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The REVISED cruise of Yin and Kiez; Let's try this again?
Topic Started: Dec 8 2006, 11:44 PM (95 Views)
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The young servant, in his rather sharp suit, showed Yin and Kiez to their fancy, shmancy room. It was a fairly large room, with two large beds, many a bathroom, and several televisions and computers. "All this for free!" Kiez laughed. He found, to his delight, that a chocolate truffle had been left on the pillows that were to be Yin and Kiez's. Kiez took the smaller bed with the smaller chocolate, to be polite. Kiez remebered, chuckling softly, how his father had always said how he must be as polite as possible to the ladies. Kiez flopped down on the bed, offering the seat next to him or opposite him on the other bed. He liked talking, and was hoping to get a conversation going again.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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"wow, i like the decorations, hey kiez how about we check out the rest of the boat, huh?" yin looking around the room, then turning to kiez with a smile, she then crabs kiez's hands without waiting for a reply and drags him to the deck of the ship, "so where first?"
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=l Kiez, taken slightly off guard, thinks fof a minute. He opens his eyes, and doesn't plan to close them soon. He surveys the surrounding area. *Pool, buffet, croquet, mini golf, gift shops.....hmmmmmm* Kiez thought. "How about.....o cool!" ((What I'm about to say is something that I really got to use on a cruise on a naval ship with my father.)) Kiez heard a motor crank up and saw that two of the sailors were letting people try out this huge metal cutter. It went through each piece like a hot knife through butter. "Let's go check that out!" Kiez points at the metal cutter.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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"cool, lets go then," yin again drags kiez to huge metal cutter, and gets in line to try it out, "i've always wanted to cut metal," Yin looks above the heads of people, "hey whats that over there?" she points to tall dark cloud about 20 miles away
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Kiez hops up onto the railing to get a better look...*Not good...* Kiez runs up onto the bridge to try and find the captain. Wen he finds him, he points at the cloud. "There's a storm approaching captain, we need to get the passengers to safety!" The captain goes to the intercom. "Attention all passengers. There is a storm close to us, and is moving swiftly. We would advise you all to return to your quarters until it has passed." Kiez runs back to Yin and drage her back to the room, not wanting her to get wet. Kiez himself enjoyed listening to storms. The pitter-patter of rain, the crash of thunder, the flash of lightning...all calmed him. He picked up the phone and dialed room service. "Anything you want?" He looks over at Yin.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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"umm mabye something to eat would be nice," she said in a tone which sounded hungry, "if we can how about, escargo?"
she then plops on to the bed and begins to eat the truffle *i hope it will be all right* looking out the window she glanced at the storm cloud coming at the ship fairly quickly.
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Kiez reads her expression, looking deep into her eyes. "It'll be okay. I'll make sure no one gets hurt." Kiez says in a comforting manner..almost like Zeik's. He orders the escargo and several other things for him, and in only 10 minutes the hot food is on the table in the room. "Wow! This looks awesome!" Kiez begins to dig into a huge bowl of vegetable soup.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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"hey kiez have you had escargo before? it's snail but it taste good (: " yin says, while eating escargo and going mmmm, in delight.
the cabin is soon filled with the smell of a feast.
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Kiez picked up one of the snails, and, being a slight idiot, pops the whole thing into his mouth...and proceeds to choke on the shell. "ACKPTH!" Kiez stumbles out of the chair and tries to get the shell out. He manages to swallow it, and leaves the escargo to Yin. He moves on to a large plate of spaghetti. He loves eating almost as much as Zeik, if you couldn't tell. He looks out the window once more. The rain is thundering upon the deck. Nothing TOO too severe, but Kiez resolved to keep checking out there just to be sure. No one was getting hurt on HIS watch. He turned back to Yin, to enjoy her company. He still didn't understand why he was already so attached to her. Here she is, a complete stranger he meets on a beach somewhere, and he already has opened up fully to her. He pondered upon the thought, trying to come up with a reason for his trust. He had nothing. Utterly confused, he continued his meal, now moving on to a bowl of pork fried rice.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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Yin finishes with the escargo, and moves on to the rice porrige, d:, " hey kiez...do you know a person named chaos?"*i don't know why but when kiez is around i feel like chaos is there....* then the intercom came aloud"Attention all passengers. The storm is a quite dangerous for this ship,We would advise you all to stay in your quarers for your safety and be ready to evacuate to the lifeboats if neccisary that is all." *bleep*
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Kiez, with a sharp jolt of recognization, puts down his bowl. *Chaos....I know that name....* "Yeah, I've met him, kinda. We crossed paths a few times, and I asked if he knew anything about my brother. He thought I was out to kill Zeik and refused to give me any information. It was rather depressing, to say the least." Kiez looked down at the table, and picked up a soyean pod. AHe began eating the beans out of it. He looked up at Yin.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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"oh that really sounds like him" she says, then she laughs, but then the captin came knocking on the door saying,"PLEASE REPORT TO THE LIFE BOATS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, WHERE YOU LIFE VEST!" with that word yin grabs the life jackets and hands one to kiez " Come on lets go,"
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Kiez, not wanting to take any chances, straps on the life vest, and hoists Yin up onto his shoulders. He grinds his teeth, and bolts out the door. The wind almost knows him off balance, but he grabs onto the railing to keep himself upright. "YIN!" He calls. "HOLD ON!" Keeping his hand on the rail, he slowly makes his way to the life boats. Everyone else on the ship had gotten into one, and thankfully there was one left. "Alright Yin, you gotta trust me on this one!" Kiez picks Yin up off of his shoulders and tosses her into the life boat. *Okay, she's safe, now for me...." Kiez ignites a Darkness Talon and slams it onto the railing. "NGGGGHHHHH!" The winds were picking up in speed now. *Gotta....make.....it...." He spies a rope on the ground. Somehow it had stayed on deck. He got an idea. He picked up the rope and wrapped it around his claws. He aimed at a point on the deck close to the life boats, and called, "Dark Spikes!" His claws shot out of his hand, carrying the rope behind them. They latch onto the deck, just below the lifeboats. Kiez pulls himself toward the boats using the rope. *Almost....there....* He finally arrives at the lifeboat, hops in, and cuts the rope. He then unties the rope holding the lifeboat to the ship, and they drop down into the water. "You making it okay, Yin?" He shouts over the raging storm.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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"Im fine, how about yo.."then the a series of lighting stikes the boat and splits it in two, a large board goes flying and knocks Yin on the back of the head, WHACK, "uhhhh...."yin moans as she falls uncounsious, heairng faintly the yells of kiez
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Kiez's heart pounds in his ears. *That's....not good.....* Kiez reaches for her, helpless to do anything...Helplessness...he wasn't used to being hopeless. He saw Yin's smile, heard her laugh. He had to do something....He had to do something!!! He frantically searched around. *I know...* He tore a strip of his cloak off and used it as a bandage for her head...*A temporary fix...* He took off the cloak altogether and draped it over her, to keep her warm. He then positioned himself so the wind was hitting him directly, sheilding Yin from the elements. "Achoo!" He sneezed. He rubbed his nosed and looked to the heavens. *Hopefully this will let up soon....* He looked at the now gloomy, wrecked, sinking ship. What was once such a beauty to behold was now as frail and helpless as he was before. He sighed, and fell into an extrmely light snooze, while sitting up.
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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the lifeboat started to drift, with kiez in a snooze, yin uncounsious, the storm raging, but the winds started to blow them to an island an island


with a person yelling and waving his hands.....
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((I'll go ahead and begin posting in the topic with Chaos in it!))
Why give up?
Why give in?
It's not enough!
It never is.
So I will go on,
until the end.
-Until the End, Breaking Benjamin

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