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Sparkling Autumn vs Failthful Child
Topic Started: Oct 13 2010, 06:07 AM (156 Views)
Nacht
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Their feud was young, they only met on that very day. But their hatred for each other was as if they were lifelong enemies. Something about the other just rubbed them the wrong way.

Akiyama Akiko stared at Ranbashi Michiko, her cheek hurting. The latter had surprised her in a classic move; tapping her on the shoulder and then punching Akiko in the face when she turned to look.

Bitch might swallow jizz for chump change, but she was pretty good at throwing punches. Akiko spun around and threw a quick shot at Michiko's stomach, following up with a savage uppercut and another body blow. Michiko staggered back at the pain.

Wait, what pain? Michiko didn't feel much after the first two attacks. Sure, she was a bit woozy, but damn did she feel alive. With a roar of anger, she launches herself at that other bitch, knocking her to the ground. Michiko takes a split second to straddle the other girl's hips, making sure to get nice and comfy before she began to rain down punches on Akiko.

Dull thud after dull thud slammed into Akiko, and if she wasn't fucking pissed enough to see red, she would've just passed out and let it be done with. Summoning up strength, she slams an cupped palm into the side of Michiko's head, quickly following up with a grab of her shirt, and a change in positions. Screaming and laughing in incoherent rage, Akiko paid that druggie whore back in full as she began savagely smashing her poor victim in the face and torso. Dimly, she was aware that something felt sort of sticky on her knuckles as she kept fighting.

Michiko felt like passing out. In the scraps of coherent thought that floated about, she wondered about how much more she could take. Running on autopilot, she grabs the other girl and drags her down, forcing herself up at the same time. Their heads cracked together, and Akiko fell off of Michiko, temporarily stunned. Both fighters clambered to their feet, finding it difficult to remain standing. They put on a final burst of energy and exchanged standing punches, like frenzied prize-winning bare-knuckle boxers no longer caring about putting on a show and more concerned with putting the other bastard into the ground.

After the two began trading standing blows, the fight ended somewhat quickly. You could count the trades using two hands easily, and sweet, oblivious unconsciousness swept up the both of them at the same time, their already weakening vision going completely dark as their bodies gave out from the brutal brawl.
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I have no idea why I wrote this. :V

Maybe so y'all can post more.
Edited by Nacht, Oct 13 2010, 04:56 PM.
 
Ryuichi
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I approve, Nacht. 8D I'll delete this post when I reply to it.

Also Michiko's name means faithful child if that's what you were going for in the title
 
Nacht
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wait what reply?
 
Ryuichi
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Wait...Oh.

This is what happens when you're sleep-deprived and can't read right derp XD I gotcha now.
 
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