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The loser	May 3 2007, 02:52 PM
Level 2 Posts: 61 Group: Members Member #103 Joined: May 2, 2007	my try at a story! note:() represents yoshi talking one day, in mushroom plains, mario and yoshi were happily picking mushrooms and fire flowers along with other crops. all was good until toadsworth came with a look of worry on his face. "What's wrong toadsworth?" said mario. "thecastlethecastle,wearebeingattacked!" said toadsworth hurriedly. ("slow down") said yoshi. toadsworth took a deep breath and said "the castle is being attacked, please hurry!" mario grabbed a few more mushrooms and quickly sped off. After a couple couple of minutes the y could see the castle in the distance. they immediately knew something was wrong because they could see dark, foreboding clouds in the distance. when they finally arrived, they saw many dead koopas, toads, and many others. they were thinking what happend when suddenly they heard a loud scream"HELP"they quickly ran towards the voice. please tell me what you think plz!
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