody after being busted on a heist gone wrong. The X-Men interfered with the investigation and offered Tabitha a deal—she could come with them and her secret would remain just that, so long as she attended their school. She accepted their deal, but after being told she could leave at any time, she did so for a few months, ending up back home—at her father’s. Surprisingly, she was welcomed back by her father and his new wife, a woman that went by the name of Amanda. Things were right and good for a few months, though Tabitha suspected too much so. Soon enough, Amanda left Marty and Tabitha just like Beatrice before them. Marty, however, blamed Tabitha on both counts. And just like he did years before, he beat her—and again, Tabitha left. This time, she had somewhere in mind; the school that had taken her in before, surely they’d have left their doors open for her. And, certainly enough, they had. Tabitha made the decision to enroll herself back at Xavier’s, becoming an active part of the student body and everything was right with the world… … right? DURING APOCALYPSE (April 7th through April 12th, 2009) Tabby’s assumption would prove to be wrong as the years dragged on, and when the Apocalypse hit, Tabitha was a student within the Xavier’s network—but just barely. Though she’d likely have preferred to be out on the front lines, she was among the students that were shuffled into the bunker, Graymalkin One. She was among the older students that were taking care of the younger ones and keeping spirits high while the ordeal went down… she was also one of the first that anxiously exited the vault into the aftermath. POST-APOCALYPSE The apocalypse passed and everyone got on with their lives, trying to things back to a semblance of what they once were. This came as a blessing for the X-Men and the students that they had taken in, as it seemed to include the return of the founder of the school, Charles Xavier. Being quite the trouble student when she was at the school, Tabitha butted heads with the strict professor quite a bit, though they got along when they weren’t at opposite ends of the spectrum. Cyclops soon changed, switching with his counterpart of another reality that was known as Ruby. That was Tabby’s first real experience with WWX, but it most certainly wouldn’t her last. It soon became apparent that people other than Cyclops were changing, whether it was for a short time or whether it was permanent. A so many friends around her began to flicker in and out, or succumb entirely to what would become known as the World Without Xavier, so too did Tabitha. It started with small flickers of a hardened life, a Tabitha that had grown to become cold and militaristic. As the time went on, the consciousness of the rebellious and fun loving “Boom-Boom” was switched with the cold and cut off soldier that was simply known by her name. To both sides, the change in Tabby was apparent—though, the change wouldn’t be for much longer as soon the entity known as Onslaught was defeated and Tabitha was returned to her own body. Tabitha came out of the ordeal with a change perspective of the world around her. She was more grateful, for one thing, but coming out everything that she had experienced she had also become more hardened than she was before. She had adopted a more abrasive persona as opposed to the fun-loving girl that had attended Xavier’s; her WWX counterpart could also do more with her abilities than Tabitha herself could, being able to reabsorb her time bombs back into herself and an immunity to the blasts that followed. Tabitha herself, in her time on the other side, became aware of these aspects of her powers. She came out of the ordeal battle-ready, and she was soon promoted to being an active X-Man—along with a change of codename, taking the moniker of “Meltdown” as she was promoted. In a world where mutants were hated and feared, things seemed to go downhill after the mass hysteria that was caused after the ordeal with WWX ended, and was subsequently covered up by SHIELD. SHIELD made an attack on the Brotherhood’s Coney Island base, of which there were many casualties and things seemed to go down a steep hill from that point onward. PURIFIERS New York gained a new mayor, Matthew Risman, taking a specifically anti-mutant ground once elected into office. Shocked at what he had to say and always quick to judge, Tabitha was among those in the mansion to begin to hate the stance that Risman, and as a result New York City, took. In response to an ultimatum by Mayor Risman, Mutant Town rioted and days later, a field trip for a group of Xavier’s student ended up with nearly the same results. Near the end of the month, the white queen of the Hellfire Club was found with her eyes removed from her head by the group known as the Purifiers, and then two weeks following that Mutant Town is attacked. It didn’t end there, and the attacks kept coming and escalated as the charitable organization known as X-Corps was attacked and later, Jay Guthrie kidnapped. Alex Summers’ identity as the Horseman of War during the Apocalypse would be leaked to the presses in August and the next day, the mutant settlement known as Mutant Town would be declared to be under Martial Law. A strange dome would be placed over the settlement, created by Wanda Maximoff. Things were thrown into chaos, though nothing could prepare them for came next. Nate Rivette, thought to be someone that could be trusted, detonated a suicide bomb within Xavier’s and killed forty-seven inhabitants of the school, injuring many others. Tabitha was among those injured, with a broken leg and lacerations on her torso, and was ultimately benched. SKRULLS After a short time, the X-Men split and migrated. Some of them went to Worthington Towers’ complex at the behest of Archangel, who graciously allowed them to make use of his company’s facilities as their home, and the rest went to a base in the jungles of the Savage Land that was known as Utopia. Tabitha made the decision to go with the latter, mainly to see what the opportunities held, but also because she was afraid of what the remaining Purifier’s would do with the X-Men backed into a corner as they were. She found a home here, just as she had the Mansion, and found that it was relatively safe here, but eventually their way into the outside world got cut off, and soon thereafter the Brood made their presence known, eventually effecting the majority of the X-Men in Utopia and, in particular, one of the younger X-Men known as Marrow. The Brood menace was eventually quelled and the X-Men were informed of everything that was going on in the outside world with a menace of their own, in the form of the aliens that called themselves the Skrulls. CURRENT HISTORY That, too, was soon dealt with and after the invasion was taken care of they went back to Utopia to lick their wounds, where Tabitha was for the majority of the time between June and January, when the X-Men would be able to make their move back to the mansion in Westchester. Settling back at the school wasn’t the easiest of tasks, apprehension and fear of the unknown settling in to the young woman, as well as the looming threat of Namor and all that had happened over the New Year. Things were relatively quiet leading to February, though the X-Man known as Magma would go missing, seemingly going back to her home in Nova Roma. When Spiral’s madbombs hit, Tabitha was one of the mutants to sit on the sideline of things as they played out. The next day, after weeks without hearing anything in reply from Magma, Tabitha went with her friends as they went to Nova Roma to make sure that nothing had happened to the woman en route, and were in turn captured by her father, the Praetor, and the priestess, who was really Selene in disguise. The group was fought their way out of it, and left without their friend, who was nowhere to be found. Though she wasn’t actively involved with the X-Men in the following months, she was still with the team when Scott Summers was murdered on the steps of the X-Mansion and when the #killyourheroes movement went live. As the months passed, Magma would be revealed to be in the hands of the Hellfire Club and returned to the X-Men, and things would devolve from there and more X-Men, namely Northstar, Surge, Nightcrawler, and Siryn would go missing. These same four X-Men would later storm the school, along with Cyclops and a missing SHIELD agent referred to as Druid. Not long after that, the Illuminati more or less took over the planet with the power of the Phoenix, split between them. They were eventually taken down, though not before doing many things for the world—both good, and bad. Since then, the world has gone back to what passes for normal, and has been relatively quiet. SAMPLE RP POST: (From [url=[URL=http://z4.invisionfree.com/Xrevolution/index.php?showtopic=13297]http://z4.invisionfree.com/Xrevolution/ind...showtopic=13297[/URL]]Death Smiles At Us All[/url]) Even when the idea of visiting Nova Roma to check in on Amara, who it had become increasingly clear that she wasn’t actually where the lot of them had thought her to be, Tabitha had been against the idea. She’d been told stories all the time that she and Amara had known each other of the glory that the city of Nova Roma held, the beauty that it yielded with everything around them and the instinct of nature taking its course in a city that, to the rest of the world, would be seen as backward and unusual. They were stories that Tabitha never really took as fact—because, really, it seemed to hinge more on the fiction in the first place. But that wasn’t the reason that Tabby had been against it. Tabitha would be the first to mention that they probably wouldn’t accept them uninvited, though her reasons were more personal than anything. She wasn’t convinced that Amara had been hurt when they had been back at the school, with the X-Men, though the truth of the matter had started to become increasingly clear. “Urgh…” Tabitha grumbled, her eyes blinking open against the harsh sunlight and her blonde, messy hair falling in front of them. “Wha…timeizzit?” She asked, oblivious to the reality of what was going on around her for the moment. She, naturally, assumed that she was back in her apartment at the school—one of her friends wandering inside to find her and opening the blinds to flash the sunlight in her face, that had happened so often since she had come to be friends with the rest of the group. “Five more minutes…” She trailed on, her voice quieting and her eyes shutting again, though not before catching a glimpse of the rocky walls, then becoming acutely aware of the sand below her and the bellowing crowd. “The fuck?” Tabitha cursed, now roused awake by the strangeness of the situation and making an attempt to scramble to her feet. “Thanks,” She commented absent-mindedly as Sam reached down, giving her his arm with which she used to pull herself up and catching her footing. She looked down to what she was wearing, some sort of armor that definitely wasn’t the clothing that she had been given before the feast—the feast… Tabitha bit down her lip as the memory of the feast started to come back to her, the realization of what the moon priestess had said as Tabitha slipped away into unconsciousness. “They drugged us.” She stated, looking around at the group as they themselves started to rouse. Rahne and Doug were already up, though Blake was still snoozing like the man child that, for all intents and purposes, he probably was. But where was…? Tabby cast a glance towards Sam, who confirmed her fears. Roberto wasn’t here. “He’s gone,” She stated the obvious again, biting down harder on her lip and then looking between the group. She didn’t get a lot of time to let the prospect settle in, as the Praetor’s voice boomed overhead and Tabitha’s eyes came snapped into focus. <"GREAT PEOPLE OF NOVA ROMA! For todays special event..."> “Izzat Pebbles’ dad?” She asked, pulling at the armor that hung on her skin. She was uncomfortable, but she wasn’t sure if it was the clothing or the predicament that they had found themselves in. She scanned her friends again, this time noticing that the boys had been given similar armor to that which she was wearing, and they shackled a collar around Rahne’s form. She wasn’t wearing anything else, though, which meant that she probably wouldn’t pull a switch back. “Are they serious?” Tabitha snapped, eying as soldiers funneled in to the other side of what Tabitha had now noticed was an arena, the crowd booming around them and the Praetor looking on in delight. She started to form a time bomb in her hand, mainly so she had something at the ready; that was before the man mentioned that if she used her powers, their missing member would be executed. So that was where Robbie was? Damn. “Y’think, Rahne?” Meltdown inquired, as the lupine mutant mentioned that she no longer thought that Amara had been in the city. Tabitha had started to become of the mind when the Praetor had started dodging their questions, only to lead them to that ridiculous feast… Tch. Rahne was angry. Sam was angry. Doug was angry. Tabby had been angry since she first caught sight of the Atlantean. A smirk formed on her face and she stretched, getting adjusted to the armor on her form. She had an outlet for the anger now, as Rahne mentioned that they needed to get Doug some equipment. Of course they did. “Comin’ right up, Dougy.” Tabitha’s smirk gave way to a grin, having nearly gotten used to the armor that hung on her frame, she started forward towards the group of men. They looked plenty strong, but were only men, for all their fancy dressings and swords. Oh, yeah. Tabby grinned, This is gonna be fun. She didn't need powers-- she'd make due. |
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| Exodus | Jan 20 2014, 02:44 PM Post #2 |
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I think is just an error as you copy and pasted the app over to post it, but the paragraph under Apocalypse and then the next paragraph are the same. That's an easy fix I think. The history looks good, but you have been here long enough to know that pretty well anyways. I'm going to go ahead and give you your first stamp, just fix up that double post of that one paragraph. Another admin needs to review this app as well and they may find something wrong that I did not. But from me, you have your first stamp. [S T A M P] |
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| Tabitha Smith | Jan 21 2014, 05:15 PM Post #3 |
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Got rid of the extraneous paragraph, thank you for pointing it out to me; it was probably thrown in when I copied my old app and pasted it to word as opposed to copying the newer finished one from word and pasting it as a post, and I had to have read over it. Either way, gone now! |
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| Betsy Braddock | Jan 23 2014, 01:18 PM Post #4 |
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You've got a couple of really minor errors here and there, but nothing major. Just take care with even the small things (the school bunker is Graymalkin One, not Lane). Watch the formatting as well, as things seem a little weird and spacey in parts. You do seem to be missing a proper Purifiers section however, though I can see details pertaining to the event. Add this back in properly and things should be fine and ready for approval. |
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| Tabitha Smith | Jan 24 2014, 06:01 PM Post #5 |
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All fixed; I changed Graymalkin Lane to Graymalkin One, and added a three-paragraph section to history regarding the Purifier's incident. Both of these were there mainly because they're leftovers from the old app, which I've built on with this, and ultimately I accidentally must have overlooked the Purifiers section when I reformatted it. Edits here:
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| Siryn | Jan 29 2014, 09:05 PM Post #6 |
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Sonokinesis/Flight/Vocal Hypnotism
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I didn't mean to let this slip, sorry about that. Remember about the list updater. [A P P R O V E D] |
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