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Description: A group known as the Black Claw gang, comprised mainly of animal people has gone on a crime spree in Metro North. The outbreak has caught the law enforcement by complete surprise and the bandits are better armed than the police force. They are on the brink of having to call in the military and put the entire city under military quarantine till the crimes are stopped. It is your choice, will you take the law into your hands and gather up the criminals or will you slaughter them all to end this nonsense so you can get back to the normal flow of things?
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Chapter One: Distant Memories

S.T.A.R.S had completely fallen apart after the lost contact of Alpha and Beta teams. Bravo team had become the new Alpha team and new Beta and Bravo teams were built from within the chosen few the pool of police and veteran fighters.

David and Jessica had taken residency in the Hotel, David was now an official wanted man. He had “Murdered” his Ex-Police chief and adoptive Father police chief James Montgomery. The man had meant so much to David, in his childhood they would watch movies together, go out to dinners and he was always the one person David could count on whenever the pressure of society and high school was getting to him.

David looked back upon happier times. He remembered one fateful summer time afternoon. James took him onto an ice cream parlor and David would order a root beer float or a chocolate strawberry vanilla swirl or something new and exciting whenever he was taken to the parlor. James would simply order a banana nut sundae. David and his adoptive father sat in a booth alone and David looked at his father while he sipped his root beer float.

“Is something wrong son?” James asked as he spoon made penetration within the white vanilla coating of the sundae.

“No, it’s just. I don’t know what to do with my life, everyone at school seems so sure they are going to do one thing or another. Ponce says he wants to be a big business man and be wealthy, Jake says he wants to be a police officer. I still don’t know what I even like…” David stated, groaning at his last sentence as he sipped on his root bear float. His eyes seemed to look downward, back then he had low self esteem issues.

James Montgomery smiled at his sun and taking another spoonful of ice cream in his mouth he crunched the nuts in his teeth and after swallowing came up with a reply.

“Son, I’ve lived thirty two years of my life already. I have my share of mistakes and accomplishments just like anyone else and my best advice to give to you is to be yourself. Do not do anything just for the money, do something you enjoy doing because no matter how much it pays, if you love doing it, then it shouldn’t matter.”

David nodded at these words. “But that’s just it, I don’t know what I want.”

James laughed this off, his bearded face looking onwards. “Perhaps you will find out sooner or later…”

Suddenly an alarm rang across the street, gunshots were heard. Police Officer James Montgomery sprang into action and revealed his concealed handgun. “David! Stay here.” He ordered his adoptive son as he sprang to his feet. “Herman! I’ll be back.” He said bolting out the door as he spoke to the parlor shop vendor, as he wiped the counter top off with some window wiper.

David of coarse was in his rebellious age, a tender fifteen years old. How could he pass up this opportunity to see his Dad in action? He ran out the door and followed his adoptive father.

David managed to run out in the middle of a hostage situation. A man held a woman at gunpoint. He was behind her and wore all black, bullet proof vest, T-shirt, jeans and even shoes he wore all were matching. The man was obviously insane. “I am going to kill her unless I get ten million zenni on the spot!” He said laughing, this man was a lunatic. David hid behind the corner of the alleyway between the Pawn Shop and the Ice Cream Parlor.

James Montgomery ran out and pointed his standard revolver at the villain. “FREEZE! Let her GO!”

“Why should I? I know how you cops work, you don’t get clearance to shoot me until I release her! So STUPID!”

“Let her go… and put the gun down and I won’t shoot.”

The man laughed, “This bitch broke my heart so now…”

A loud gunshot was heard, a metal bullet pierced through the right temple of the woman as she fell down and the bullet exited through her opposite side. She fell, dead. The police chief gasped and was transfixed on the dead body. Stunned at the site of such a thing, David saw the madman laugh and point his gun at the Police Officer.

“..So now I get to blow her brains out. AND YOUR NEXT!”

The cop was still in shock at such a site, David charged from his hiding place. Sprinting at the gunman he yelled. “NO!” and rammed his shoulder into the Gunman’s chest making the gun point straight up in the air and making it fire, making him miss the Police Officer of the time James Montgomery.

“Brat… You’ll pay dearly for that.” Said the gunman as he staggered backwards a few steps. He pointed a gun right at the boy when two more shots were heard. This time, the gunman stood, a bullet in his chest had stunned him and another had pierced the same exact spot pushing the first bullet in deeper. One more shot was heard and the center of the forehead of the gun man was dripping red and a bullet hole could be seen. His eyes rolled to the back of his skull and he fell backwards. His body twitched, he tried to fight for a second longer of life but he did not last long, he died though he still would not stop twitching.

The end of the gun of James Montgomery’s pistol would not stop smoking. He held it up and gave it a blow. “Didn’t I tell you to stay put?” smiled the adoptive father, more police cars showed up and an ambulance had arrived to take the body. “Dad, I think I know what I want to do now…” smiled David. “Mad men like this are almost every day in Orange Star, I think I want to help protect and serve justice. I want to be a police officer just like you!”

The Future Police chief smiled and patted David’s hair. “Nothing else could make me happier…”



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Chapter two: Thug Life

While under the white light, the police officers are shown as the guardians of peace in Orange Star city. The officers fight crime twenty four hours a day seven days a week and that’s a lot of work. However, criminals are always at work to build their own empire and deliver their own kind of law.

A group of six animals were at large, they were known none other than the black claw gang, they can be easily identified with the red bandanas worn somewhere on their body and black mark that they leave on victim’s bodies because they share a complete hatred of humans that are not animal like. They comprised of a fox, an elephant, a bear, a tiger, a cat and their leader is a wolf.

“Yo Smokey.” Stated the fox like creature.

“What Foxy?” replied the big bear like man.

The two were walking down an alley way, the fox woman sniffed the air. “We got some humans in that bar, what do you say? Do we blast them?” she said smiling.

“Sure thing, they are going to enjoy some of mamma bear’s secret honey…”

The fox lady readier her twin pistols. Her bandana tied around her head but had ear holes in them to allow her pointed fox ears to point out. “Alright, ready Smoke?”

The Bear cocked his gun and smirked, “Ready.”

The two walked into the bar, all was at a quite rest. A gang of bikers were playing pool, the bar tender was cleaning a glass cup with a wipe. All of them were human, the animal or “Furries” as the humans called them walked in and stood out almost as soon as they stepped foot in the tavern. The bear was big and black, smoking a cigarette and wearing nothing but sagging jeans and a throwback yellow jersey. With white cap tilted to the side. His bandana was tied around his leg. The fox however only wore jeans, letting her human like breasts be revealed with brown nipples and a red bandana on her head. She hid her twin pistols behind her. The beat had his in his back pocket.


The humans looked on at the sight, there was laws about furries being allowed to not wear any clothing but usually they did not look as human as the fox woman did. A biker approached her. “Hey foxy mama, wanna take a ride on my bike? I promise I won’t bite, unless you want me to…”

The fox looked at the bear, they suckered in another one. The fox lady went on her knees. “I’ll give you and all your buddies blow jobs if you want.”

The biker looked like her just hit the jackpot. Unzipping his leather pants he revealed his manhood. “Alright. Show me.”

The Fox woman licked it, she hated the taste but it was part of the plan, besides it reminded her of a piece of sausage every time she did this. She then opened her mouth wide and crunched down on the man’s penis. She ripped it off with an animal like savagery and ate it. “I like Eating Dicks…” she said licking some of the blood off her lips.

The man roared in pain, a large gush of blood escaped from his penal area. The great black bear known as Smokey raised a massive paw and clawed him, knocking him out and left him to bleed to Death, the other three bikers raised guns in defense.

“HOLY SHIT! Smoke them!” Stated one of the gang.

The fox using her agility to her advantage rushed forward and revealing her twin pistols she made short work of the rest of the gang. Diving behind a counter she shot and killed two of them on the spot with bullets landing in the chest, throats and heads all over the place. Only one managed to survive. His shoulder was grazed and he had a caught a bullet in the side of his Torso, he was slowly bleeding to death.

“Sic them Smokey.” Commanded the Fox.

“With pleasure.” Answered the bear. His massive self ramed through the pool table knocking it aside to meet the dying man, showing his razor sharp teeth, the beat ripped the man apart. He tore off his face first then his limbs. And began to munch on one of his arms.

Licking the gore red goo which was the man’s blood the bear smirked. “Yumm….. Honey in my tummy.” He laughed.

The fox woman laughed at this but then turned to see the bartender holding a shotgun and aiming the barrel straight at her. “Leave my bar… you furry sons of a…”

A bullet shot silenced him, it came from the pistol the fox was holding in her right hand. The woman laughed at this and blowing her pistol clean of smoke she beckoned the bear to follow her after he was done with his meal.

“Come on Smoke, there’s more places like this downtown. That’s where the REAL fun is going to begin.” She said, looking at one of the dead bikers, she picked up a leather jacket from his corpse. “No point in letting that go to waste.” She smirked. Her grin such a deceitful little tool, she was the biggest trickster of the group with Smoky paired with her as the second strongest.

The bear burped up and spat out a finger bone. “Alright, which is next.”

The fox picked up a brochure near the door for local human hotspots. “Hmmm… We haven’t hit up a hotel yet. Why not the one down the block?”

The bear clapped his hands or paws in the least in excitement. “Yay! Let’s hit up the Hotel!”

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Chapter Three: High School Sweet Heart


David has yet to return from his flight around the town. It is assumed he had wandered off farther than he expected, knowing David it was most likely the case. Jessica was in the hotel room, she was running on a treadmill, even though she was human she still had physical ability to match some of the strongest of men. She was fast and agile, something which would come in hand in the near future.

While running an episode of the Mrs. Dr. Oz show was on. She turned off the television and instead began to listen to her ipod while she ran. He chest bounce lightly from her light blue tanks top and black short and tight shorts. Mozart played his Symphonic number 40 in her ears, the light buzz of the musicsoftened her body from the tense struggle of life she had to endure. She had to be secretive about everything. She thought of David, the blue eyes he had once had so full of twinkle and hope now diminished to a red that glowed in sadness and loneliness, no matter how hard he tried to mask it.

In a way, he was just as damaged as she was. She reverted the treadmill to jogging pace and closing her eyes to the music she reminisced in the days before her adventures as a S.T.A.R.S agent.

Several years ago.

She remembered high school. She was the quite blonde haired girl in the corner of the glass room. Above all subjects she favored chemistry. Alone and quite she had no friends and wore thick and heavy glasses. Her body was not as mature or developed as the other girls, so the boys paid her no mind. Of everyone for her to start a crush on, it was David.

He was a jock, but not a typical jock. He did not sleep with the cheerleaders, though he had ever right to and every opportunity to. David was different… he was sweet. Caring, and innocent still. She was alone at her corner of the world, David did not pay her much attention but he showed simple acts of kindness toward her without realizing it.

One day in chemistry, her favorite subject, the class had to split itself into groups. She was the smartest of the entire class, so how weird was it to her that no one picked her to be in their group. She felt alone, on the verge of tears, she bowed her head. Locks of golden hair falling to hide her face. David turned around, his friends in that class were already in a large group, so they would not miss one more person. “I’m going to work with her.” He said to one of them in a low whisper.

Jessica must have heard this because she peered at him from her shell of hair and smiled. Her tears had retreated back into her eyes and all was at peace with her. David smiled, introduced himself and began work on a lab.

That was truly the first time they met, a simple act of humility of David’s behalf was enough to get her to have an innocent child’s crush on him. Weeks later she would begin to grow attached to him, she frequently asked people about David and wanted to get to know him better. She found out all about his love for wrestling and his captain position on the sports team. Instantly, she became the manager of the team hoping to receive notice of him.

One day, he was injured, a shock ran through the entire school. David “D-Rex” Loyals was injured. District was within two weeks, how could he perform? He was on crutches, his right foot had been sprained and would require tons of time and stretching to fix it. In an effort to heal himself, he had to miss practice, no matter how much he begged, he could not work out with the rest of the team.

For once, David was on the sidelines. During that time, the team experienced the most intense workouts of it’s time. But not David, everyone would crowd and say “Lucky!” or “thank god for that broken foot…”

David only replied to this. “I’m not lucky. You’re lucky to be running around at full pace.” Or “I have to thank the Devil for it more likely.”

So much pressure was on him to compete at District. He more than anything would love to win District Championship. The simple title “Champion” made his heart flutter. He defeated two top opponents at an earlier tournament in the year. However his foot along with weeks of missed training had gravely hurt his chances and his stamina.

To everyone’s surprise, David lost at district, he did not even place. He lost to an opponent he beat earlier in the year who took second place. He had won in overtime by attacking David injured leg. David had hid the fact his leg was still under recovery. It cost him his championship medal. Discretely he left the gym where the rest of his team, after seeing their beloved or hated captain (depending on who you asked) they were all losing horribly.

David went to the hallway outside, and far enough away so he could be alone. He cried, for one of the rare times in his life, tears came pouring out of his face. He heard footsteps, expecting it to be his coach or Ponce his co-captain he wiped his face. Turning around he tried to hide himself but felt two arms that held him to her. “It’s ok. You did great regardless.” She stated. In the eyes of the world, victory has a hundred fathers, but defeat is an orphan.

She handed him a water bottle and began wiping the sweat from his head and hair, “You wrestled your heart out David. It’s ok, you will win state next year.”

David sniffed and returned the hug, a bonding moment which would seem to last ages, the moonlight sonata was playing on Jessica’s ipod. Her mind was still searching her memories and she recovered herself back into present day. What had happened to him? She thought. Back then so much life, and now an evil has crept into his soul. She was saddened for him but looked onto the future, she will be there for him no matter what, from victory or defeat on the wrestling mat, to life or death in this “New World” he envisioned. She will always be there for him and love him.

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Chapter Four: Checking in…

Foxy and Smoky had entered the main lobby of the Motel. Foxy was sporting her new leather jacket she picked up from the biker gang, her twin pistols hidden in her coat, Smoky the bear had his shotgun behind his back. The small petite animal looking creature rang the bell for service. A clerk appeared and as soon as he walked up to the desk he flew backwards with the power of a shotgun whisking through him. Blood covered the walls behind him the loud shells of the gun echoed throughout the building.

Jessica heard this over the mellow symphony of Mozart. She put her ipod down and ran to see what was happening. Running outside her room and running in the hallways inside the hotel, she took a turn and peered downstairs toward a balcony and noticed the clerk dead and a foxy woman holding the master key to all the rooms and a large bear holding a smoking shotgun. The fox woman turned and noticed the human with her sharp senses and Jessica sprinted back into her apartment to get her gun. She could have called the police but that would mean investigation which meant they would find David. That she could not allow.

Her bare feet running across the Red Carpet of the hotel, she ran into her hotel to get her gun, meanwhile the two furries were running after her, they could not afford Orange Star City’s S.T.A.R.S force here yet. And she was the prime object to kill at the moment.

Jessica’s heart was beating fast, he heart rate rapidly increasing, she searched for her pistol in the drawers but failed to find it, she decided it may be have been left in the bathroom drawer instead. At that moment the door burst open, and the bear with the shotgun had kicked the door down using his great and gigantic strength. The fox lady swooped in and aimed a drop kick straight at Jessica. She cart wheeled away just in time to avoid it and managed to find herself in the bathroom. Then locking the bathroom door she searched for her gun. Quickly opening the drawers she rushed her hand through the stack of soaps and small towels and toothpaste, yet failed to find her gun.

“Shit…” she stated. Just as she muttered these words the shells of a shotgun fell to the floor and the bear known as “Smoky” blasted through the door with a sound of his shotgun. It damaged the door enough for him to kick down and peering around he looked for the female but she was nowhere to be seen. “where did she go?” he asked himself looking around. He had sworn both he and foxy had seen her coming into the bathroom but she was nowhere to be seen.

Jessica was in the lower cabinets, she could see the bear’s feet at through a crack in the pantry. He reloaded his shotgun and laughed. “I may not see you human, but I can sure as hell smell you.”

This statement made her heart drop. It’s beat’s steadied, the bear aimed his shotgun at the cabin. “Hahaha… Gotcha…”

Suddenly, a groan was heard outside and the body of the fox was seen thrown towards the wall leaving a crack in it, the bear ran outside alarmed at the scene, his partner was in the painful process of dying. A large hole was in her stomach and David Loyals stood there with a bloody fist. Foxy was bleeding to death and David removed his black glove which was now stained red with animal blood.

“No gut’s no glory I suppose.” He said, reaching for his glasses.

“Bastard… you…. You..” he stated in shock of what happened. Using this time David using his superhuman speed rushed forward and ripping the gun out of the bear’s hands he hosted the gun in the mouth of the great big and black bear. “Night, Night Teddy…” and a large shot had been heard. The Bear feel, his crown of his entire head had been removed and his brains were now covering the entire back wall and his partner who was in the process of bleeding out.

“You a dead man… a dead… dead… man.”

David walked towards the fox woman and held the shotgun to her face. “Not as dead as you will be, tell me who you two are and why you attacked this hotel. I saw the man in the counter and the register at the hotel lobby was full of cash. You are no common crooks, so what is your goal.

“We were the… WE ARE… apart of the black claw gang. You may have killed us, but Wolf is not going to sit by and watch his top dogs die un-avenged. He’s going to come for you, no matter where you run and where you hide, he’ll find you and eat your liver…”

The female fox then spat her blood in the face of David, the spit covered across the corner of his mouth and on this glasses and part of his forehead. Looking down at her with anger, he tossed the gun down and pressed his black combat boot to her throat. “Mother… Fucker….”

He pressed hard enough so it would choke her yet light enough for her to try and fight it, her death was inevitable but would be a painful one none the less. After a long minute of struggling, she finally accepted her fate and rolling her eyes to the back of her skull and falling to the side, she died.

David kicked the female fox’s corpse in the face and walked away, sensing Jessica in the bathroom he looked under her pillow covers and found her gun. Raising it in the air he tossed it to her as she exited the bathroom. “Next time, remember where you put your things. You almost died.” He stated this in a manner of fact voice but for once he was almost worried about someone else other than himself since the injection. He did not fear for her life per say but instead she was needed to help build the future and the new world.

David readjusted his black frames and walking over the corpse of the dead bear he picked up both their bodies with telekinesis. “Alright, Jessica follow me.”

Walking through the hallways with the bodies hovering behind them he walked through the hallways of the hotel and using his mental powers he hung the bodies on the flagpole outside the motel and smiled.

“So you think that’s a bold enough statement to this “Black Claw Gang?” “ he asked his comrade. Smiling at the sick sense of humor he had she shared a laugh.


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Chapter Five: Word Spreads

A television report was on FNN the local new network. It featured two dead bodies hanging on the flagpole outside a hotel where a clerk was found dead and the register cleaned of its cash. The reported stated, “Police state it was a robbery that went wrong, and that a local vigilante had killed the robbers.” Spike the Wolf scratched his forehead and growled. “TONY! NEKO! DUMBO!” Shouted the Wolf, sitting in his couch the eight foot tall human looking wolf sat up, the three other members of the black glaw gang came from different corners of the room. “We are going to go human hunting today.” He stated, a sinister sneer on his face showing rows of sharp teeth. “I will pick my teeth with the bones of whoever killed Fox and Smoky. Neko! Information report! What’s the word on the street.

The cat woman purred in delight. “Well… according to a few security feed that I erased before the feds can get a hold of it, It turns out a man with dark glasses is behind the two deaths.”

Spike the Wolf drank a can of Beer than crushed it under his palm. “Well, how can we find them?” he asked turning to his pack of animal people companions.

Tony, the tiger smiled. “You know something that’ll be GRRREEEAAATTTT! Is if we start killing massive amounts of humans, then the guy will just have to stop us, this time we will be expecting him.”

Dumbo the elephant smiled. “I agree with Tony, I never forget… forget that all humans are evil. We can avenge Fox and Smoky and kill a few pesky humans along the way! DEATH TO ALL HUMANS!” he said adding in the last sentence with such a powerful sense of clarity.

The wolf man released the can from his grip and let it bounce off the ground. “Very well then, it’s hunting season then!” he cheered, certain evil in his green glowing eyes. A crescent moon was in view, he looked at it through the window and laughed. “Mankind can count down it’s days of destruction, but I’m LITERALLY counting down the day of it’s destruction.”

A chorus of laughter filled the hollow air… a sinister darkness was cast over their hideout.

The next night…

Police sirens rang threw out the streets. Constantly searching for the rest of the black claw gang, violence has gone out all over the city. Massive piles of bodies were found ripped and torn and then occasionally burned to death. Several tanks surrounded the city, it was now under quarantine. General Cassandra Assare- Sackey held her binoculars at the main entrance and exit of the city. “Watch it men! No one leaves until those black claw guys are secured and in prison.”

David Loyals watched this from a window of an abandoned factory. The new location not helping his happiness in the slightest bit. “We need to catch those guys before the army does.” Explained David.

“Why is that?” asked Jessica.

“I studied law a bit in high school, the legal system is long and full of mistakes. If they get arrested they may not get the chair or life and then they get out in the process starts all over again. Kill one save a thousand.” He stated crossing his arms.

“They are all over the city. How are we going to stop them all David?” asked Jessica, her tight midnight blue combat suit was on, she vowed to herself she would not be caught off guard again. David paced for a moment, rubbing his chin he pondered to himself. He ran scenarios through his head, knowing what all legal enforcement agents would do to him or the gang as they were nothing more than mere children in his eyes that are in their rebellious stage and thus very much predictable. He decided between two thoughts.

The first idea was to simply kill them all. It was grim and painful task to take but it was the simplest. He would be regarded as an outlaw and labeled a killer if he did this however, the city would acquire certain peace for a time. But, then again, it is possible that this would encourage more animal activists and create an even bigger uprising. This can complicate things for David’s plan of a future world.

The Second Option was a bit less cliché but it should be enough to stop the threat. He would have to find out the leader and defeat him. But not only just defeat him, but humiliate him. Make him suffer; he would pay for every life his gang took. David thought about this and it would bring peace back to the city and disband the gang without much deaths, he could even have a chance of redemption. But for now he just needed to focus on getting rid of the leader.

David formulated a plan, his glasses shined along the rims as he readjusted them while he spoke. “We need to humiliate them, make them ashamed. In that, is by taking out the men or should I say Animals on top.” He looked down from the window of the abandoned city looked at a crowd of animals that was running through the streets. He could kill all of them but that would take time, something he did not have.

“This is nonsense, they do not need to quarantine the city, and these rabid animals are killing PEOPLE without cause. I think I know a way to get the leader’s attention.” He stated. Throwing off his trench coat and readjusting his glasses David paced downstairs and out the entrance into the city street. “I’ll be back.”

David Loyals walked into the street. There were animals going ballistic, he wore his glasses and smiled as they took notice of him.

“Look another human!”
“Get him!”
“Is that him?”
“Death to all humans!”
“Kill the HUMAN!”

David smiled and with a wave of his hands they all were suspended in midair, stunned and confused as to what was happening. Their bodies dangled in midair like marionette puppets, David laughed as he used motions with his hand and fingers while controlling them, making them spin and hover in the air.

“Hey! What’s going on?”
“Someone turned off the gravity?”
“That HUMAN! He must be doing it!”

More roars of outrage and terror came from the group as the twirled helplessly in the air. Then using his power of telekinesis, he levitated his glasses off his head. Floating an inch above him, he revealed crimson ruby red eyes. Sparkling in terror, he ignited them and sent a twin pair of beams from his eyes and incinerated one of the group in a matter of exactly six seconds. This left the rest stunned.

“Who is the leader of the… What the hell gang are you guys called again? Black Claw Gang? That’s a shitty ass name. Anyway, just tell who the leader is and I’ll let you all go.”

David said this as he made the animals hover in air, they three left tried to kick and squirm their way out of it but to no avail. After a minute of no response David raised his hand up even higher in the air and raised the bodies of the animal men by a few feet, then he threw his hand down and made them all slam into the concrete ground. One landed on his head and died instantly due to cracking his skull open, David frowned at this and tossed his body away. Letting the body fall like a marionette puppet with the stings suddenly snipped off.

Only two remained. “Who is the leader of the Black Claw Gang?”

“We’ll… never betray our fellow furries.” Cried one.
“Yeah never….”

David frowned at this and raised them both to the air, separating them into two different hands of control with his telekinesis he squeezed his fingers together to ball a tight fist and began choking them with his mental powers. “Well… then. How about I release the first person to tell me what I want to know and let them live, and the person who doesn’t is killed? Hmmh? Does that seem fair?”

Holding them up higher in the air, he applied great amounts of pressure on both, giving them an occasional second to regain breath, he needed to keep them alive. Well, one of them anyway, and he need to make sure one did not go unconscious during his little treatment. Both struggled to resist but in the end, just as David predicted it to be, one had given up and surrendered. “I… I’ll..”

“You better say “I’ll Talk” “ stated David loosening the grip on the one that managed to have enough strength to speak.

“I’ll talk! I’ll TALK!” screamed one as he breathed for air.

“Very well then, Curtains for you then Piggy.” Stated David flexing his muscle and tightening his grip to max he pushed the Adam’s apple in of the pig like human’s neck and killed him, then tossed his body away like it was a piece of trash. David turned to the remaining lone survivor of the group, he was on his knees gasping for breath. If he were a normal human his flesh would burn a bright flame red color as he inhaled and exhaled deeply and heavily.

The survivor was a bird like creature, a yellow bird with an orange peak for a mouth, it’s wings counted as fingers. David smiled at the idea of asking him now whether or not he could fly with his wings. After a brief few seconds of letting him catch his breath, David let him get up. “Talk.” Ordered David, crossing his arms.

“There are six leaders to the gang, you already killed two. But the main leader is Spike the Wolf, you got his attention and that’s usually either a very good or very bad thing, for you its very bad. VERY VERY VERY BAD! I recommend you just do that neat little trick you did with me and my gang and do it with yourself because Spike ain’t never gonna stop. He’ll just track you down and eat you.”

“You mean…. THIS TRICK!?!?” David said, raising a black gloved hand, he applied heavy pressure on the area specifically on the bird man. The bird man bowed to a knee and could not move. “You might as well stay there, everyone is going to bow to me once I’m done.” David stated laughing at this. His laugh however, was cut short when a bullet whizzed past him and pierced the forehead of the canary like man that spilled the secrets of the streets to David. David turned to see a female running away from him from the rooftops.

Neko sprinted on the rooftops, wearing tight black combat tights she lived up to how flexible her species of furry was and manage to spin a cartwheel off the edge of the rooftop and then forward roll in midair to perfectly land in the alley. David simply floated behind her with his arms crossed. “Impressive acrobatics, but it can’t beat genetics.” He stated. The cat like creature hissed and rushed at him.

Unveiling her claws, she attempted to stab or scratch him in the slightest bit. However, due to his much superior speed and agility he would time the attacks and dodge them, swaying left and right and ducking overhead swipes of her claws. Then he would follow up by a swift upward thrust of his palm to the chin of the cat furry known as Neko and send her flying up in the air her moment of potential energy letting her hover a bit.

David then used his after image technique to teleport right on top of her and then spinning completely forward he landed a bone smashing heel into the torso of the cat woman’s chest. The cat girl hissed and Neko fell downward at top speed enough to crack the concrete a small bit. She was alive but gravely injured, David floated downward with his arms crossed and looked down on the furry. “Poor Kitty…” he taunted. “I’ll put you down in a better way than lethal injection…” he stated holding out his finger he gathered energy into the end of his index finger and shot a beam through the chest of the cat woman.

Her last breath was ended with a soft mix of a satisfied purr and disgruntled meow. The Red beam penetrated the center of her chest where the breast’s valley was and David saw her close her eyes and turn her head aside. She was dead. “NEEEKOO!” roared a voice.

David turned to see two figures running towards him, one that was much faster tackled him and landed right on him holding him by his shirt collar, Tony the Tiger got straight up into David’s face and showing his razor sharp teeth he stated. “You killed my wife…”

David smirked and amplifying the power of his voice and vocal cords with his Ki energy, he roared a battle cry that made the tiger man a groan of terror as he held his paws to his ears to shield the noise. David then kicked him off and jumped upward, facing his next foe which tackled into him with a shoulder that sent him flying.

The force of the elephant’s shoulder send David zooming into the building behind him, making it fall and then spinning in midair he recovered after he went through the stoned structure. The elephant was slower but was a hell of a lot stronger than the tiger. David made mental note of this and watched as the tiger unloaded a submachine gun. “THIS IS FOR NEKO!” he roared as he let loose a fury of bullets aimed for David.

David set up a mental shield with his Ki energy and let the bullets bounce harmlessly off of it and fall to the ground making it rain with metal shells of the gun. The tiger tossed his gun aside angrily and let loose his growl. The elephant picked up a nearby sedan and chunked it at David. David blasted it and an explosion sounded between himself and the two fighters as a full powered energy wave escaped his hand. David the power of the blow ignited the gas in the car and a explosion between them happened. David used this chance to strike, he rushed through the fire using his mental Ki shield to block any harm to come to him and then focusing the Ki into his hand he shoved his entire arm right through the muscular chest of the tiger man.

“Grrrrr…” the tiger man gasped as David’s limb was placed through him, his once orange glowing and fiery like eyes faded into a certain darkness and he fell limp. David laughed at this and tossed him aside, by fate he landed next to the body of his dead wife. “Nekooo…” he purred, cradling next to his dead wife. Placing his paw into hers he closed his eyes and let the darkness which was death fall onto him.

“You… Killed my friend, what... what…. Are you? You can’t be human.” Stated the elephant, fear was now in his mind as he backed away slowly from the figure of David. Instead David peered through his glasses and tilting them down slightly he revealed his glowing red eyes. “Tell your leader, Spike, I want to see him at the town square. It will be tomorrow at midnight, if he doesn’t I will hunt HIM down and make sure they end up like those two…” he said pointing a finger at the two feline fiends who laid dead beside one another.

“Except…” he said using his pointed out hand and turning it into an open palm, a blast of energy came from it and their bodies were incinerated in a blast. They were reduced to a black stain on the concrete and a pink and black mist that zizzed from it. “I’m not leaving anyone to rest in peace. You’re only alive to deliver this message. Understand?” stated David Loyals.

“You…. You…. YOU!” roared the elephant. Giving a charge David only crossed his arms and signed, the man ran toward the elephant and then left grabbed a mighty and powerful grip of the elephant’s trunk. Then spinning the elephant around he tossed the massive beast away perhaps a dozen or so yards and was assumed alive but injured. David smirked at this. “Stupid Brute…” he remarked. Floating downward he let his feet hit the ground with a loud TAK! He examined himself in a piece of broken glass that was broken off sometime in the fight. David picked it up and examined himself, his hair was untidy and his entire right arm was covered in red blood, and bits of organ his arm sliced through. He brushed the pieces of meat off and removed his glove leaving it at the pile of black remains of the feline couple.

Later…

The night’s calling was a mistress who would not be denied. Somewhere… a wolf growled. Somewhere, spike is growling.

“And that’s what happened boss.” Wheezed the elephant. Dumbo had been badly beaten by David, never before had he failed a hit mission and he had come so close to not leaving alive. “He says he wants to meet you at town square. He says he’s going to make you into a fool. He says…”

“He says… He says…” mimicked spike throwing Dumbo’s words back into his face. “Where is Neko and Tony?”

“Dead…” stated the elephant grimly. A moment of silence has passed, it was the only and closest moment that Spike would ever come close into mourning the couples’ death. “I see…” stated the wolf man, his hands behind his back he paced his way behind the elephant as he stood at attention and didn’t move. A shiver of fear rang throughout the elephant’s spine. Spike suddenly jumped onto his back and sank his claws into the pale grey flesh of the great and giant beast.

The elephant man, Dumbo trumpeted in furry with his nose. The wolf had gotten a good inch in with his nails but he delivered the killing blow by snapping his razor sharp yellow teeth into the elephant man’s throat. With a devil’s strength, he tore it out, muscle and flesh tearing apart. The behemoth fell on his chest, and was dead instantly. The wolf only laughed gulping the meat he had torn out the elephant man’s throat.

“Failure is not acceptable; consider your ass out of the gang. Permanently…” said Spike as he licked his lips in the gooey blood of elephant. He enjoyed the taste of elephant meat and decided to eat the rest of Dumbo after his fight with David. His silver grey fur with a single white streak over his nose and running down his back and tail glowed in the crescent moonlight. The white light shone bright that night. Spike howled and to David, that would let him know the answer he had been awaiting. “Challenge accepted.” Stated the wolf, his ominous green eyes fixated on the moon, a single soldier walked the streets.

A lone soldier, fighting for his form of truth and justice, his form of right and wrong, with his own code of beliefs. This solider would grow to become a god of a new world and this soldier…. This soldier’s name was David Loyals.

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Chapter Six: Showdown!

David had chosen the perfect spot for the meeting of Spike the wolf and himself. Everything was in place. He had alerted a local newspaper and a reported armed with her camera was in a nearby window ready to take snapshots of the battle to follow. Spike the wolf would probably notice the few extra people but he would probably think of them as bystanders, not to have known their real purpose.

David arrived alone in the center of town square, the authorities were tipped off that a battle would ensue and cleared the area at once. David had made all unwanted precautions removed from the field of battle. He remembered when he had to read Sun Tzu’s novel “The Art of War” it stated that “One must choose his own battlefield. “ and that “he first to make a strike that is critical is often the one who wins.”David planned on it, he had arrived in a casual black tank top and black slacks. His black police boots still on. This time he had a bit off style to his character as he wrapped his hands in fighting tape and wore his signature glasses to his final confrontation with the wolf. The city is about to be quarantined by the national guard, such nonsense would bring about only more obstacles in David’s path to ruling the city and ahead the Earth.

Spike had arrived sporting a black hood. His dog ears penetrated the surface and along with his snout. The sign of the black claw gang was on the back of his robe, behind him, two more fighters appeared in similar black robes. “I see you brought friends,” Stated David. He placed his index finger on the center of his glasses and readjusting them.

“Wolves have packs, meet Fang and Duke. Cousins of mine.” He introduced lowering his hood. The two behind them did the same, revealing similar fur color and eye color as their leader. They stood in a fixed triangle. Slowly walking toward David and deciding to surround him, the leader spoke. “Have you ever known how you humans treat us?”

David cracked his knuckles. “Alright, Fido X. Just because you aren’t the top of the social class, doesn’t mean you have a right to kill innocent people. Trust me, I am a killer myself. But, I kill for a good cause. A new world will be born out of a thousand screaming deaths of evil ones like you…”

The wolf raised an ear. “I am killing to save my people from discrimination and injustice, most of our population remains uneducated because humans turn us away and regard us as animals.”

“You are an animal. I saw the way you lead riots, I studied how your followers killed innocent men and women. I know the law is cruel sometimes and those injustice get away but that’s why I am building a new world order. Now is the only time I give you this option… Surrender to me, pledge your loyalty and allegiance and I promise not to kill you,” stated David.

The two wolves behind Spike nodded at each other and rushed at David. Spike stood there and began to power up a strange purple aura around him. David smirked as one fell down in place and yelped in pain, a loud bullet shot was heard and in a nearby window, the end of a sniper was seen. Jessica had just shot the wolf Duke in the center of the forehead with her sniper.

The wolf known as Duke fell dead in his tracks and the wolf known as Fang continued and attempted to tackle David to the ground, running on all fours he would end up ramming his shoulder into the male. David felt the blow but then seemed to melt away from his foe. The wolf ran through an after image of David using his immense speed he had ported behind Spike as he stood where he was and held a single index finger and interrupted his Ki charge. “Just like that… Bang…”

A death beam shot out of the pointed index finger of David and almost pierced the head of the wolf. However, the wolf managed to avoid it by David stopping his energy flow before the beam reached his head and it dissipated only an inch away from Spike the wolf’s head. This left David to laugh at the power difference between him and his foe and instead sent a open palm thrust into the center of the back of his foe and send him flying into his ally and made the two crash into one another.

“Is that all? How pitiful. Why don’t you two attack me all at once and we can see how much damage you can do?” David commented on his foes lack of intellect. They were indeed barbaric in their purpose and their fighting style was sloppy at best. David could see right through their attacks, he was able to predict at least three different ways to counter them from his current point of distance.

The wolves lunged themselves at him without thought. David used his immense speed and capitalized on their momentum and double clotheslined them into the cement ground. Falling head first into the ground they then felt another strike by David as he flew high into the air and opening his palm toward the much weaker furry known as fang he collected a moderate amount of Ki into his hand.

“This is… GOODBYE!” He declared. Sending a full powered wave of energy directly at Fang, the wolf was helpless but to look on at the blast of energy coming towards him. He was engulfed in the bright red wave of energy and his entire body disintegrated within the blast. A few stains of black blood was left of the wolf along with an eerie pink mist that rotted of burnt flesh that sizzled from the crator left behind of the blast.

Spike only turned and was dumb founded of how easily David had overcome his allies and him so quickly. It was unbelievable! Such power, he could really use David’s fighting abilities in his cause for furry freedom. “Ready to surrender?” questioned David as he crossed his arms. Looking trim as usual floating high above the area where Spike the wolf lay.

“Yes…” Spike admitted. Getting up, his jeans were torn and ripped and his body was badly beaten he did not want to end up like his companions. “Look…. I just want to stop the discrimination against the furies. You can understand that right? I’m willing to give up but please… I can use someone like you in my cause.” At this point the wolf had fallen to his knees. “Please… help me.”

David floated down to meet the wolf and place a palm to his forehead, almost patting him on the head but also petting him in a since of meaning. The cold man looked into the wolf’s soul and saw an inner light within his dark and clouded mind. “You are on a righteous path, however. You must die… I am sorry. However, I promise you this. In my new world… I’ll give the furies a small island they can live on in solitude.”

“No... Please… Don’t kill me… I… I… I.. I don’t want to die yet… Please… Show mercy!” Begged the wolf, he was on the verge of tears, minutes ago he had promised himself he was going to tear this man limb from limb but instead he was begging for his life.

“I am showing you mercy. Compared to other ways I like to kill people, this is the most humane. How ironic is it the first person I decide to give a humane death to… I part animal. How… interesting….” He said pointing his index finger out into the center of his forehead.

“Please… NO!” Cried the wolf.

“Death is a foe we all must lose to end the end, my friend. In this end I hope you find paradise. I hope you find the peace you seek in the after life,” stated David. The words coldly escaped his mouth like frozen snow cube that hailed on the helpless wolf.

Suddenly, they were surrounded by a squadron of police cars. A tall man that towered a mighty five feet and nine inches held a microphone. “Release the furry. You are BOTH under arrest for murder, you are ranked A criminals and must surrender or we WILL use force.”

David laughed at this, gathering the energy from his chest and unloading it into a single and concentrated blast from his finger tip he fired through the head of the wolf known as Spike. Blood dripped from the hole and brain matter exploded out of the exit hole. The wolf had rolled his eyes into the back of his skull and fell dead. His face shattering onto the ground and flattened on the hard concrete surface.

David laughed coldly at this. His red eyes lightened behind his dark sunglasses and challenged the crowd of police officer. “Come one… If you all are not going to shoot maybe I WILL!” David said rising his hand he sent a massive eruption from the earth sending the cars flying in the air along with bodies of police men and women. Dust quickly filled and all were blind. David could have easily killed them all then and there with a furry of deadly Ki missiles. But he instead readjusted his glasses by placing a finger on his sunglasses. He figured fighting them would be more fun.

The debris cleared and all the police officers who were now half of the original numbers banded together. The new police chief rallied them and ordered an attack. “Shoot to kill men! SHOOT TO KILL! SHOOT TO KILL DAMN IT!” he would order. The police officers did as they were told, and unloaded all they had on the single being known as David. They unleashed shotguns, pistols even sniper rifles at David but he only smirked and held his hand out reaching to the oncoming bullets and chuckled. The laugh escaped his dry mouth as his eyes glowed an ominous red. Such evil in his heart poured out in his laughter. The police chief thought the man was a envy of the devil himself.

The bullets seemed to slow down as they came closer to the radius of David and seemed to freeze them in place. Floating in midair, bullets froze and eventually the dust settled and the police had unleashed most of their bullets already to no avail. They were all frozen in place in front of David. He was in control of them with his telekinetic powers.

“Is that all?” he stated. “REALLY?!? IS THAT ALL!?!?!” he challenged, letting his focus down he let the bullets fall harmlessly onto the ground the raining of the metal slug like bullets chimed and filled the cement floor. David walked on them and smiled. “Just one scratch… Let’s see if any of you can lay a single scratch on me…”

David reached for his glasses and grabbing it with his thumb and index finger he pinched the frame between the lenses and tossed them out at the crowd of remaining police officers.

One male officer caught it and David after imaged behind him sending a single vertical chop like strike to the side of the neck of the man. The man froze for a second paralyzed by the blow as the two men next to him leaned in to attack David at both sides of him simultaneously. David leaned in to his left with a punch and sent a kick to his right with his right leg, stretching his body out. He stuck both opponents and then jumping up into the air at five feet, he kicked his feet in his left and right sides and did the splits in the air to kick both opponents at the side of him at once then sending his hands out in both and amplifying the Ki in his voice he roared.

“KIIIIAAAAHHHAAA!” he roared. The blast of air shocked all around him and then as he fell downward he landed gracefully on his feet and grabbing the other guy’s neck he completely twisted it around one hundred and eighty degrees on his body and collected his sunglasses. Placing them back on his dark shades covered his now cold and almost undead red eyes. Then crossing his arms out in front of him, he opened his palm in opposite directions of each side and fired full powered energy blasts. The waves destroyed the opponents on either side of David and now three police officers were dead at his hands. Such rapid movement and attacks had only taken a few seconds to complete. The rest of the team was in shock and as soon as the pink smoke evaporated, David stood and turned to the rest of the police force.

“Who else wants some? I will give you all to the count of one to run. One….” He taunted. Rushing forward he charged threw all of them and entered straight into the heart of them all. Raising his Ki in hands he rose high into the air. The rest of the team saw in awe. Such comments that followed were “He can fly? Incredible! Impossible! No way!”

David raised himself directly in front of the sun, casting a shadow upon the Earth. Then raising his palms to the sky he suddenly brought them down in an arch to his forehead and declared, “SOLAR FLARE!”

The sun rays around him amplified by his Ki and intensified causing a bright burst of light upon the rest of the crew. They were blind. Once more, David could have easily killed them all in a single blast of his Ki but he decided to spare them this time. There was no need to kill of the entire police force. He had just picked up enough to satisfy his urge to kill.

David dashed away as the entire force was blind, it was his tipping off which lead to them coming to the final confrontation and his hand that had slain many officers. He looked on the black gloved hands which seemed to be stained in red crimson blood. He sneered at how messy he made his hands and wanted to wash them immediately afterward.

He had completely destroyed a small thorn to his side. Humans can now live in a relaxed state of mind now that the furies were now adopting non violent ways of protesting their own civil rights. David satisfied his unquenchable thirst for that deadly and breathtaking kill and he even did it within a week’s work. Life was indeed looking ahead. He took on a gang, with much ease he might add in. But, now there was the entire world to pursue.

A glorious world, a world at final peace, only few humans can survive but it will be a glorious new Eden to create. This time the world will remain pure and ignorant and will have no fall. No angel shall rebel against him, no serpent will tempt the companion of man. And above all else, there will be no knowledge between good and evil. Ignorance and stupidity shall be bliss in his world. Only in his world…

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*The End*

All critism is welcome. Just not any about grammer and such I am more concerned about story and how much entertainment it was to read. :)
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Nice job, sorry it took so long.

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