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Blood Overture; Original Fiction
Topic Started: Sep 26 2011, 12:49 PM (774 Views)
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Here's a story I've been writing - it's an original work of fiction. I had originally started writing it at another forum 2 years ago but I ended up discontinuing it. I decided that I wanted to restart it again, and revived the story 2 days ago. I figure that this would be a good place to post it, as people here are accustomed to reading a wall of text (I presume). I have university to do, so updating might not be too fast. If you want a lol, read "A Day in the Life of Ren Field" in the extra chapters section.

Tell me what you think.

Blood Overture

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Update: LM Chapter 2 complete and NW Prologue added!
Update: NW Chapter 1 added!
Update: Characters updated!
Update: Maps updated!
Update 10-11-11: LM Chapter 3 completed!
Update 10-12-11: Characters updated!
Update 10-14-11: Story arcs rearranged in chronological order!
Update 10-15-11: Characters and Species updated!
Update 12-05-11: LM Chapter 4 completed!
Update 01-30-12: NW Chapter 2 updated!
Edited by ensis, Feb 2 2012, 03:47 PM.
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Should this be in a different forum? It's a bit of a waste putting it here in spam haven. It's quite nice. But I'm not going to lie, I only read a small snippet of it.
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Sep 26 2011, 01:33 PM
Should this be in a different forum? It's a bit of a waste putting it here in spam haven. It's quite nice. But I'm not going to lie, I only read a small snippet of it.
Hmm... I searched for a suitable forum, but I couldn't find one. The only place this belings is off topic, unless they make a sub forum for fanfiction/original fiction.

Anyway, thanks for reading (if only a small snippet).
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I tried adding the rest of chapter 2 part 3, but it was too long a post, and i couldn't... what to do...
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Then start a new post.
When I read the intro, I saw asociations with manga: Hellsing, Trinity Blood and the book Dracula itself...
But I want to read the continuing. Have you uploaded this work somewhere else?
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"... so drunk sea snails are eating our life force..."

"Yes."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"They're pink too," Ren Field said, as he broke the silence.

LOL!!!
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That's a great idea. I have some time now, since I studied a bit for my courses. I'll get started on it. I should mention, though... the size of the central tower was changed to make it bigger (800 meters). Also, it's funny that you saw Hellsing, Trinity Blood, and Dracula as influences, because they were! There's also a little of Zero no Tsukaima... mostly for the Academy idea and the romantic comedy.

Anyway, this includes the completed chapter 2 part 3, which as never been released here until just now. The divide is where the line of asterisks are.

Lost Memories Arc, Chapters 1, 2, and 3

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Edited by ensis, Oct 12 2011, 04:22 AM.
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Here's where I'm going to upload the first few Necrotic Wars chapters, once they're done. Perhaps I should put a directory into the original post, for ease of access? Oh, and I forgot to answer one question: I am uploading this story on another site as well, but they don't comment on it much, so I'm rather apathetic to the people on that site. But I have uploaded all the chapters I've written thus far here, and will upload as I write them. Enjoy The Necrotic Wars arc, which is one of my favourites. The ending, when I get there, will be really touching... in one way or another.

Got chapter one of NW up; might have some script errors though. Pretty sure I fixed all of them, but gonna have to double check.

The Necrotic Wars Arc, Prologue, Chapter 1, Chapter 2
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I've updated the original post - it is now a directory to each chapter.

EDIT: Also, I thought I should explain something; you might have noticed the personality shift that Ruthven underwent from before his battle with Mihail and after Ren Field awoke him - that was indeed intentional. The Ruthven with his memories in tact (referred to as Lord Ruthven) has a much more inhuman and indifferent personality than the blank slate Ruthven.

Lost Memories Arc, Chapter 4

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pfffff.... I'm starting to regret making this story a romantic comedy. 2 years ago someone told me to include romantic comedy, but it really doesn't fit in with the rest of the story. And I don't know much about romance. Should have kept to the original plan and kept it a pure horror/tragedy with some comedy and minuscule amounts of romance, but I guess it's too late now. When I'm done with the story, I'll probably edit out some for v2.0.
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There is no need for that. Mina or Lucy can always fall in love with the vampire king (asuming that there is one) along the story. Or both fall in love with him and become enemies :D
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Oct 15 2011, 03:04 PM
There is no need for that. Mina or Lucy can always fall in love with the vampire king (asuming that there is one) along the story. Or both fall in love with him and become enemies :D
I amazed that you knew there is a vampire king! Though he's already dead... He was killed by Helsing and Rinswalt in a story arc that I haven't so much as named yet. The chief villians of the story are the Old God, the New God, and the Abysmal King. More so the Abysmal King.

Actually, concerning the gods, they fought endlessly across space-time. They have the power to create entire parallel universes with their thoughts alone, and they wage their war across these multiple parallel universes. The universe in LM is just one such universe imagined by the gods.

But yeah. I do have something terrible planned for the main characters in the LoD arc (the sequel to LM).
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chapter 4, which was incomplete before, is now finished.
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