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SRSN's fanfics; All stories in first post, feel free to tell me what you think! Good or bad - I love feedback!
Topic Started: Jun 10 2011, 06:17 PM (6,652 Views)
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Thanks, svugirl!

I kind of feel like number one went kind of over-board with the silence and all and that number two is more fun/light, but I'm not quite sure about the ending on that one so I'll might have to re-write it.

I know you're going through a hard time right now, so thank you so much for replying!

I'm not really good at the whole loss process (kind of end up stuck in denial and ignore/suppress) so I don't really have any pointers, but my thoughts are with you and I hope that every new day will be a little better than the last.
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Hmmm Srsn that's a hard choice. I found myself smiling a lot in the 2nd one, but I really don't mind the angst of the first one either. I really don't know!
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Thanks for replying =) Maybe I'll post number 2 and then say that there's an alternate part on my blog in the A/N
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That's what I was about to suggest SRSN...
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Feb 21 2012, 08:23 PM
Thanks, svugirl!

I kind of feel like number one went kind of over-board with the silence and all and that number two is more fun/light, but I'm not quite sure about the ending on that one so I'll might have to re-write it.

I know you're going through a hard time right now, so thank you so much for replying!

I'm not really good at the whole loss process (kind of end up stuck in denial and ignore/suppress) so I don't really have any pointers, but my thoughts are with you and I hope that every new day will be a little better than the last.
Thank you for saying that. And reading those 2 from you was a good distraction I needed.

Yeah, the acceptance part is hard for me, still doesn't feel real. And I get so emotional that I'm having to distract myself all day, but I guess some deal with it that way. Your support means a lot.

Hope to see the car washing suds/water fight and rain makeout in the future, if you remember me mentioning that. You may wanna use it in a diff story though if this one is gonna be all POV writing, cuz those 2 work better with more dialogue and writing that includes both POV's at the same time, well, in my opinion.

Thank you so much for writing, it helps me to get lost in another world. Looking forward to the updates. Btw, I'm sorry it's not my normal enthusiasm, but Happy Birthday sweetie, hope it's a good one for you.
Edited by svugirl, Feb 22 2012, 08:45 AM.
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Thanks, I had a great day=)

I am planning to take a stab at your car-wash one, it'll be the next story I'm going to work on, I just don't know how much time I'll have as the semester starts up on Monday. I've been trying to think of how to write it in the pov style of the tv fic but it doesn't go over too well in my head, so I think it might be a one-shot on it's own =)

I really hope and believe that you'll feel better and get through the pain of your loss. And if the above mentioned story can help ever so slightly in doing so, I will be very happy.
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Feb 22 2012, 12:00 PM
Thanks, I had a great day=)

I am planning to take a stab at your car-wash one, it'll be the next story I'm going to work on, I just don't know how much time I'll have as the semester starts up on Monday. I've been trying to think of how to write it in the pov style of the tv fic but it doesn't go over too well in my head, so I think it might be a one-shot on it's own =)

I really hope and believe that you'll feel better and get through the pain of your loss. And if the above mentioned story can help ever so slightly in doing so, I will be very happy.
Yeah, I think something like that is better with more dialogue. I'm really looking forward to the smiles it should bring me. Maybe it could rain that night or something. We need more rain makeouts, I guess I'm a sucker for those. Honestly haven't seen many which is kinda odd. There's actually a line I wrote about raindrops sliding across lips (PM me if you wanna read it) because I was trying to give a muse to someone for an example of a descriptive rain makeout. I'm not sure what it is with me and a descriptive rain makeout, maybe every girl is a sucker for that, who knows.

Thank you for your support, what you said really means a lot. Distraction distraction distraction is my motto right now.
Edited by svugirl, Feb 22 2012, 05:07 PM.
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Completely forgot to update this thread when I posted the story in a rush this morning before breakfast (I managed to oversleep =P)

I know svugirl posted it in the fanfiction thread, but I felt the need to put it here as well. It, and all the rest of my fics, can be found in the first post of this topic.

My latest (incredibly fluffy) addition:

For You, I Would
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8214670/1/
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Jun 14 2012, 04:43 AM
Completely forgot to update this thread when I posted the story in a rush this morning before breakfast (I managed to oversleep =P)

I know svugirl posted it in the fanfiction thread, but I felt the need to put it here as well. It, and all the rest of my fics, can be found in the first post of this topic.

My latest (incredibly fluffy) addition:

For You, I Would
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8214670/1/


Haha, I just noticed that the last post before this one was you deciding to start this story. :flower:

And it has helped more than you know, btw.
Edited by svugirl, Jun 14 2012, 05:19 AM.
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That's great!

And it was also my birthday XD LOL! That's a LONG time ago!!
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My latest one-shot, kind of a pre-ep to 2x07.

How i'd like to see the I love you's happen.

Waking Up
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8318632/1/

Thanks to svugirl for a ton of help!!
Edited by srsn, Jul 14 2012, 06:37 AM.
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Was wondering why I didn't see this on the fan fic thread until remembered you have your own ;)

Really enjoyed your story - you're on the "same page" as svugirl on this scene ! :D
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Jul 14 2012, 01:09 PM
Was wondering why I didn't see this on the fan fic thread until remembered you have your own ;)

Really enjoyed your story - you're on the "same page" as svugirl on this scene ! :D
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Jul 14 2012, 01:09 PM
Was wondering why I didn't see this on the fan fic thread until remembered you have your own ;)

Really enjoyed your story - you're on the "same page" as svugirl on this scene ! :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And as for svugirl, we were conversing as I wrote the entire thing, and she was the one who helped get me frustrated enough to write it :p
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Jul 14 2012, 09:14 PM
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Jul 14 2012, 01:09 PM
Was wondering why I didn't see this on the fan fic thread until remembered you have your own ;)

Really enjoyed your story - you're on the "same page" as svugirl on this scene ! :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And as for svugirl, we were conversing as I wrote the entire thing, and she was the one who helped get me frustrated enough to write it :p
LOL! You tell me something negative about a McSwarek I love you.....I tell you every reason it's not true. Ahahahaha. :p :p :p
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HAHAHA Too true :D
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New chapter for the TV fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7712020/4/ - entitled the new girl and deals with a jealous Andy.

This story is request based, so if there's something you want to see in this POV format (and I have the time to write it) feel free to request it!


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Jul 26 2012, 08:29 AM
New chapter for the TV fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7712020/4/ - entitled the new girl and deals with a jealous Andy.

This story is request based, so if there's something you want to see in this POV format (and I have the time to write it) feel free to request it!


See, now that's the optimism about the Marlo spoiler that I like. :wink: :yes:
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So it's been ages and ages since I've written anything and even since I've been to this site =O I hope you all are good!
Anyway, I just got suddenly inspired from the last ep and had to get this thing out of my head before I went crazy =P Just a really small ficlet, but figured I'd share it on here anyway =P

Anyway here goes (haven't written in literally years, so be nice to me :blush: ):

“It won’t be not long now.” She says glancing at him sideways over her cup of morning coffee.

“No, guess not.” He says, his voice raspy like it usually is in the mornings.

“You exited?” She asks before taking a sip, still keeping her sideways glance on him.

“Yeah, would be lying if I said I wasn’t McNally.” He says with a hesitant smile and she feels a bit guilty. Feels like maybe she is the reason why he can’t enjoy it fully, becoming a father for the first time and all.

“So am I.” She says and looks away. Eyes going down into the cup half filled with coffee. And she is telling the truth. She is excited. It’s not a lie. She wants to see Sam’s daughter, how she’ll turn out, if she’ll be like him or if she’ll be different, like her. But it also hurts. She wanted to be the one, the one to mother his children, the one to make him a father. And she probably will be too, won’t she? He’ll want to have more children, no?

“Get outta your head, McNally.” He says, sliding his arms around her waist and pulling her close before kissing her temple. “We’re still headed upwards.”

Edited by srsn, Jun 7 2015, 02:52 AM.
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I liked it and I've been reading all off your fic said starting with the links on page 1 of this thread. I have been reading for 4 hours straight and it is now the middle of the night. You should start writing again, definitely.
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