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| Topic Started: May 6 2007, 04:45 PM (96 Views) | |
| The loser | May 6 2007, 04:45 PM Post #1 |
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General info Name:Xavier(elf name is ecthelion) Age:12 Height:5'5" Weight:86 pounds Race:human/elf Gender:male Affiliations Family: Father:ecthelion(Elf) mother:Mary Jane(human) brother:lancelot Affiliates:good, no teams Companions:friends with lazurus; elf Relationships:none Appearance Colors:skin is tan,eyes are blue, blue hair with streaks of silver Appearance:very bored look Clothing:shirt cape/trench coat,pants and boots Physical Body composition:slightly skinny Strengths:magical infusion, control magic and combining it with objects, like weapons Weaknesses:enemies with high health or defense(his physical strength runs out quickly) Mental Personality:tends to stay calm and act casually. He is also very lazy and tends to act in a sleepy way. If needed, he becomes very serious and rough. Fears:not much(saw his father and mother get killed) Dislikes:vegetables, reading, and his old clan Likes:playing, dessert, and revenge(would like) Stats 20 points Attack:4 Vitality:3 Stamina:2 Magic:4 Defense:2 Speed:3 Scout:2 House Description:house was very old with many cracks and missing pieces, such as shingles. It was only one story with no electricity. The only water temperature is cold. Other History: Xavier led a pretty normal life while he was growing up. He made plenty of friends in his elf clan. then the elf clan found out that his dad was in a group that was trying to take control of the clan. The clan then sent an assassin to kill the family. Before that could happen, Xavier's family sailed away from their homeland to find a new place to live. While this was happening, Xavier had thought that this was a big vacation(only 4 at the time) They finally found a house they could afford(see house description) and lived there for quite a while. Then the clan's assassin, who had been trailing them, came into their house and started firing in every direction. the person hurt was Xavier's dad. the assassin burned the house and then left. luckily no one got hurt in the fire. The family, again, went to find a new home. After 2 years, Xavier's mom died of depression and Xavier went to earn a living so he could feed his brother and himself. He want to the mainland and thus started his adventure(thee game) Pictures:none got the elf name from this elf name website |
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| Sapphire Flame | May 6 2007, 06:10 PM Post #2 |
Remember that you are unique, just like everyone else.
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You need a lot more work on the history, personality, grammar, and punctuation before I can accept this. Seriously, this profile tells me almost nothing about your character. You'll need to expand a lot more. |
 Serkane's storage Stormrider's talons- at belt Blue gem Orange gem Melana's storage Modified handgun- at belt Light amulet- around neck Ezkuro's storage Battle axe & sword- around belt Blacksmith's hammer- In pack. Lillith's storage Mage's staff- On back Ice ring- wearing Dagger- Concealed in clothing. Relkor and Shade's storage. Blade of darkness- At belt 
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| Raro | May 8 2007, 08:33 PM Post #3 |
The Creator
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You've got like NO history and the other info is very bare. |
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| Sapphire Flame | May 9 2007, 04:08 PM Post #4 |
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Remember that you are unique, just like everyone else.
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I guess it's pretty good. It's about borderline acceptance quality. You should probably work on it a little more, but for now it's accepted. |
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Serkane's storage Stormrider's talons- at belt Blue gem Orange gem Melana's storage Modified handgun- at belt Light amulet- around neck Ezkuro's storage Battle axe & sword- around belt Blacksmith's hammer- In pack. Lillith's storage Mage's staff- On back Ice ring- wearing Dagger- Concealed in clothing. Relkor and Shade's storage. Blade of darkness- At belt
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