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Valentine, Demetrius
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Topic Started: May 31 2011, 03:54 AM (141 Views)
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Demetrius
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May 31 2011, 03:54 AM
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DEMETRIUSAUGUSTUSVALENTINE "Fashion Put it all on me Don't you want to see these clothes on me Fashion put it all on me I am anyone you want me to be" Name: Demetrius Augustus Valentine Age: 19 Gender: Male Sexuality: Bisexual Race: halfling, Hybrid which ever fits. [Demon/human] Slave or Temp Slave: Temp Slave
Bio: Do not dwell in the past -- Brief Past Katherine, Demetrius's mother, was very beautiful; fire-red locks of hair and grassy green eyes. She was unblemished with rounded hips and well endowed, despite her young appearance she was had only just turned twenty-one and about to get married. At the age of sixteen, she had been promised to a wealthy politician by her family. She dreamed of bearing many fine daughters since it always seem like baby girls where born more on her mother's side, becoming a wealthy wife, and living a long and happy life. But the politician had angered a powerful witch, a former lover of his. For revenge, she summoned a demon that was most human looking and most beautiful, King Paimon; one of the 72 kings of Hell with a feminine face and body, wearing a precious crown. On the day of the wedding he was suppose to kidnap Katherine and make her suffer, but he ends up falling for the beauty Katherine's body wanting to taste her...just a little. With the help of Asmodeus, he fiddled and twisting her sexual desires, coax her outside in a daze; where they made love under a mangled and twisted tree. A woman of faith she couldn't believe thing that she had done, but the sex quench her desires that her husband couldn't provide. This carried on for several days, until two months later she found out she was pregnant. Katherine was in shock, for she clearly knew well who the father is. Not wanting her world to fall down around her in pieces, she stop seeing Paimon and tried to leave her life the she has always been dreaming about; she found out it was going to be a boy and quickly named him Demetrius Augustus Valentine; giving him his father last name as his middle and her mother's last name. Several months later the child was born, she birth a stillborn that showed no sign of life, no pulse and no breath yet slowly the child moved. Her husband knew quickly what his child was and caring only about the publicity that could come from this. Katherine felt her life was ruin, she had destroyed her dream and her family name.
A day after the birth, in the middle of the night, she tried to kill the child at the same tree he was conceived. Before the knife could pierce the crying Demetrius, her neck was twisted around grotesquely saved by the Paimon's familiar, Eula. Paimon didn't want the child and Eula hated kids, so she being as polite as possibly she tucked the child into a basket and pinned his name on it along with fake documents and decided to drop the child off at the closest home, a woman by the name of Caroline. She was an older lady, in her thirty's,' who lost her only daughter and was afraid of having anymore kids at such an age. Seeing the feminine face of the child she thought it was a girl. She was struck with grief finding out it was a boy though she absolutely adored him, she knew that one day he will find a wife. The saying "A son is a son till he takes him a wife, a daughter is a daughter all of her life" has more than a ring of truth so that him being a boy didn't stop her from dressing him up in baby girl clothing, but the child grew fast. This continued for six months until Demetrius was about seven years old now, his sudden spurt of growth stopped. This was where it became not so difficult to differentiate him from a human. His horns started to grow, his ears looked a bit from others, and his hunger was insatiably. Afraid that he would be bullied and harassed she home schooled him for three years, before deciding she didn't want to homeschool forever, because she wasn't interested in staying at home forever. Prior to enrolling Demetrius in a school, she did a bit of research. Find out as much as she can about the various elementary schools in the area. Investigate the strengths and weaknesses. Talking to administrators, teachers, district personnel and, most importantly, parents. Ask them about their own experiences with the schools and use that information to help guide her towards selecting the best school for him. Demetrius of course didn't wanted to be homeschooled forever, but after touring the campus on many occasions, allowing him to explore the playground, and meeting all the teachers he was excited to start public school and fast.
As he started to go outside more and became more familiar with his neighborhood and neighbors, his mother seek out other children who attend the school she had chosen for your son and encourage him to get to know them. When school starts, she establishes a routine for him; which included standard bedtime and wake-up hour. It took some time for him to adjust to being in a classroom of so many children after having one-on-one learning with his mother. At first the children was nice to him in elementary, becoming friends when they found out he was boy in girl clothing he was ridicule up until middle during his last year that his own mother couldn’t take it and pulled him out of school to home school him again, now that she was making better money she hired tutors for him so that he could avoid the harassment for cross-dressing. Demetrius didn’t care though, after holding down a few boyfriends and girlfriends, he enjoyed making other question the difference between the genders and their own sexuality, and didn’t really care what other people think. Over time his mother grew older and slowly withered away and died. With no one else to care from his he was taken to the slave market, where a employee for the Temp agency saw Demetrius and took the child to the apartments where other temp slaves were held. It was there the temp agency trained for, prepared him for when the time come to rent him out to a master. For now he was the only virgin in the agency, so he was a valuable asset to the agency; they decided to only rent him out to masters who had other slaves and for other services that doesn't deflowering him. So torture was one, men and women would just want something lovely on their arms or giving blood. Master would keep him for long periods of time hopping to have enough money to buy him, but they never seem to make it to the right amount.
Concentrate the mind on the present moment -- Present At this moment in time Demetrius still in the temp agency, living alone in the same building as the agency. His virginity is still in tack, but they believe that now was the time for the bigger money.
Abilities, Special Skills, Weaknesses:
- Pyrokinesis [Burn baby, burn] → the telekinetic subspecialty of being able to generate, manipulate & control the movement of fire. He can manipulate the flame to do whatever he desires, and sometimes induces it to take semi-solid form as an animate flame being (these creations, though capable of movement and of grasping or carrying solid objects, are not alive and do not think or act on their own). The degree of Demetrius's concentration is necessary to manipulate a flame being is directly proportional to the being's size, power, and flame. Though he cannot be burned by the flame which he is manipulating, he can be harmed by any fire that he does not mentally control. Demetrius must be able to see the flame in order to take control of it. Any of his fiery creations will immediately revert to ordinary flame if he turns his interest from it.
- Unleashing the Beast [Horrific Transformation] → The Beast is an almost uncontrollable force and only those who acquire this ability can gain some measure of control over it. In moments of intense fear or anger it can provoke a frenzy in him causing Demetrius to take the form of a very great humanoid black snake with jet-black scales and a second pair of arms growing from his side. He can only stay in this form for a short amount of time (fifty-six minutes; one post and a half) before his body shifts back of its own good- and that experience in itself is more painful than changing intentionally already which makes him woozy and blackout. [SIDENOTE: If he takes this form willingly, he can last an hour (two posts) in this form, before becoming fatigue.]
Collars: Pink, Red, & Black Charms: ↻ Whip → Accepts torture willingly ☍ Handcuffs → likes to be tied up ♂♀ Symbols of Mars and Venus combined → Trained to pleasure both men and women. † Upside-down Cross → Demonic ☊ White Bell → Virgin Crush/Lover: None Owned By: Temp Agency [duh, unless you have the money to by the product]
Height: 5'4" Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Black Markings or Birthmarks: A light brown marking on the bump of his right ankle. Appearance:
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Dinah May Anderson
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Jun 2 2011, 11:34 AM
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Arrgh. My poor eyes! *zooms in to read biography*
Okay, let's see: In general I think the bio is sound, but I am uncertain about his bursts of growth. Is 19 his physical age, or his chronological age? It might make a lot of difference, as a complete childhood lived out would mean kindergarten, school and so on, which is part of his past you tell us very little about. Also I am not completely certain about his crossdressing. You mentioned that in the cbox, but I'd like to see more about it in the bio. Does he just do it out of habit because he was often dressed in girl's clothes, or does he actually get a kick out of it, or identify as a female?
The demonic abilities seem a bit random to me, but I like how you added limits to them. That's pretty neat. 
What I'd really like you to edit out of the bio is that he could have already bought his freedom. Temp slaves live in relative comfort, but they are still slaves. If they earned enough money to buy their own freedom it would invalidate the whole system. The "temporary" in Temp Slave is about the length of their jobs, not about the length of their slavery.
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Deveraux Dixon
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Jun 2 2011, 12:49 PM
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Love is cursed by Monogamy
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I Really Really Really Really Really like this character (although it's a bit confusing)
...but, could you please make the font like one point larger?
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Demetrius
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Jun 2 2011, 07:27 PM
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Spoiler: click to toggle Dinah: Arrgh. My poor eyes! *zooms in to read biography*
Muse: Fixed that for you there lol >3
Dinah: Okay, let's see: In general I think the bio is sound, but I am uncertain about his bursts of growth. Is 19 his physical age, or his chronological age? It might make a lot of difference, as a complete childhood lived out would mean kindergarten, school and so on, which is part of his past you tell us very little about. Also I am not completely certain about his crossdressing. You mentioned that in the cbox, but I'd like to see more about it in the bio. Does he just do it out of habit because he was often dressed in girl's clothes, or does he actually get a kick out of it, or identify as a female?
Muse: Research, research, research 8u one place said demonic halfings grew fast and stops growing at a certain again. I did chronological age so I did a nice short background of that, included why he cross dresses and why he still does it. So yes is a habit and he gets a kick out of it with making people questioning their sexuality.
Dinah: The demonic abilities seem a bit random to me, but I like how you added limits to them. That's pretty neat.
Muse: Yay! for being pretty neat 8D but I took the flight one out and left the other two again research, I figure since he is demonic he should have some control over fire he father was a demon. demons can transform or take shapes of people, animals, or both. So I picked the snake since it’s associated in and around demons, hell, and satan 8u.
Dinah: What I'd really like you to edit out of the bio is that he could have already bought his freedom. Temp slaves live in relative comfort, but they are still slaves. If they earned enough money to buy their own freedom it would invalidate the whole system. The "temporary" in Temp Slave is about the length of their jobs, not about the length of their slavery
Muse: I cut that out completely 8u bad information modrid.
Spoiler: click to toggle Dev: I Really Really Really Really Really like this character (although it's a bit confusing)
...but, could you please make the font like one point larger?
Muse: Thank you |D and stop being confused and now bigger fonts 8D yay bigger fonts!
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Modrid Brennan
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Jun 2 2011, 07:38 PM
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It wasn't my fault! I thought for *sure* Marie had said something like that, that if they saved and saved they could buy their own freedom... It made sense in my head, anyways. Oh wells >.<
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Dinah May Anderson
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Jun 2 2011, 08:13 PM
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Well, maybe I once said something about temps eventually being able to save enough money to buy their freedom, but if so, we are talking about decades of savings here, not a few short years.
That aside, I think he's fine now, with the changes you made to explain him better. So - approved.
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