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| Sapphire Flame | Dec 20 2006, 08:19 PM |
Remember that you are unique, just like everyone else.
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Yeah, what they said. You might wanna fix the CaPiTiLiZaTiOn issues too. Complete sentences would also be helpful, but most definitely you'll need at least a paragraph for history. And no, two four-word sentences is not a paragraph. -._.- Seriously, we need to get inside the head of your character, we need to experience life from your character's perspective. I know it can be a little difficult writing profiles if your character isn't well thought out or you're a newbie RPer (when I look back on Serkane's profile, I think "Gah! What rubbish!) But I digress (whatever that means). Expand, expand, expand! Oh, and make sure your character has realistic flaws. Otherwise, you may be guilty of making a Mary Sue. Trust me, you don't want that. |
 Serkane's storage Stormrider's talons- at belt Blue gem Orange gem Melana's storage Modified handgun- at belt Light amulet- around neck Ezkuro's storage Battle axe & sword- around belt Blacksmith's hammer- In pack. Lillith's storage Mage's staff- On back Ice ring- wearing Dagger- Concealed in clothing. Relkor and Shade's storage. Blade of darkness- At belt 
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