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| Deleted User | Nov 13 2013, 09:27 PM Post #1 |
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Red sand was thrown into disarray as Nail pushed off from his dormant standing position into a full fledged sprint, becoming nothing more than a green and black blur against the crimson horizon of Vegeta. Around him his yellow aura shielded him from the loose gravel and sand, dissipating it to nothingness long before it could ever reach his eyes. His breathing was methodical, pacing his air intake so that he may endure the lengthy run without becoming winded. The Namek-born warrior had recently become fully adjusted to the high gravity planet and was eager to prove to himself that he could push his limits further. Though he wasn't crushed by the sheer force of the planet's mass the feeling of suddenly gaining an enormous amount of weight had gotten the better of him in the beginning. Not something he would like to admit to. A triumphant roar was released from the very bottom of his belly as he broke stride and leapt like a gazelle, two firmly planted feet propelling him upwards into the sky. Accomplishment pleased him greatly yet he dare not spill any weak emotions outward, the saiyans could easily be about. They'd been observing him ever since he landed on the desolate planet of theirs but had yet to attempt any sort of contact with him. Perhaps Titan had sent them as a welcoming party. He was the only saiyan Nail was aware of that knew of his departure from Namek for Vegeta with intentions of studying one another. Just as Nail took to the air sure enough he spotted three black dots off to his right side, flying as well and keeping pace with him quite easily. "The namekian seems to have adjusted, captain Karpoz." One of them said. Even though there was a great deal of distance between them every namekian possessed an acute sense of hearing that surpassed a normal being's by at least ten fold. "Then we shall test him when he stops...Can't have pathetic weaklings going before Titan..."The captain of the trio snickered. "He'd most likely be crushed just by his presence alone otherwise." "Test, huh?" Nail mumbled, knowing full well what a saiyan test was comprised of. His stern face shifted into a smirk, the path of his flight suddenly shooting off to the side. Right for Karpoz and his crew. "Ya think he heard us Captain?" The saiyan named Letuce said, looking over to his captain with a smirk matching that of the oncoming namekian. "From this distance? Nah...A convenient coincidence is all." Karpoz then reached up to turn on his scouter but found that Nail had suddenly appeared in front of them. His hand fell away from the device before getting a reading. Karpoz thought nothing of it though as just a few days ago upon his arrival he'd already gotten a ready. A measly 2000... The emerald warrior stopped but said nothing to the three saiyans, standing there stoically without muttering a word of welcome or challenge. His presence would serve challenge enough, as the brutal race of monkeys were infamous for their quick temper and pride. A sudden approach would most likely entice all of them. "Powerful entrance there bud..." Karpoz broke the silence among the four men, his own body floating forward to put his two subordinates behind him. "But gloating earns you no respect here!" "Who said I wanted your respect?" Nail bit back, spitting out some saliva from his mouth and onto the ground far below. "Following me for the past week? Scurrying about every time I looked in your direction?" "On orders, scum!" Karpoz shot back at Nail, his temper already beginning to show face. "Anyways...Big talk coming from someone who could barely walk not but a week ago." Karpoz had confirmed Nail's beliefs in them being sent on Titan's orders, though he didn't say by who Nail could only figure it was safe to assume their king. The two of them, Captain Karpoz and Nail, seemed to fixate suddenly on one another. An intense stare down playing prelude to a dramatic beginnings of a fight. "Let me at 'em first Captain!" Letuce intruded, shifting his position in the air so that he stood between the two having a stare-down. The captain stared for a few moments longer before releasing his gaze from Nail, his eyes moving to Letuce as he backed off. "Go ahead...He's not even in my league anyway." Word Count: 743 Total: 743 |
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| Deleted User | Nov 14 2013, 07:12 PM Post #2 |
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A sadistic grin played across the grungy saiyan's lips for a moment, Letuce moving forward as the rest of the saiyan crew backed off to allow proper spacing between participants and observers. His opponent made no moves aside from bending both arms at the elbows and placing them behind his back. Pure black oculars seemed to suck in the saiyan's very essence he bore down on him so hard, Nail already attempting to expose any hidden flaws Letuce might of had. "That's right green boy, take it all in! When I'm finished with you, there wont be enough left of ya t---" Letuce said but was suddenly silenced, as he found himself gasping for air. "Talk is cheap...Saiyan," Nail bent down and whispered in his ear smugly, his knee having been planted firmly in the loud mouth's stomach. Seizing the moment the namekian cupped his hands together over-head and squeezed them together tightly, bringing them down upon the bent over man's back with such ferocity he was sent spiraling down toward the ground below. Blurring from existence for but a moment Nail beat the shocked saiyan to the ground, stopping his flailing body from colliding with the ground. He'd extended an arm and caught him by the throat in an amazing act of dexterity but head butted the man and released his grip before any admiration would be afforded to him. "Hey captain..." The other lackey saiyan, Diaz, mumbled from above the scene of the fight to his superior. "What was his power level again? Two-thousand is what you said before..." "What's your point Diaz?" Karpoz responded sharply, moving his hand to activate his scouter once more. "Well...Letuce's power level is three-thousand...Aaand...Well, the effects of the namekian's blows shouldn't be having this great of an effect." Diaz also turned on his own scouter as he spoke. Bringing both men to stare down once more at the battle below. "Urgh," Letuce muttered as he shook off the blows and flipped to his feet, dusting off what dirt he could before catching sight of Nail once more. "Stupid namekian! You will pay for that!" Raising his fist in anger the barbaric saiyan lackey began to charge for Nail, intent on putting a hurting on him like never before. Coming in hard and fast the saiyan put Nail on his heels. The first punch of the combo Nail managed to get his left arm up to block and push aside, while a more speedy left punch managed to connect with his jaw. The blow did nothing to Nail of significant importance in the combo but did prevent him from countering any of the follow-up attacks. Another right straight broke the wind as it flew in toward it's intended target but nail managed to block it just in time but this time it sent the blocking arm back down to where it had come from. "Ha! Gotcha!" Letuce said as he bent slightly at the knees and shot forward in an attempt to rush his opponent and knock him off of his feet. Nail reacted correctly though and slid to the side, catching the man by the collar of his armor while he passed by and stopped him in his tracks. Reinforcing his grip with the other hand by grabbing him by the belt, Nail lifted Letuce up and off of his feet and high into the air...His arms having stretched out to impossible lengths as far as the three saiyans had known. "What...the...fuck!?" Diaz yelled as he looked to his captain. "Did you know he could do that!?" Karpoz, not looking the least bit shocked, simply point Diaz's face away from his own and back to the ongoing fight. "His power level is higher than before..." He muttered, knowing it was high enough for the man to outrun Diaz's scouter locking mechanism. No...Nail was more than powerful enough to go toe to toe with most captains. The captain suddenly felt adrenaline rushing through his blood...He couldn't wait for his turn. In the background, yelps of pain were heard as Nail repeatedly slammed the helpless saiyan to the ground over and over again. The extended distance from air to ground inflicting more damage than a normal slam. Word Count: 712 Total: 1,455 |
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| Deleted User | Nov 19 2013, 10:20 PM Post #3 |
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"SURPRISE!" A high-pitched, girlish voice rang through the eardrums of Karpoz and his comrade, shortly there after a splattering sound. At the time, the two saiyans had been conversing amongst once another while Letuce faced off against Nail and thus hadn't seen right away just what the source was. An eerie giggle was released once more from the source of the commotion just as they turned their heads. "Hi up there! I'm Lamp! Wanna be friends?" The two saiyans were thrown back in awe at what they saw. Never before in their extensive life had either one seen such a thing. Standing in a pile of mixed body parts with blood pools around it painting the surface a crimson and purple color, a little pink girl stood looking up at them. She smiled brightly as if nothing around her was out of the ordinary, her long white dress immune to the staining properties of the blood around her. Karpoz looked over to Diaz, a non-approving look plastered across his face. "What did you put in my coffee this morning?" In the background, Lamp had become quickly bored and had begun finger painting a smiley face in the blood around her. He glanced back to Lamp and then to Diaz again. "Seriously? First a green man who can stretch his arms out and now this? A pink girl who is PLAYING IN THE REMAINS OF LETUCE!?" The captain was confused, angry and even more confused all at the same time. Diaz said nothing in response. He had no words of explanation. Down below Lamp had stepped back away from her smiley face and extend her thumb and pointer finger on both hands so that they created an 'L' shape, placing them together in such a way in front of her face to mimick a camera taking a picture; moving her hands locked in that very position to give it a zooming in and out look. "Yay! I did it!" She broke her previous position and leapt for joy, pausing for a brief moment in mid-air. Coming back down to the earth, her tummy suddenly began to rumble. The artistic creation of hers had enticed her body to grow hungry, her pinkish hand moving down over her belly to attempt to soothe the discomforting hungry feeling. "I'm hungry!" She plopped down on her buttocks, looking around for something to eat. Just her luck, Karpoz and Diaz had come to a conclusion to confront the weird pink girl and see just what the hell she was and how she was involved with the namekian from before. They descended slowly and landed clear of the disgusting aftermath of whatever it was Lamp had did but at such a distance that they were still afforded a decent conversation range with the girl without having to yell out everything. Still too close for either of the men's comfort. "Hey there little girl," Karpoz said in a stern and demanding tone, his arm's crossed over his chest with his tail flickering behind him. "Where did you come from?" The saiyan captain thought it best to take things slowly with the girl, having already displayed tendencies of lashing out rather quickly. She turned her head to meet the gaze of the two men and once more leapt to her feet, approaching the two of them without fear and throwing them on guard. "Do you have any food? I like chocolate the best!" Lamp either didn't notice or disregarded Karpoz's inquisition all together. She looked over to the men for pockets, even going so far as to pull back at the edges of their armor in search of any hidden pockets. "Stop that!" Diaz demanded once Lamp had begun to search him, smacking her hand away from him. "Ouch! You are not a nice man!" Pillars of smoke arose from the random assortment of orifices in her body once she was smacked, the end of her antennae atop her head beginning to glow a bright magenta. "I will make you a sweet man!" She grinned sadistically before letting that built up ki energy of hers at the end of the extra appendage on her head release toward Diaz. Shooting forth it hit him but did no initial damage, instead it paralyzed him in place and overwhelmed his body as if his own aura. A burst of light soon abolished any notion of this being a playful strike, the purple aura dialing down a notch to reveal that Diaz had been turned into a piece of chocolate shaped just like him; only vastly smaller. Reaching down, she scooped up the chocolate version of Diaz and began to gnaw away, her eyes shut tightly from the satisfaction it gave her while chewing on the delicious treat. Karpoz, although stunned, saw this as his chance to get away. His own yellow aura sprang into life around him and enveloped his body. Leaving behind a trail as he flew away back toward forward base with his tail between his legs. Saiyan pride thrown out the window and all... Regular Form Lamp WC: 843 Total: 2,298 |
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| Deleted User | Nov 26 2013, 07:24 AM Post #4 |
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Savoring every little bite until the last, Lamp slowly gobbled the chocolate man in which she had created. Exposing her blue tongue, she licked her lips out of satisfaction once the consuming process was complete. "Hmmm, yummy!" She proclaimed, rubbing her tummy above the white folds of her flowing dress afterwards; prompting a large belch. Too large of a burp for someone of her stature. "Uh oh! No! No! No!" She yelled out defiantly as she came to stand erect for a moment, another spontaneous release of gas from her belly and out of her mouth slamming her backwards and against a small boulder. Crashing down unto her buttocks again, her discomfort only fueled another series of large burps as she attempted to get back up. The pressure on the boulder from her burping causing it to crack and than quickly shatter. "No!" She yelled out again in between belches, inadvertently swallowing before the last one and causing her belly to stretch to extreme proportions. A sheen of pinkish aura encased her body during her fight with the uncontrollable bodily functions, growing slowly in size the more she tapped into her willpower. With the burps being turned to hiccup, it made it all the more challenging to quell. The aura expanded rapidly, engulfing and burning everything around her until it exploded beyond it's normal limits. Seemingly igniting the air around her, a large eruption occurred around her that enveloped everything within sight in a bright light with a pinkish hue. Tiny fits of defiance could be heard under the veil of extremely bright light, Lamp refusing to accept whatever was currently happening to her. Eventually though, those screams of pain stopped and nothing could be heard other than the sounds of a buzzing aura. Layers of the light screen seemed to slowly recede backwards into itself, folding over and back into what it had once been before. The landscape was once more became visible, wave after wave of the light collapsing back into it's origins to reveal the barren soil of planet Vegeta. Pink spilled over into the white light in the epicenter of it all, which was now much more visible as the bright light circumventing it had been completely washed away. In the middle of it all stood Lamp. Much taller and seemingly older than before. What once was a simple white, flowing dress with a black, horizontal strap adorned with an 'M' symbol was now much different. Adorning his wrist were black, cloth bracers trimmed in gold on either side. Her now fully matured bosoms were covered slightly by a short black tank top, trimmed in gold just as the bracers were. It was short, only barely containing her increase in bust size with the aid of a pure white cloth underneath; tucked in tightly to still expose her cleavage. At her waist, a black belt with a golden buckle decorated with an 'M' held up loose, white short shorts; below that, detached, black pant legs much akin to the bracers prevented any exposure of her soft, pink skin. The saiyan that she had devoured clearly possessed enough power to propel her from the first stage of her transformation and into the second, though Lamp has no recollection of that now. Whatever memories should could of possibly had from before were buried deep within her subconscious along with any other identities she may have had before. Flaring crimson eyes were quelled suddenly as she squinted, her oculars fixated on the horizon in the direction Karpoz had taken off in. Of course, she knew not that someone had fled that way but could see that an army of men were headed straight for her from that exact direction. Taking in her surroundings just a bit more, she noticed a pile of ligaments and pools of blood all over. "Disgusting!" Lamp said aloud, thinking how irresponsible it was of someone to not clean up after themselves. She didn't give it too much though though, as there was the issue of the approaching men. They'd made it to her in no time, stopping about twenty feet from her position. Each one of them immediately pushed the button on a device on the side of their heads, not saying a word as of yet. Karpoz, who'd stepped forward from the bunch of saiyans, was the only one who gave the girl a crazy look. Lamp saw this as recognition but thought nothing of it as her own eyes bore down on each and every man that now stood before her. Unbroken silence stilled the air, Lamp awaiting them to make the introductions. "Well here we are Karpoz," One of the random men said, finally breaking the awkward moment and putting everyone else at ease. "I do not see any threats in the area." Karpoz grumbled, looking to the remains of his saiyan subordinate and than back to Lamp. He noted she'd under taken some kind of metamorphosis but still held a great deal of the same traits and attributes. It was undoubtedly the same person as far as he knew, though the thought of a family of pink demons did not hang far behind in that brain of his. "That's her!" Karpoz extended a finger toward Lamp, who'd crossed her arms over her chest and spread her stand out just a tad bit. "My name is Lamp..." She muttered out of annoyance. It was then that she noticed that each of these men wagged a tail behind them...Certainly she had just overlooked this on Earth? She never once noted a human with a tail before, perhaps these were not the men that she thought they were. "Quiet bitch! Your fate is being decided!" The saiyan who had spoken before Karpoz demanded, his arrogance overwhelmingly obvious. He was oblivious to the threat in which Lamp posed to them. Even as a small army. "That's not very nice of you to say." Lamp's arms unfolded as she spoke, her body becoming more at ease as she took small steps toward the man that had spoken. "Do you kiss your mother with that dirty mouth of yours?" The crowd dispersed momentarily, collapsing back into itself to leave Lamp and the only two saiyans who had spoken thus far surrounded. "My mother is dead...But if she were alive, she'd call you a bitch too!" He, in turn, took steps forward as well. He and Lamp coming almost face to face after he was done speaking for the moment. "Captain Hertz. I would not..." Karpoz began to say. "Silence Karpoz! You had your chance! Instead you fled from this...this...thing, without so much as a single thought of your position and all the honor it holds. Fleeing is not an option!" Hertz exclaimed. Though he and Karpoz were equals in rank, Karpoz running from a fight would outcast him from the saiyans for the remainder of his days. Which wouldn't be long; if Lamp didn't kill him, surely one of these other saiyans would once the problem was dealt with. Knowing his shame, Karpoz smirked and slipped backwards into the crowd. The scouters were useless on her, he already knew that. Hertz was going to underestimate her and more than likely die for it. Who was he to stop the man from making the same mistake his subordinates had. WC: 1,221 Total: 3,519 |
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| Deleted User | Nov 26 2013, 09:56 AM Post #5 |
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"Looks like we won't be taking her back to Titan after all!" Captain Hertz proclaimed, catching sight of the look of challenge Lamp was offering him. He didn't seem the least bit worried or threatened by her, even with a pile of bodies within eye shot. He'd seen the display but thought it nothing more than a surprise attack. In which it was, but the power behind the devious ambush wasn't something he should have dismissed so easily. He through out a mock laughter after his proclamation which, in turn, cause the rest of his saiyan brigade to roar up in a fit of laughter as well. All save Karpoz anyways. None of these brutes would know danger even if it smacked them in the face and stomped on their feet. They were a powerful race after all, not much arose to challenge them other than themselves. Lamp just stood amongst the saiyans, fully surrounded might I add, with a placid look on her face. She cared not for this man and his stinky breath but did however feel compelled to end him should he make any sort of physical indication that he meant her harm. He obviously talked big, that much was for sure, but she would wait it out to see just how it all played out. Staying on guard all the meanwhile. "You scared, girl!?" Hertz paced around, his arm's tucked behind his back with one hand holding the opposing hand by the wrist to secure it's position. His wildly feature right then became apparent to Lamp. Unkempt hair which looked as if he flew a little too fast was easily buttocks length had it been combed out to lay down. He wore a elongated bearded which ended at his belly, braided and tied together snuggly as to not be thrown ajar in a battle. His red saiyan armor, which was the same exact look as Karpoz's, had a few more blemishes in it than his aforementioned comrade. It was apparent he was a man of battle to her but so far all she was seeing was talk. When he came around to her front side again, Hertz raised a finger and opened his mouth again to begin to speak once more but found he had not the chance to speak his mind again. With his mouth open wind was released. Not in the form of words but in the form of every bit of oxygen that was momentarily contained within his lungs. Lamp saw it fit to end this brilliant man's speech by shoving her knee into his sternum, her body contorted sideways in the blink of an eye to afford her the proper angle in which to do so. Had he a moment to do something else other than gasp for air, he probably would have easily dodged the follow up attack. As Lamp's knee was freed from the center of the saiyan's chest so to was the other foot from the ground. She spin with the grace of a ballerina, quickly and smoothly she planted the opposing foots heel in the side of the man's face and sent him twisting in the air toward the ground. Hertz landed with a hard thud, a small cloud of the red planet's sand enveloping his body momentarily. Just as the other saiyan's around the captain went wide-eyed the man was back on his feet, veins in his eyes bulging from the amount of anger he now held within. "How da--" Lamp punished him again for opening his mouth, this time a forward thrust with an open palm pushing the man off balance. It connected with his left shoulder and the pink maijin had applied just enough pressure to the blow to force him into a one-hundred and eighty degree spin. With his back now to her, she applied her knee once more; this time to the center of his spine. Hertz proved himself tough however. Where most men would have simply had their vertebrae severed he stood resolute, only stumbling forward a bit in response to the blow in which Lamp had dealt him. Finding some sense in the heat of things, Hertz saw it best to not speak anymore. He clenched all his digits on each hand tightly, a yellow aura enveloping each. veins protruded from his hands as he did so, allowing the flow of ki to rush throughout more easily. He turned sharply after his last stumble and landed a series of rabbit punches against the face of the unaware Lamp. Not expecting him to recover so quickly, she found herself on her heels. The blows had tremendous force behind them and further more, had caught her completely unaware. She stood her ground though, only stepping back a few steps from the force. This act however enticed the saiyans around her to hoot and holler, providing more of a distraction as the captain leapt upon her. He came down hard and fast, no mercy in his eyes as he slammed his own body against hers. They both hit the ground hard though Lamp was on the bottom and got the bad end of the deal. Helpless for a moment, Hertz pushed up and placed his arms on her shoulders. With her effectively pinned down, he brought her head up to meet his in a violent manner. Repeatedly head butting Lamp as he lay there pinned down, he only stopped when the sight of her eyes rolling back in her head came into his view. An influx of energy burst within Lamp however and her eyes had not in fact rolled back in her head but became filmed in her own pinkish aura. "Ahhhhhhh!" She cried out just before her own ki energy consumed them both. Hertz's body could not handle the power however and he was sent flying backwards into the crowd of his saiyan comrades. Up and off of the ground, Lamp and her new revitalized state scorched the very earth beneath her as she went soaring toward the direction in which Hertz had traveled. View obstructed by the vast multitude of saiyans around her, her flight speed simply knocked every monkey man out of the way until she reach her destination. Reaching out, she scooped up the captain by the neck and flew up with him. Cutting off his supply of air as he did so, her hands gripped all the more tightly as she felt him gasping for air once more. He bit down though, causing enough pain to send a shock up Lamp's arm which in turn afforded Hertz enough time to break free from the vicious women's grasp. "Bitch!" He yelled out as his own ki aura ignited around him, the yellow tint a direct clash with Lamp's pink. That was all he yelled out though as the warrior saiyan saw it best to go on the offensive once more to keep the inexperienced girl on her toes. She was ready though, crossing her arms over he chest as he came in afforded her a successful block to the kick he'd meant to hit her with. Hertz did not end the onslaught there however, as he released a series of punches in the exact same spot as where he'd attempted the kick. Lamp blocked those as well but could feel the thunderous blows breaking apart her shell-like defense, the final punch he threw finally causing her to toss out her arms and send her flying backwards through the air; her aura trail left behind in her wake. That wasn't enough for Hertz though. Grinning wickedly he suddenly disappeared from sight only to reappear behind Lamp as she fell backwards, catching her by the leg agile-like and spinning her around. She snapped to in midst of the grasp but by the time she could react she found herself headed downwards; with the ground fast approaching. Instinctively she turned and landed feet first on the ground, the ground collapsing below her feet. She pushed off just in time, narrowly avoiding falling into the hidden caverns below that were exposed when the rocky surface-level floor gave way. Like a roaring pink meteor, she crashed straight back into the saiyan captain. The two went into a brumble thorn like fight, throwing a series of punches, kicks, blocks and counters so fast that none of the observers below could keep up. Even Karpoz, who was at captain level found their moves escaping him. Perhaps Hertz had become more powerful than he while he sat idly by and let his lackies do all the work? This was a question for another day though, as he found himself dodging the body of Hertz. Lamp had ended the fast-paced duel by hammering Hertz down atop his head with two tightly clenched fist together. Though Hertz had managed to block it the force behind the attack was far to great for a simple block, he regretted not dodging rather than blocking immediately. Pouncing like a lion on a gazelle Lamp afforded him no moments of rest. She landed hard on the man, both knees extended into his stomach causing him to empty out their contents. Along with his lunch, a great deal of blood shot forth as well. Lamp had ruptured something within him and caused a great deal of internal bleeding on his behalf. Rage overtaking what should have been her moment of victory though, she continued to pound the man further into the ground with several punches. Apparently the cavern below had been far larger than anyone had suspected before and thus the series of angry punches collapsed the ground around everyone as well. The large group of fighters either took to the air quickly or fell down into the depths of the dark cavern. Lamp just continued to break Hertz's face into several pieces during the free fall... WC: 1,643 Total: 5,162 [Complete;Ending here, leads into my next thread] |
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| Deleted User | Nov 26 2013, 11:47 AM Post #6 |
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============ Grader's Notes: This is my first grading experience but I must say I do love your intricate style of combat. It's similar to mines but has a more friendly format to the eyes, very nicely done. I will enjoy seeing more of Lamp. ============ Word Count: 5,162 [ + 162 Over] Character Level: 1 =========== Base Rewards =========== Exp: 50 SP: 10 RP: 3 TP: ================= +Word Count Rewards ================= Exp: SP: RP: TP: ================= +Judge Bonus ================= Exp: SP: 3 RP: 1 TP: =========== Total Rewards =========== Exp: 50 SP: 13 RP: 4 TP: Fatigue: 5% *Updated* |
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