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Magneto; Bryan's application!
Topic Started: Aug 9 2010, 09:31 AM (219 Views)
Bryan
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Max "Magneto" Eisenhardt
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IC Information.

Childhood.

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Max in a note he had written when he saw herr Kalb dead in a furnace.
 
My name is Max Eisenhardt. I’ve been a Sonderkommando at Auschwitz for almost two years. I watched thousands of men, woman and children walk to their deaths, I pulled their bodies from the gas chambers. I dug out their teeth so the Germans could take their gold, and I carried them to the ovens, where I learned how to combine a child’s body with an old man to make them burn better. I saw my fellow workers buried under an avalanche of rotting corpses. I saw thousands of murdered people in giant outdoor pits. And I couldn’t save a single one any more than they could save me… To whoever finds this, I’m sorry. Because I’m dead and now it’s up to you. Tel everyone who will listen, tell everyone who won’t. Please, don’t let this ever happen again.


Max Eisenhardt has always had a difficult life, and his childhood is no exception. Events begin when Max starts making a necklace for a girl named Magda. From that point forward, we see Max at school competing in a sporting event. He loses every competition he's in.

However, when he gets to the javelin throw, his eyes befall the beautiful Magda. He becomes determined to win. His hands tighten around the heavy metal javelin, and he throws it with all of his strength. Some sort of miracle must've occured, for he manages to throw it farther than any other in his class.

The Headmaster is furious.

Max's teacher, Herr Kalb (also a jew) tells him that he shouldn't be so happy - shouldn't be so boastful. For "the nail that sticks up gets hammered down".

When Max is walking home that day, he sees Nazi's marching on the street with his uncle with them. A prisoner. Around his neck hung a sign that read, "I have shamed a German woman."

He's set free, but is beaten brutally.

A new law passes, the Nuremberg law, which sets laws against the life of the Jews.

The next day, Max is accused of cheating during the javelin throw - he's forced to do it again, to reproduce his amazing throw. The spear feels heavier than before.

However, as a miracle, Max manages to throw it even further this time. And yet, he is still accused of cheating - he gets expelled from school as a result. As he's walking through the hall on his way out of the school, he sees his teacher Herr Kalb being beaten by German soldiers much as his uncle had been. As Max exited the school, he befell a similar treatment - several students beating him down with golden medals.

Max and his father go to berlin afterwards to see a former friend of his for help - for a job. And yet, he wants nothing to do with Max's father, in fact, he even gives him a proper beating for no apparent reason. They travel back home, low on money and hard on life - yet they manage to survive.

Soon, Max and his family escape to Warsaw. Gathered like animals in a closed off, secluded, guarded area of the city. Max manages to sneak through a hole in the wall of this ghetto and goes searching for food and the like for his family.

Soon, the family attempts an escape from Warsaw through Max's hole in the wall. They manage to make it to a forest, but are soon caught by the Nazi army. Forced to line up against a wall, Max's family was shot - execution style - one by one. The last in line, the soldier pulled the trigger a final time. However, his powers manifesting in an obvious manner for the first time, the bullet curves around his head.

His entire family is dead, yet he survives.

Max is then taken to a concentration camp. Auschwitz.



When he gets at the train station he sees her Kalb, the teacher from his school. Kalb tells Max that he’ll take care of him and that he should tell the guards that he’s eighteen and that he wants to work. The guards take him into a room where he’s washed and shaven and put into prison clothing. He then spends some of the most horrific times in his life working as a Sonderkommando. His task is to get rid of all the people that get killed in Auschwitz, dispose of the bodies in the furnaces and watch as countless of people get killed in front of his eyes.

Just when he lost all hope, Max saw Magda in the gypsy camp next door to his which gave him hope again, something to live for. He found Magda a job in the infirmary, but heard about something: the gypsy camp would be completely exterminated at the end of July. Only a month away.

He bribed one of the guards so that Magda would survive if she hid in the pile of corpses. A revolt was also brewing under the inmates of the camp. However, they could not attack yet - they wanted to wait for the Americans to arrive. And yet, come the Americans never did.

Time passed on and one day Max heard the destruction of the gypsy camp. He was heartbroken but then he heard his name being called from a pile of corpses and saw Magda alive between them. He quickly hid her in his quarter between the other inmates.

Not soon after, one of the crematoriums blew up - the pending chaos allowed time for some of the prisoners to fight with some of the guards. Utilizing the distraction, Max and Magda fled the camp.


This is only one chapter of Magneto's very expansive past. All of which I know almost by heart.



OOC Information.

My name is Bryan. I'm fifteen years old, and I've been a part of the habbo roleplaying scene for an absurd amount of time - almost eight years now.

Mutant roleplay has always been my thing, ever since it sprung up around 04. I love it.
The rush of power I feel when I've immersed myself in a scene is something like the same adrenaline rush someone might get out of watching a movie.
So vivid and real, these scenes are, that I'm compelled to continue no matter what. That's why after all the ups and downs, I'm still a part of the community today.

I feel I can represent Magneto accurately because of our similar personalities - he reflects me in a way that I feel I would act if I were a homosuperior in such a universe.

Most of you know a fair deal about me, and although I am operating this roleplay, my application is to be scrutinized as any other would be.

Thank you for reading!
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Meow
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I feel I can represent Magneto accurately because of our similar personalities - he reflects me in a way that I feel I would act if I were a homosuperior in such a universe.
i knew something like that was coming.
smh.
accepted.
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That is an epic picture. Can't be assed to read the bio.
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taiwn
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Teh Blax ONE!
PURPLE,YELLOW make your QUEEN say hello.


Translates to : Good picture , And you made cass scream with your stuff.
Edited by taiwn, Aug 13 2010, 12:01 AM.
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