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| Raro | Dec 3 2006, 11:40 AM |
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I mean, you won't have to change it, just make sure when that does happen, don't make it sound godmodish. Like don't be like, "in an instant, Kiez deflected all the oncoming attacks" Be like, "The oncoming attacks were feirce, he shot out attacks to block a few but one zipped past his guard and hit him. (or) one zipped past his guard toward Zeik, nooo! he cried, and in a final attack, he destroyed the last one" See what I mean. The first one sounded godmodish, but not the second one even though they are technically the exact same thing. |
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