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Kiez's profile!; The big man himself, Zeiks older bro...
Topic Started: Dec 2 2006, 03:20 PM (119 Views)
numanuma50
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General info

Name: Kiez (Again, all anyone knows!)
Age: 23
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 130 lbs.
Race: Interdimensional alien-type thing.
Gender: Male

Affiliations

Family: Zeik
Affiliates: He is a good guy..but something about him makes people who can sense auras think he's evil...(noted below probably XD)
Companions: Zeik and Chaos
Relationships: None, he keeps to himself too much..SO FAR.

Appearence

Colors: Refer to Zeik's colors for this bit. His claws are a deeper black, though, and his eyes are a deeper red. He usually keeps his eyes closed though.
Appearence: He looks almost exactly like Zeik, but taller. His hair is more tame than Zeik's. He has numerous battle scars. He always keeps his eyes closed, unless there are special conditions.
Clothing: He usually has a large, flowing, black cloak draped over him. Underneath, though, he wears casual clothing. He rarely removes his cloak. If you ever see him without it on, you're one of the lucky ones.

Physical

Body composition: He is slender, like Zeik, but slightly more muscular.
Strengths: Sometimes he can fight off light. Anyone who is afreaid of the dark is bound to be weak egainst him. When he hears some music he likes, he gets extrmely pumped. he usually keeps something in his cloak to play music for him in tough situations. XD
Weaknesses: His extrme desire to protect his little brother can be a hindrance. Actually, like Zeik, he wants to protect EVERYONE. EXTREME light up close to him or something that emits a special typer of light can hurt him. ((You'll find out what the special kind of light is during the time he's on the islands, I'm sure.))

Mental

Personality: He generally keeps to himself. There have only been three people he's opened up to. Zeik, his mom, and his dad. If you can get him to crack his tough, outer shell, he's really a playful person, like Zeik. He has an extreme desire, one that surpasses Zeik's, to protect everyone. Do NOT, I repeat, DO NOT make him angry! You will regret it...trust me! ((TEMPER!!!))
Fears: Losing his little brother, losing any friends he makes, losing his life, those two types of light I mentioned earlier.
Dislikes: Anyone who tries to mess with him or his brother, tomatoes, getting his cloak extrmely dirty.
Likes: Being with people, hanging with his brother, finding people who he's comfortable around.

Abilities

45 points

Attack:10
Vitality:9
Stamina:6
Magic:5
Defense:
Speed:10
Scout:5

House

Description: He lives where the wind takes him.

Other

History: When he was twelve, and Zeik was five, he experienced what Zeik refers to as, the tragedy. Kiez refers to it as, the massacre. You're going to have to get him to tell you why. Ever since the massacre, eleven years now, he's been searching for his little brother, who he worries about daily. His playful side hopes he's found some hot girls to chill with. XD. he's fought many an enemy ((you can tell from his scars)) just to find out any information about the whereabouts of his little brother. He has crossed paths with a certain "Chaos" once or twice, who seems to know his little brother. Every time he asks, though, Chaos thinks that Kiez is a mercinary and gives no information. He hopes that this strange place he was stumbled upon will hold the key to finding his little brother.
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Other Information: Kiez has some strange properties about him. For instance, he always keeps his eyes closed. He can SENSE, where his friends and enemies are, and still fight better than Zeik. He will only open his eyes under certain conditions.
1. If he ever meets with Zeik again.
2. If he has to protect someone flawlessly, without them getting hurt at all.
3. If he feels the desperate need to look upon the face of the person in front of him.
4. If he feels comfortable enough with you he will open his eyes and talk to you.
He started this trend when the massacre occured. It is an act of distrust for the ones around him. Could the massacre have been by something other than a "monster". Hmmmmm.... His powers, they stem from darkness. He has no idea why. This is the aura that will cause those that can sense them to think he is evil. It is completely black. He guesses that it may have happened after the massacre.

This is it, the big man himself. I know you have been DIEING to see him XD!

Skills:

Darkness Talons: This is basically the same as Zeik's Flame Talons ability, except it's DARKNESS, that spreads around Kiez's claws and not fire.

Dark Berserk: This skill only activates when Kiez is about to be defeated or killed, OR if someone he is defending is in serious trouble. His entire body is surrounded by a wave of darkness, and he gains a sudden burst of strength. It only lasts for a few seconds and takes an extrme amount of energy for him to use.

Dark Spikes: His claws extend and the same darkness surrounds them, but this time they shoot out from his hands and attack his foe.

Aura Explosion: This is ONLY used under DIRE circumstances. Kiez is almost killed when he uses it. His Dark aura manifests into a physical pulse of energy, then explodes with force. After he uses it, he is defenseless for a few hours.

Spear of Shadow: His Aura shrinks down and manifests into a spear. it is extremely sharp, and can almost cut a diamond. ALMOST. He can also throw it, and it comes back since it IS his aura.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

(Avi is the album art for Phobia, Breaking Benjamin.)
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Raro
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That may be a bit godmodish, so try not to overdo it.
Otherwise accepted, be sure to do his level ups.

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numanuma50
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Tell me what's godmodish about it and I'll edit it...don't want to get a bad rep. around here..... ._.^

((Omg I jsut got to lvl 3 and didnt notice!!!))
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

(Avi is the album art for Phobia, Breaking Benjamin.)
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numanuma50
Dec 2 2006, 04:20 PM

2. If he has to protect someone flawlessly, without them getting hurt at all.

I mean, you won't have to change it, just make sure when that does happen, don't make it sound godmodish. Like don't be like, "in an instant, Kiez deflected all the oncoming attacks" Be like, "The oncoming attacks were feirce, he shot out attacks to block a few but one zipped past his guard and hit him. (or) one zipped past his guard toward Zeik, nooo! he cried, and in a final attack, he destroyed the last one"
See what I mean. The first one sounded godmodish, but not the second one even though they are technically the exact same thing.

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