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*COMPLETE* Coming Out [Quest - Easy]; COMPLETE
Topic Started: Nov 6 2013, 09:09 AM (151 Views)
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Name: Coming Out
Location: Namek
Available: Always
Difficulty: Any

Description: As a newcomer to the planet Namek, please feel free to explore the land or even say hello to the natives. Keep in mind that first impressions last forever. Though known as a peaceful race, their hospitality is not without limit. Pave the way however you see fit.


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It had been only a few months since the Saiyan-Changeling war had ended with a resounding victory for the Saiyans army. The battle fought on the grounds of planet Frost changed the universe significantly. Emperorer Frost no longer was in control of his planet and people, instead, the empire developed a democracy under the leadership of an android by the name of Ezekiel and his rebel fighters. The Saiyans had lost much of their strength with a huge amount of their military being depleted that day, forcing them to retreat back to their home planet, well, most of them.


Daikon, the general and one of the heroes of the Battle for Frost, decided that instead of returning home, he would travel to Planet Namek with the Cursed Legion without bothering to ask 'permission' from Titan. The general held very little respect for the King and held future plans of trechary against him; Using Nameks resources for his own ambitions would prove to be the first step towards Daikon's plans. The time of loyalty towards the king was over, Daikon and his subordinates would do what they wanted, when they wanted and there was nothing anyone could do to stop them.


"Yuck, this place is so... green, look even the water's green" Peach said as she slowly foated off of the ship and onto the blueish-green grass of Namek, her hands placed firmly on her hips. The female Saiyan had found herself badly injured during the war, however, due to the exceptional medical staff the Cursed Legion had employed for themselves, she was able to make a quick recover. Of course, her Saiyan heritage played a huge part in her recovery as well, allowing her to get back on her feet quicker than a member of another race would have. She also became much stronger due to being beaten to the point of near death. Peach had gone from being a young, girly girl to a young very powerful girly girl. However, her power level was still minuscule compared to that of Daikon at his full strength.

"You're right... Such a disgusting color" Cre said as she moved next to her sister, both of them staring out into the distance of the lush planet. Cre' had been successful throughout most of the war, leading lesser men and proving just how powerful and smart she was as she easily defeated the Icer grunts who threatened her. "Daikon, you gotta come see this place"

Slowly the general exited the shadow's of inside the spaceship to expose himself to the three suns of planet Namek. He shared the surprise of his subordinates as he had never laid eyes on this famous planet either. It was so green, so full of life, much unlike what the general was use to seeing back home on planet Vegeta or on planet Frost. The animals that flocked throughout the land seemed to flourish in their habitats, unwavering to the fact that three deadly Saiyan's just arrived on their planet. "Yes, yes its very nice Cre', now lets get down to business" The general said as he began toying with his scouter, using it to locate the nearest respectable power level in the area. The Cursed Legion traveled to Namek for one sole purpose, to locate the dragon balls, and use them to wish for power, maybe even immortality.

"What are those things we're looking for called, the Dragon Spheres?" Peach questioned, curious as to why they were forced to travel to such a planet.

"Girl, they're called Dragon Balls and they're said to be able to grant anyone any wish they want" Cre' said, correcting her little sister. The mystical items are famed across the universe for the great power in which they hold. Their ability to summon a dragon to grant any wish the caster so desired was shocking to everyone who heard about them. Of course, gathering all seven of them would be no easy task as the care takers of the items, the Nameks, have scattered them all around the globe, protecting each and every one of them with their lives.

"Wow, so where are they?"

"Who knows... but c'mon, we're about to go say hello to the locals, i'm sure they'll help us hahaha!" Daikon said as he took to the skies, headed towards a nearby village, his scouter showing him the way. Peach and Cre didn't hesitate to follow their leader, entering the green skies of Namek as well. Little did the Namekian people know, they were about to have some very unwanted guests.


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"They call this civilization?" Peach said as the trio touched down on the Namekian soil, dead in the middle of the green being's village. The houses around them were small and modest, unlike anything the Saiyan's were accustomed to. Being from an elite family, Daikon was used to much more, on planet Vegeta he lived in a home that could possibly be compared to a mansion. It had many bedrooms as well as many other rooms including a large training room in which he developed his fighting skills from a young age.

"Where are they..?" Daikon said as he looked around, unable to find a single Namekian. It was obvious that they were hiding from the Saiyans, scared of the unknown warriors and rightfully so. "I know you're here, Nameks! Show yourself or we won't hesitate to destroy this village now. I grant you five seconds..." Daikon shouted loud enough so that every member of the village could he his voice. Peach and Cre' smiled, eagerly waiting for there opportunity to blow something.

"One... Two..." Peach began counting, placing her right hand on her hip as she did so, maintaining her devious smile. Daikon could see eyes peeping from out of the building, trying to scope the Saiyans before they decided what to do. This irritated the general as he grew impatient with the race of slugs.

"Three... Four" Cre' continued for her sister. She too grew impatient and irritated that Daikon even showed the Namekians so much mercy that he would give them time to come out before they blew up their homes.

"FIVE!" Daikon yelled, signaling both Peach and Cre' to attack. The deadly duo did exactly that as they each quickly fired energy blasts at the biggest building in the village. However, they were surprised by an unexpected visitor who dropped down from the emerald skies of Namek to deflect the Saiyan's attacks with rather ease. The shock on the girls' faces was priceless, the last thing they expected to have their attacks batted away like child's play.

Suddenly, the rest of the Namekians finally came out of hiding as their apparent savior finally arrived to rescue them from the evil Saiyans. It had to be at least a hundred of them, in all different shapes and sizes, some were old, others were young, all were cheering their saviors name. Cotori! Cotori!

"Why have you come here...?" Cotori asked as he unsheathed a blade, holding it tightly in a position ready for combat. It was obvious to Daikon that this particular Namek was unlike the others. He was definitely a warrior, one who had fought in his fair share of battles. He even sported war paint under his eyes. "Answer me.." He continued, boldly.

"HAHAHAHA!" Daikon bursted into laughter at the sigh tof the puny namekian, whose body structure was similar to that of a thirteen year old Saiyan, in fact, it would be surprising is the Namekian before him was older than sixteen. "You've got courage kid, i'll give you that!" The general began to walk toward the swordsman, not feeling threatened in the slightest. He only stopped until he was right upon the Namekian, who surprisingly didn't flinch at all. The handicapp was completely obvious now as Daikon towered over the small Namek. The crowd was now silent, now worrying about there hero instead of having as much confidence in him as they had initially. Daikon glared down into the Namek's eyes, trying to intimidate the young boy, however, he was unmoved.

"I'll ask but only once more... Why have you come here?"

"We've come looking for the Dragonballs ... Where are they?" The Saiyan questioned, getting straight to the point. He didn't have time to play with the young warrior. He expected to get a fight instead of a real answer, however.

"You shall get no answer from me! now, leave here or I will have no choice but to force you to leave!"

"Is that so?!" Daikon said, no longer amused by the young kid's spunk. The general wasted no more time as he reached to grab the Namekian warrior by his throught, however, he only gripped air as his opponent was faster than anticipated as he simply ducked under the generals massive hand. Next thing Daikon knew, he was on the recieving end of a quick jumping kick under his chin. Daikon was unphazed however, failing to even move backwards after the attack. Cotori, hastily leaped backwards, creating distance between he and the monster of a Saiyan general. "You're faster than I thought.." Daikon started before raising his hand, motioning for peach to come over. "Peach"

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The bombshell of a female Saiyan, slowly walked towards her Namekian adversary having understood the signal given to her from Daikon. The general did not like to bother fighting opponent’s much weaker than himself as it only angered him. As a true Saiyan warrior, all his heart desired was to fight against opponent’s worthy of his power. This Namekian fighter before him would be no challenge for Daikon, he could tell having taken the warrior’s kick at full strength, Daikon could have broken him like a twig without breaking a sweat. Peach however, was dying to test out her new powers and Daikon was anxious to see how far the girl had come. Having her battle against this Namekian would give him a good concept on what kind of opponent’s she would fare well against in the future.

Daikon turned his back towards Cotori, deeming him unworthy. Walking back towards, Cre’ he simply planned to watch as Peach handled his would be opponent. The female saiyan flicked her long black hair from her face before entering her battle stance. The look on Cotori’s face showed that he felt disrespected that Daikon didn’t bother fighting him himself, instead choosing to send a woman in to fight his battles. However, Cotori was no fool, he wouldn’t look past Peach simply because she was a woman, no, he’s much smarter than that.

“You ready, handsome?” She said, smiling at the Namekian. Daikon grunted at her statement, knowing she only said it to tick the general off and cause him to show some sort of emotion for her, this time her emotion of choice was jealousy. Despite the fact that they both knew how they felt about one another, Daikon was too prideful and serious to show his true feelings for her. Even back on frost, Peach only heard from her sister how enraged Daikon became after her apparent death. The Saiyan General knew he could not show too much love for one of his subordinates as it was business over pleasure for him.

Cotori didn’t bother replying to Peach, knowing that she was only trying to throw him off his game, besides, the Namekians are an asexual race, they could never feel the type of feelings a race such as the Saiyans could have for the opposite sex.

With a loud battle cry, Cotori sprang into action, dashing toward his opponent with considerable speed. The beloved blade he carried with him everywhere was used to attempt to cut the female Saiyan’s head clean off, however, Peach was too savvy of a fighter to allow such a thing. She quickly got out of harm’s way by weaving her head backwards, barely dodging the attack as a piece of her hair, floated away from her head.


“Why you!” She exclaimed as she watched some of her prized possession fall to the ground. Cotori didn’t give her time enough to react however as he continued to go on the offensive, still swinging his sword with great speed, hoping to make contact with the elusive saiyan. Peach was forced to stay on her toes as it seemed her opponent’s attacks just kept on coming. Lucky for her, she was trained by Daikon, one of the best fighters the Saiyan race had to offer and because of her small statue, speed came naturally to her. “Not fast enough green man!”

It wasn’t long before an opening showed itself to the female Saiyan who didn’t hesitate to capitalize as she delivered a powerful kick to the Namekian’s midsection, sending him sliding away from her, still on his feet. He was surprised to see the strength the small woman had but as he looked closely at her figure, he could see that she was in perfect shape. Strong legs, slim waist, with strong arms, a figure any female fighter would die for.

“Had enough?” Peach questioned, knowing that her opponent would not answer yes. Her eyes were those of an extremely confident fighter, one who knew that she had this battle in the bag. Even Daikon could tell that she simply outclassed her opponent just by watching. Cotori seemed to be the only one who still believed he could win, but even his confidence was diminishing having seen the cocky expression on Peach’s face.


“In your dreams!” He yelled before once again dashing towards Peach. However this time the Saiyan woman was ready. Instead of waiting for her opponent, she went on the offensive herself as she leapt over the running Cotori, showing her gift for acrobatics as she flipped. Before landing she kicked the Namekian in the back of his head, completely catching him off guard. Furious, Cotori refused to fall, instead throwing another swing with his sword in Peach’s direction; however, she was ready for this as well. Without even turning around to view her opponent, the flexible saiyan quickly went down to the ground with a breathtaking split, effectively dodging the sword. With a quick motion, she rolled on her back with her hands planted on the ground before using her strength to push her body upwards, driving her feet into the face of Cotori who was forced up into the air before falling back down, dropping his weapon in the process.

Peach


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“Don’t tell me you’re done already?” Peach said as she stood tall over her defeated opponent who laid helplessly unconscious on the Namekian soil. The female Saiyan was disappointed to say the least, she had hoped for a more challenging fight from one of Namek’s superior fighters. Daikon however was not surprised. With Peach’s new found strength it was expected that she would be able to defeat such a novice with rather ease.

“Okay… Finish him off!” Daikon yelled from his position, serving as a coach of sorts for his beloved Peach. He knew that she had the same in mind, she didn't need for him to tell her to kill Cotori, she would have done it anyway, however his signal once again reminded her of Daikon’s dominance in their relationship.

“As you wish sweetheart” She replied with a smile before bending over to effortlessly grab hold of the Namekian to lift him in the air. He began to regain a bit of consciousness, not enough to open his eyes or realize what exactly was happening to him however. The female saiyan could see the grimace and pain in the green man’s facial expression. It was a sight that made her enjoy her position of control, knowing that the life of this creature was in her hands alone. She could hear the despair coming from the crowd of locals who once cheered with confidence for their hero, showing full faith in him. Now with their hopes crushed, they couldn’t help but let out tears. Most couldn’t bear to look as they refused to watch one of their own be killed.

Slowly Peach placed her hand on the Namekian’s chest with the gentlest touch; if one didn't know better they would think she was showing pity for the fallen warrior. A bright light formed from her palm, signaling the incoming death of Cotori. The rest of the Namekian began to yell for peach’s immediate cease, some even began to run out to attempt to stop her before she had the chance to fire. The fools were quickly punished for their actions as Cre’ appeared before them, easily knocking each of them out cold with the swiftest of kicks. In the next second Cotori was gone from this world as Peach’s energy pierce is body like a hot knife through butter. She then through him down like the garbage she thought him to be before turning to the rest, striking fear in each of their hearts.

“Please, please… The Dragonball isn’t even in our village; they’re always protected by the larger villages, ones with stronger warriors to protect it and a grand elder to look after it! Please just don’t kill us!”

“Jenba you fool! You gave them too much information!”

“I see, I see…” Daikon said as he moved forward past both Peach and Cre’ and stood tall in front of the group of Nameks who were even more frightened by his presence than the others, quickly identifying Daikon as the strongest of the bunch. “Well… Where is the nearest village to house one of these dragon balls?”

“I-I can’t!” jenba said, cowering before Daikon while still keeping what honor he had left by not revealing the location of one of his planet’s most treasured item.

“Sure you can” Daikon said before reaching for the Namekian’s neck, nearly suffocating him just as soon as he grabbed hold of the fragile creature. “TELL.ME” Daikon brought his soon to be victim off the ground and up to his face so that he could tell how serious the Saiyan was.

“Okay! Okay! … To the north, it’s just north of here! Just don’t kill us! PLEASE!”

“See now that wasn't so hard now was it?” The General threw the Namekian down at his friends who could not blame Jenba for revealing what he revealed to Daikon. They knew that he was only protecting his own life as well as the lives of everyone in the village. Besides, Daikon would need to know the location of all the dragonballs if he and his alliance, the Cursed Legion, hoped to have their wishes granted. “Let’s go” Daikon said, letting his subordinates know that it was time for them to make their leave. Peach and Cre’ began to float upward and towards the next village while Daikon stayed behind a little while longer. “However, before I go, allow me to leave you all with a parting gift...”

Suddenly yet simply, the General raised two of his fingers of his right hand, almost immediately causing what can only be described as a catastrophic explosion. The bright white light quickly engulfed the area as the energy from the Saiyan erupted like a bomb, easily taking out the island as well as every Namekian on it, ending their existence quick and relatively painless. Peach and Cre’ were shocked, seeing their general display such an astonishing level of power. They themselves were lucky enough to have had the wherewithal to flee from the scene just as soon as they felt Daikon’s energy rising. Of course the Saiyan general knew that they would move out of the way, he wouldn't hurt his comrades for no reason, especially not his Peach.

The explosion caused the ocean water to fly into the air before gravity brought it back down, making it seem as though it was raining in the area. Once the smoke cleared there was nothing left of the island or the village, Daikon, Peach and Cre’ were the only life forces that could still be felt in the area. The general grinned at his power. Peach wasn't the only one getting stronger. Daikon could feel himself getting closer and closer to one of his most sought after goals, becoming a Super Saiyan.

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Grader's Notes: Well written! No matter what image you use for Peach I always imagine the one from the Mario series all up in the action, which makes the read a lot more interesting!
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